mukkdar bikhre saare,,,,,ghazal,,,,,jeet jainam saini

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majnu sa mera  haal huya  meri heer kaha,
mukkdar  bikhre saare  meri takdeer kaha,

dekhte  hee dekhte tod  gayi kasme waade,
koi  rishta na  toote  eysi zanzeer kaha,

gardish main  rahe zindagi  ke pal saare,
khushiyon waali hathon  main lakeer kaha,

kaisi hogi woh bin mare koi to bata deta,
dhondta hi reh  gaya mera  mukhbeer kaha,

mehlon main rehne wali ko  kiya kami thi,
loot to hum gaye  they  woh  fakeer kaha,

kise dil ka hukdaar banaaye dar jate hai,
mohhobat main dagebaazo,n ka zameer kaha,

gamo,n ko chupakar aksr khushiya lootaai,
dard main hasne  wala  mujhsa ameer kaha,
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«Reply #1 on: May 21, 2015, 04:06:53 PM »
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Awesome and Rau.
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«Reply #2 on: May 21, 2015, 05:20:47 PM »
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waah waah waah waha kyaa bata hai Jeet ji, ek RAU aapke naam...kal subah dungaa.... !!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 21, 2015, 05:52:24 PM »
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bohat bohat shukriya puja ji dil se rau kabool
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bohat bohat shukriya hriday ji dil se rau kabool
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«Reply #5 on: May 21, 2015, 08:11:07 PM »
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waah waah waah bahut khoobsurat likhaa hai Jeet Jee, Rau due.
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«Reply #6 on: May 22, 2015, 12:02:36 AM »
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bahut khoob waah waah waah
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«Reply #7 on: May 22, 2015, 01:36:33 AM »
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Quote from: jeet jainam on May 21, 2015, 03:58:35 PM
majnu sa mera  haal huya  meri heer kaha,
mukkdar  bikhre saare  meri takdeer kaha,

dekhte  hee dekhte tod  gayi kasme waade,
koi  rishta na  toote  eysi zanzeer kaha,

gardish main  rahe zindagi  ke pal saare,
khushiyon waali hathon  main lakeer kaha,

kaisi hogi woh bin mare koi to bata deta,
dhondta hi reh  gaya mera  mukhbeer kaha,

mehlon main rehne wali ko  kiya kami thi,
loot to hum gaye  they  woh  fakeer kaha,

kise dil ka hukdaar banaaye dar jate hai,
mohhobat main dagebaazo,n ka zameer kaha,

gamo,n ko chupakar aksr khushiya lootaai,
dard main hasne  wala  mujhsa ameer kaha,






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«Reply #8 on: May 22, 2015, 04:44:55 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: May 22, 2015, 12:09:58 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat bhai Usual Smile  behad gehre jajbaat
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waah waah waah bahut khoobsurat likhaa hai Jeet Jee, Rau due.
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Due waalaa Rau main ne aapko de diyaa hai Jeet Jee.
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«Reply #11 on: May 23, 2015, 05:48:12 PM »
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shukriya surinder sir ji dip we rau kabool
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«Reply #12 on: May 23, 2015, 05:48:53 PM »
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shukriya saini sir ji
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shukriya ram sir ji dil se rau kabool
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