Takleef Jaati Nahin......!!

by Talat on July 06, 2009, 10:54:09 PM
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«Reply #1 on: July 06, 2009, 10:57:27 PM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah kaya baat hai Celmira.. ek ek line kamaal ki likhi hai apne... Good work, Good Creation!!!
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«Reply #2 on: July 06, 2009, 10:59:40 PM »
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Wahhh...
Bahut bahut achhe. Really every word is framed so beautifully, like a garland of pearl...

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«Reply #3 on: July 06, 2009, 11:05:27 PM »
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Wonderful Gazal dear Talat   Applause Applause A++++++  Thumbs UP Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: July 06, 2009, 11:36:40 PM »
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bahut khoob Celmira ji......pahli line hi dil ko chu gayi......
takleef is dil se jaati nahi.....sach me bahut khub
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«Reply #5 on: July 06, 2009, 11:37:37 PM »
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Wah wah Kya Baat hai Talat Ji.. Yeh Mohabbat kahun Ya dard Kahun..? aapki Is Gazal Ke Har lafz Me Mohabbat aur Dard dono hi Bikhre hue hain..!! Waqai Behad Khubsoorat aur Touching Gazal hai....... Bahut Bahut Khoooooob talat Ji.. Applause Applause

Daad Kubool karen.......   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #6 on: July 07, 2009, 12:37:52 AM »
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subhan allah talat bahen kya pakiza ahesasat ko piroya gaya .. bahoth qoob tarif ke liye alfaz shayad kam pad jayen !! waise ghazal ka har ashar beshqimti hai magar ghazal maqta pori ghazalpe savar hai .. bahoth qoob u desrve to be the best shayara at yoindia .. apki ghazal har maqte me maujodgi dekhane ke liye shukriya !! apko shayad acha lag raha hoga hai na !! khush raho abaad raho !!


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«Reply #7 on: July 07, 2009, 03:52:24 AM »
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mashallah talat bhut khoob har sher daad ka haqdaar aur kam daad nhi blki bhut khaas tour par aapki ghazal ke pehle teen shero.n ne bhut hi khoobsurat sama banda hai. god bless u hamesha aise hi likhti rahiye
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«Reply #8 on: July 07, 2009, 05:48:16 AM »
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Achhi ghazal hai celmira ji, bohot umda likha hai aap ne..
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«Reply #9 on: July 07, 2009, 06:30:31 AM »
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Wah celmira ji very beautiful gazal,mindblowing.excellent. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: July 07, 2009, 10:00:54 AM »
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Celmira Ji... Bahut khoobsurat likha hai! Beautiful Creation! Applause
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«Reply #11 on: July 07, 2009, 10:14:15 AM »
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Bahut hi sundar peshkash hai Celmira Ji
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«Reply #12 on: July 07, 2009, 11:46:19 AM »
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Hamesha Ki Tarah Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Talat!!!

Ab to yeh Haal Ho Gaya hai ke Sirf Yeh dekhkar Ke Talat Ne kuch likha Hai,Bin Padhe Iss Baat Ka yakeen Sa Ho jaata Hai ke Kuch Bahut Hi Khoob Likha Hoga Talat Ne...Talat Bahut Acha Lihte Ho Aap AUr Humesha Yuhi likhte Rehna.. Thumbs UP

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«Reply #13 on: July 07, 2009, 11:50:27 AM »
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Bohat Achchi Ghazal Hai Mashallah,.
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«Reply #14 on: July 07, 2009, 12:33:47 PM »
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BAHUT HI BADIYA LIKHA HAI  CELMIRAJI....
 
DIL KO MERE ,KUCH BHI BHAATA NAHIN,
KI YE DIL,BIN TERE KUCH BHI CHAHATA NAHIN.

BIN TERE ZINDAGI,YEH ZINDAGI NAHIN,
 BIN TERE JEENEKI,YEH TAKLEEF JAATI NAHIN.

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