Takleef Jaati Nahin......!!

by Talat on July 06, 2009, 05:24:09 PM
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«Reply #30 on: July 10, 2009, 08:55:12 AM »
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aree waah Talat Ji - bahut khoob ... very nicely written. Daad qabuul kijiye !!
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«Reply #31 on: July 10, 2009, 02:13:00 PM »
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Bahut hi sundar peshkash hai Celmira Ji

Thank a lot Rajesh Ji
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«Reply #32 on: July 10, 2009, 02:18:49 PM »
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Hamesha Ki Tarah Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Talat!!!

Ab to yeh Haal Ho Gaya hai ke Sirf Yeh dekhkar Ke Talat Ne kuch likha Hai,Bin Padhe Iss Baat Ka yakeen Sa Ho jaata Hai ke Kuch Bahut Hi Khoob Likha Hoga Talat Ne...Talat Bahut Acha Lihte Ho Aap AUr Humesha Yuhi likhte Rehna.. Thumbs UP

Tooooo Good Dost!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Thanks so much Dost...LOL aisa nahin hai..main to khud seekh rahi hoon likhna  Giggle....Thanks so much Khwaish for always reading and appreciating and encouraging.

Bohot bohot shukriya Dost.  icon_flower
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«Reply #33 on: July 10, 2009, 02:19:26 PM »
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Bohat Achchi Ghazal Hai Mashallah,.


Thanks a lot Azeem
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«Reply #34 on: July 10, 2009, 02:20:38 PM »
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BAHUT HI BADIYA LIKHA HAI  CELMIRAJI....
 
DIL KO MERE ,KUCH BHI BHAATA NAHIN,
KI YE DIL,BIN TERE KUCH BHI CHAHATA NAHIN.

BIN TERE ZINDAGI,YEH ZINDAGI NAHIN,
 BIN TERE JEENEKI,YEH TAKLEEF JAATI NAHIN.



Thanks so much Cara  Usual Smile

....and very nice lines by you  Applause Applause Bohot bohot khoob dear.
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«Reply #35 on: July 11, 2009, 04:57:06 PM »
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Wah wah Celmira Ji
bahut achchha likha hai aapne, dil khush hua
Makta to bada hi dilkash hai, wah
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #36 on: July 11, 2009, 07:48:47 PM »
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Bahot bahot khoob likha hai aapne Celmira ji
its indeed a marvellous creation.
Ghazal me khushi aur dard dono ko
bakhoobi likha hai aapne.
behad hi ache ashaar
awesome poem

Thanks so much Kaash Ji for always reading and appreciating....Bohot bohot shukriya aapke khoobsurat alfaaz ke liye.
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«Reply #37 on: July 11, 2009, 07:54:58 PM »
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Talat ji aapne bohot hi khubsurat Gazal likhi hai,,, Usual Smile

Thanks so much Jiya Usual Smile
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«Reply #38 on: July 11, 2009, 08:10:36 PM »
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Talat! It's lovely!  Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
             - abd bundeli


Thanks so much Babu Ji, I am so much delighted to see your comments and appreciation on my work...Thanks a lot  notworthy notworthy notworthy
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«Reply #39 on: July 11, 2009, 11:54:09 PM »
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Waah  Di bahoot Bahoot Pyaari Gazal likhi hai aapne. ahamesha ki tarah too good. Usual Smile

Thanks so much Divs Usual Smile
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«Reply #40 on: July 11, 2009, 11:56:11 PM »
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Hi Talat,
Tareef ke liye kuch likhu to kam hi hoga !!!

Phir bhi....bahot bahot hi khubsurat ghazal hai.....
It is a simple & beautiful ghazal.

Thanks so much Bharat....aap ke lafz kabhi mere liye kam nahin hote...they mean a lot to me my dear friend Usual Smile
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«Reply #41 on: July 12, 2009, 07:02:21 AM »
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Thanks so much Babu Ji, I am so much delighted to see your comments and appreciation on my work...Thanks a lot  notworthy notworthy notworthy
You're always welcome Celmira!
                 - abd bundeli
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«Reply #42 on: July 14, 2009, 10:02:45 AM »
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bahut achche talat di kya khoob kaha hai aapne...........pad kar mazaa aa gaya

Thanks so much my dear
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«Reply #43 on: July 14, 2009, 01:09:14 PM »
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Celmira Ji,

Bohot Khoob


Thank You Shayara Ji
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«Reply #44 on: July 15, 2009, 07:18:46 AM »
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aree waah Talat Ji - bahut khoob ... very nicely written. Daad qabuul kijiye !!

Bohot bohot shukriya Hum Tum
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