Seekhna baaqi abhee hai ............................MKV

by mkv on November 08, 2013, 01:52:33 PM
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Dard-e-dil apna chupana seekhna baaqi abhee hai
Hamsafar bin muskarana seekhna baaqi abhee hai

Ghair ki baahoN me dekheN  aankhoN ko aadat nahee hai
Dil hi dil me tilmilana seekhna baaqi abhee hai

Lootkar sukh chain mera de gaye jo vo andhere
Apne ghar ko hi jalana seekhna baaqi abhee hai

KoshisheN bekaar meri sabr-o-taaqat ab naheeN hai
Roothe dilbar ko manaana seekhna baaqi abhee hai

Eik dil se dil lagakar haal mera ye hua hai
Sau diloN se dil lagaana seekhna baaqi abhee hai

Thodi jhoothi waah- waahi seekh lee tuune  ‘Chiragh’ ab
Jhoote rishtoN ko nibhana seekhna baaqi abhee hai
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«Reply #1 on: November 08, 2013, 01:59:20 PM »
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Behtareen chiragh saab, wah !!
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«Reply #2 on: November 08, 2013, 01:59:47 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob ye baaqee to zindagee bhar rahegaa dear dheron daad
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«Reply #3 on: November 08, 2013, 02:09:40 PM »
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Thodi jhoothi waah- waahi seekh lee tuune  ‘Chiragh’ ab
Jhoote rishtoN ko nibhana seekhna baaki abhee hai

Waah Bahut Khoob  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: November 08, 2013, 02:11:27 PM »
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Dard-e-dil apna chupana seekhna baaki abhee hai
Hamsafar bin muskarana seekhna baaki abhee hai

Ghair ki baahoN me dekheN  aankhoN ko aadat nahee hai
Dil hi dil me tilmilana seekhna baaki abhee hai

Lootkar sukh chain mera de gaye jo vo andhere
Apne ghar ko hi jalana seekhna baaki abhee hai

KoshisheN bekaar meri sabr-o-taaqat ab naheeN hai
Roothe dilbar ko manaana seekhna baaki abhee hai

Eik dil se dil lagakar haal mera ye hua hai
Sau diloN se dil lagaana seekhna baaki abhee hai

Thodi jhoothi waah- waahi seekh lee tuune  ‘Chiragh’ ab
Jhoote rishtoN ko nibhana seekhna baaki abhee hai



wwwwaaaahhhhh ..... umdaaaaah qalaam .... ek charagh sa jala diya dil o zehen mein aapne chiraagh sahab .... beshumaar daad !!!!
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«Reply #5 on: November 08, 2013, 02:18:22 PM »
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Thodi jhoothi waah- waahi seekh lee tuune  ‘Chiragh’ ab
Jhoote rishtoN ko nibhana seekhna baaqi abhee hai

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waah waah waah Mukesh jee..

Kya kehne..bahut umda..

Laajawab..Dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #6 on: November 08, 2013, 02:18:32 PM »
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Khushiyo ko daman may chupa liya hamne
Haste huye chahre ke dukh ko chupana baaki abhee hai,,,,,,,,bohut hi umda likha hai  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: November 08, 2013, 02:29:56 PM »
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Dard-e-dil apna chupana seekhna baaqi abhee hai
Hamsafar bin muskarana seekhna baaqi abhee hai

Ghair ki baahoN me dekheN  aankhoN ko aadat nahee hai
Dil hi dil me tilmilana seekhna baaqi abhee hai

Lootkar sukh chain mera de gaye jo vo andhere
Apne ghar ko hi jalana seekhna baaqi abhee hai

KoshisheN bekaar meri sabr-o-taaqat ab naheeN hai
Roothe dilbar ko manaana seekhna baaqi abhee hai

Eik dil se dil lagakar haal mera ye hua hai
Sau diloN se dil lagaana seekhna baaqi abhee hai

Thodi jhoothi waah- waahi seekh lee tuune  ‘Chiragh’ ab
Jhoote rishtoN ko nibhana seekhna baaqi abhee hai

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Waaaaaaaaah Mukesh ji...kya kehne bahut hi pyaari aur dil ko dhadka dene waali ghazal rahi yeh...sabhi ashaar bahut bahut bahut hi achchce hai koi ek sher mai alag se nahi nikaal paayi ke yeh sabse achcha hai sabhi ek se badhkar ek hai isiliye poori ghazal ko hi quote kar dee hoon... Is khoob kalaam par dili daaaaad qubool kijiyega..
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«Reply #8 on: November 08, 2013, 03:47:16 PM »
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Dard-e-dil apna chupana seekhna baaqi abhee hai
Hamsafar bin muskarana seekhna baaqi abhee hai

Ghair ki baahoN me dekheN  aankhoN ko aadat nahee hai
Dil hi dil me tilmilana seekhna baaqi abhee hai

Lootkar sukh chain mera de gaye jo vo andhere
Apne ghar ko hi jalana seekhna baaqi abhee hai

KoshisheN bekaar meri sabr-o-taaqat ab naheeN hai
Roothe dilbar ko manaana seekhna baaqi abhee hai

Eik dil se dil lagakar haal mera ye hua hai
Sau diloN se dil lagaana seekhna baaqi abhee hai

Thodi jhoothi waah- waahi seekh lee tuune  ‘Chiragh’ ab
Jhoote rishtoN ko nibhana seekhna baaqi abhee hai



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«Reply #9 on: November 08, 2013, 04:33:59 PM »
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Dard-e-dil apna chupana seekhna baaqi abhee hai
Hamsafar bin muskarana seekhna baaqi abhee hai

Ghair ki baahoN me dekheN  aankhoN ko aadat nahee hai
Dil hi dil me tilmilana seekhna baaqi abhee hai

Lootkar sukh chain mera de gaye jo vo andhere
Apne ghar ko hi jalana seekhna baaqi abhee hai

KoshisheN bekaar meri sabr-o-taaqat ab naheeN hai
Roothe dilbar ko manaana seekhna baaqi abhee hai

Eik dil se dil lagakar haal mera ye hua hai
Sau diloN se dil lagaana seekhna baaqi abhee hai

Thodi jhoothi waah- waahi seekh lee tuune  ‘Chiragh’ ab
Jhoote rishtoN ko nibhana seekhna baaqi abhee hai


Bahut sunder dheroN daad.
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«Reply #10 on: November 08, 2013, 04:51:19 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob mkv shab, dheron daad....
bilkul sahi kaha hai aapne, kuch na kuch ham sabki zindagi me saikhnaa baki hai....
Bahut umda Sahab... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: November 08, 2013, 04:55:49 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob mukesh ji... waah waah.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #12 on: November 08, 2013, 05:07:33 PM »
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Dard-e-dil apna chupana seekhna baaqi abhee hai
Hamsafar bin muskarana seekhna baaqi abhee hai

Ghair ki baahoN me dekheN  aankhoN ko aadat nahee hai
Dil hi dil me tilmilana seekhna baaqi abhee hai

Wahh bahot hi khubsurat alfaz haiN..
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«Reply #13 on: November 08, 2013, 05:43:56 PM »
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Dard-e-dil apna chupana seekhna baaqi abhee hai
Hamsafar bin muskarana seekhna baaqi abhee hai

Khub Kahaa Sahab Clapping Smiley


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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«Reply #14 on: November 08, 2013, 06:04:21 PM »
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Ghair ki baahoN me dekheN  aankhoN ko aadat nahee hai
Dil hi dil me tilmilana seekhna baaqi abhee hai


waaahhhh



Lootkar sukh chain mera de gaye jo vo andhere
Apne ghar ko hi jalana seekhna baaqi abhee hai


bahot khoob...


KoshisheN bekaar meri sabr-o-taaqat ab naheeN hai
Roothe dilbar ko manaana seekhna baaqi abhee hai


sach kahaa aapne... behad mushkil kaam..



Eik dil se dil lagakar haal mera ye hua hai
Sau diloN se dil lagaana seekhna baaqi abhee hai

nice..


Thodi jhoothi waah- waahi seekh lee tuune  ‘Chiragh’ ab
Jhoote rishtoN ko nibhana seekhna baaqi abhee hai

waaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh   Applause Applause Applause

nice excellent beautiful Ghazal Mukesh ji..... please keep writing, u write very well..

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