rukhsaar pyaase hai,,,ghazal,,,jeet jainam saini

by jeet jainam on May 30, 2015, 12:06:36 PM
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 1362 times)
jeet jainam
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 237
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
60 days, 12 hours and 13 minutes.

my rule no type no life and ,i m happy single

Posts: 10150
Member Since: Dec 2012


View Profile WWW
Reply with quote


tare diye zakham  abb  bhi hai,n taaza,
ho sakke toh aakar  ke  marhum lagaaza,

intezaar karte  tera  aankhe sukh gayi,
rukhsaar pyaase  hai  kuch pal rulaaza,

jee  lo  khushi  se  sanam  hamara  kiya,
ye zindagi mitt  jaane  kaa hai  takaaza,

nakaam koshishe ye  mout raas naa aayi,
ey lahar tujhse  ho sake mujhe dubaaza,

kabse tadapa hoo,n  ekk pal sukoo,n ko,
rooh sukoo,n chahti  hai aaker sulaaza,

kasme  khaayi thee jeene merne ki sath,
nikli doli teri   mera nikla hai zanaaza,
Logged
amit_prakash_meet
Guest
«Reply #1 on: May 30, 2015, 12:34:04 PM »
Reply with quote
बहुत खूब....

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Logged
sabaa
Aghaaz ae Shayar
*

Rau: 1
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
2 hours and 38 minutes.

Posts: 65
Member Since: May 2015


View Profile
«Reply #2 on: May 30, 2015, 01:51:26 PM »
Reply with quote
 Applause Applause Applause
Logged
Advo.RavinderaRavi
Guest
«Reply #3 on: May 30, 2015, 04:46:19 PM »
Reply with quote
Bahut Khoob.
Logged
jeet jainam
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 237
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
60 days, 12 hours and 13 minutes.

my rule no type no life and ,i m happy single

Posts: 10150
Member Since: Dec 2012


View Profile WWW
«Reply #4 on: May 30, 2015, 04:48:26 PM »
Reply with quote
shukriya amit sir ji
Logged
jeet jainam
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 237
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
60 days, 12 hours and 13 minutes.

my rule no type no life and ,i m happy single

Posts: 10150
Member Since: Dec 2012


View Profile WWW
«Reply #5 on: May 30, 2015, 04:55:17 PM »
Reply with quote
shukriya sabaa ji
Logged
jeet jainam
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 237
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
60 days, 12 hours and 13 minutes.

my rule no type no life and ,i m happy single

Posts: 10150
Member Since: Dec 2012


View Profile WWW
«Reply #6 on: May 30, 2015, 04:55:51 PM »
Reply with quote
shukriya Ravi sir ji
Logged
surindarn
Ustaad ae Shayari
*****

Rau: 273
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
134 days, 2 hours and 27 minutes.
Posts: 31520
Member Since: Mar 2012


View Profile
«Reply #7 on: May 30, 2015, 10:54:42 PM »
Reply with quote
waah kyaa baat hai bahut khoob.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
                         Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Logged
sksaini4
Ustaad ae Shayari
*****

Rau: 853
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
112 days, 8 hours and 51 minutes.
Posts: 36414
Member Since: Apr 2011


View Profile
«Reply #8 on: May 31, 2015, 12:47:14 AM »
Reply with quote
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
Logged
Ram Krishan Rastogi
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 69
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
30 days, 21 hours and 9 minutes.

Posts: 4988
Member Since: Oct 2010


View Profile
«Reply #9 on: May 31, 2015, 07:36:16 AM »
Reply with quote
क्या बात है श्री जीत जैनम जी ढेरो दाद के साथ एक राऊ कबूल करे
Logged
~Hriday~
Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 115
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile WWW
«Reply #10 on: June 06, 2015, 06:44:26 PM »
Reply with quote
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Logged
jeet jainam
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 237
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
60 days, 12 hours and 13 minutes.

my rule no type no life and ,i m happy single

Posts: 10150
Member Since: Dec 2012


View Profile WWW
«Reply #11 on: June 08, 2015, 06:31:33 AM »
Reply with quote
Shukriya surinder sir ji
Logged
jeet jainam
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 237
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
60 days, 12 hours and 13 minutes.

my rule no type no life and ,i m happy single

Posts: 10150
Member Since: Dec 2012


View Profile WWW
«Reply #12 on: June 08, 2015, 06:32:15 AM »
Reply with quote
Shukriya saini sir ji
Logged
jeet jainam
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 237
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
60 days, 12 hours and 13 minutes.

my rule no type no life and ,i m happy single

Posts: 10150
Member Since: Dec 2012


View Profile WWW
«Reply #13 on: June 08, 2015, 06:33:53 AM »
Reply with quote
Shukriya ram sir ji dil se daaaddd or rau kabool
Logged
jeet jainam
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 237
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
60 days, 12 hours and 13 minutes.

my rule no type no life and ,i m happy single

Posts: 10150
Member Since: Dec 2012


View Profile WWW
«Reply #14 on: June 08, 2015, 06:35:04 AM »
Reply with quote
Shukriya hriday ji
Logged
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Ghazals > Topic: rukhsaar pyaase hai,,,ghazal,,,jeet jainam saini
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
April 18, 2024, 10:26:40 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
Sab thik hain? -Charan
by Charanjeet_Kaur
[April 04, 2024, 04:49:28 PM]
Mutthi
by vivekpohre
[April 02, 2024, 12:27:12 PM]
Hifazat - a thriller love...
by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:34:54 AM]
BEDARD - (A Romantic Thri...
by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:30:44 AM]
Anjaan - A THRILL LOVE TA...
by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:26:39 AM]
Geraft - (Sequel to "Beda...
by ASIF
[March 23, 2024, 08:50:46 AM]
Mar gaye Dil- e - Nadaan
by Abul Asad
[March 21, 2024, 07:59:38 PM]
जंगल में शबरी के (C-SET)
by MANOJ6568
[March 17, 2024, 02:01:29 PM]
घर में लौटे हैं तब मिली द...
by zarraa
[March 16, 2024, 03:26:05 PM]
Ishq,.
by zarraa
[March 16, 2024, 03:25:04 PM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.169 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8498 Real Poets and poetry admirer