koi toh raaz ,,,,,ghazal,,,,jeet jainam saini

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koee toh  raaz  dil  main  chupaya  tha  usne,
yuh gamo,n koh  chupakar  muskuraya  tha usne,

jeete  jee  zindagi  yeh  naashaad  ho  gayee,
yuh gairo,n sang  millkar thukraaya  tha usne,

khushiya  meree  raas  naa  aayee usey  shayad,
Joh mujhe hijr kee sulli par chadhaya tha usne,

dard huaa  bohat  zaleel kiya usne mahfil main,
bewaffa kahkar jo mahfil main rulaaya tha usne,

yaado,n ka pahar jab bhi  hota mare irdh girdh,
woh lamha yaad aata jab  apna banaaya tha usne,

hosake aa Jana apne diwaane ki kabr par loutkar,
bhool jaaunga sare  gunah Jo aajmaaya  tha usne,
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«Reply #1 on: May 18, 2015, 08:13:08 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah Jeet ji, kyaa khoob likhaa hai aapne, mazaa aa gayaa padh ke...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: May 18, 2015, 09:59:45 PM »
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very nice ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #3 on: May 19, 2015, 01:26:19 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: May 19, 2015, 03:41:04 AM »
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श्री जीत जैनम जी ,पढ़ कर दिल बाग़ बाग़ हो गया  Applause Applause icon_salut icon_salut
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«Reply #5 on: May 20, 2015, 02:16:28 AM »
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waaaaaaah waaaaaaaaah waaaaaaah bahooot khooooob jeet bro
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«Reply #6 on: May 20, 2015, 12:18:51 PM »
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Awesome.
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«Reply #7 on: May 20, 2015, 06:13:29 PM »
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apka bohat shukriya hriday ji
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