Unhain husn key aasmaan pai bithhaauun?

by abdbundeli on April 15, 2013, 02:07:13 PM
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Tumhain kis bahaaney bulaakar manaauun?
Karuun kyaa? Puraanee gazal gungunaauun?

Jahaan unkee raanaaiyaan muskuraayen,
Wahee misraa aalaa unheen ko sunaauun!!

Padhhuun unkey shokh-o-tarab pai qaseedey;
Unhain husn key aasmaan pai bithhaauun?

Nazar sey nazar aa miley bhi to kyaa hai;
Agar wo hataa leyn, to, kaisey milaauun?

Sunaa hai, ki, wo bhuul jaayengey hamko:
‘Abd’, kaash, main bhee unhain bhuul paauun?

              - abd bundeli


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«Reply #1 on: April 15, 2013, 02:14:18 PM »
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Tumhain kis bahaaney bulaakar manaauun?
Karuun kyaa? Puraanee gazal gungunaauun?

Jahaan unkee raanaaiyaan muskuraayen,
Wahee misraa aalaa unheen ko sunaauun!!

Padhhuun unkey shokh-o-tarab pai qaseedey;
Unhain husn key aasmaan pai bithhaauun?

Nazar sey nazar aa miley bhi to kyaa hai;
Agar wo hataa leyn, to, kaisey milaauun?

Bahut khoob likha hai sir..
tarannum me padhne se iska maza doguna ho gaya..
aaj to bijliyan gira dee aapne..
kya kahne...wah wah wah
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«Reply #2 on: April 15, 2013, 02:18:30 PM »
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Tumhain kis bahaaney bulaakar manaauun?
Karuun kyaa? Puraanee gazal gungunaauun?

Jahaan unkee raanaaiyaan muskuraayen,
Wahee misraa aalaa unheen ko sunaauun!!

Padhhuun unkey shokh-o-tarab pai qaseedey;
Unhain husn key aasmaan pai bithhaauun?

Nazar sey nazar aa miley bhi to kyaa hai;
Agar wo hataa leyn, to, kaisey milaauun?

Bahut khoob likha hai sir..
tarannum me padhne se iska maza doguna ho gaya..
aaj to bijliyan gira dee aapne..
kya kahne...wah wah wah


Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Mukesh ji! Aapki dua hai!
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«Reply #3 on: April 15, 2013, 04:12:12 PM »
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Tumhain kis bahaaney bulaakar manaauun?
Karuun kyaa? Puraanee gazal gungunaauun?

Jahaan unkee raanaaiyaan muskuraayen,
Wahee misraa aalaa unheen ko sunaauun!!

Padhhuun unkey shokh-o-tarab pai qaseedey;
Unhain husn key aasmaan pai bithhaauun?

Nazar sey nazar aa miley bhi to kyaa hai;
Agar wo hataa leyn, to, kaisey milaauun?

Sunaa hai, ki, wo bhuul jaayengey hamko:
‘Abd’, kaash, main bhee unhain bhuul paauun?

              - abd bundeli





Waah Waah Waah.......

bahut Bahut Khoooob Saheb..

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«Reply #4 on: April 16, 2013, 02:28:43 AM »
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Abd Jee Aadaab..!


WallaaH janab kia kahne waaH jee waaH behad khoobsurat kalaam kahi hai janab.. Usual Smile

Bus mehfil loot lii aapne toH.. Is khoobsurat aur dilkash kalaam par meri dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhte rahiye.. Aate rahiye..
Shaadf O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile


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«Reply #5 on: April 16, 2013, 12:27:37 PM »
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Tumhain kis bahaaney bulaakar manaauun?
Karuun kyaa? Puraanee gazal gungunaauun?

Jahaan unkee raanaaiyaan muskuraayen,
Wahee misraa aalaa unheen ko sunaauun!!

Padhhuun unkey shokh-o-tarab pai qaseedey;
Unhain husn key aasmaan pai bithhaauun?

Nazar sey nazar aa miley bhi to kyaa hai;
Agar wo hataa leyn, to, kaisey milaauun?

Sunaa hai, ki, wo bhuul jaayengey hamko:
‘Abd’, kaash, main bhee unhain bhuul paauun?

              - abd bundeli




wonderful ghazal
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«Reply #6 on: April 16, 2013, 06:13:49 PM »
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Badi pyaari kalaam rahi abdji. behad umda aur lajawab. dheron daad qubool kijiye
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«Reply #7 on: April 16, 2013, 08:49:06 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah.......

bahut Bahut Khoooob Saheb..

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Kittu bhai, dhanyawaad! Kam hee aa paarahaa huun! Khush rahiye!
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«Reply #8 on: April 16, 2013, 08:50:33 PM »
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Abd Jee Aadaab..!


WallaaH janab kia kahne waaH jee waaH behad khoobsurat kalaam kahi hai janab.. Usual Smile

Bus mehfil loot lii aapne toH.. Is khoobsurat aur dilkash kalaam par meri dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhte rahiye.. Aate rahiye..
Shaadf O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile




Namaskaar, ParwaaZ ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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«Reply #9 on: April 16, 2013, 08:51:16 PM »
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wonderful ghazal

Loads of thanks, Suman ji!
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«Reply #10 on: April 16, 2013, 08:52:09 PM »
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Badi pyaari kalaam rahi abdji. behad umda aur lajawab. dheron daad qubool kijiye

Shukriyah, Aqsh ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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«Reply #11 on: April 18, 2013, 09:01:15 AM »
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bade dinoN ke baad kisi ko gair muraddif ghazal likhta dekh raha huN.... bahut hi  khoob likha hai saheb, bas maza hi aa gaya padh ke, umeed karta huN ki aap aage v yuNhi padhte raheNge...
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«Reply #12 on: April 18, 2013, 06:11:53 PM »
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bade dinoN ke baad kisi ko gair muraddif ghazal likhta dekh raha huN.... bahut hi  khoob likha hai saheb, bas maza hi aa gaya padh ke, umeed karta huN ki aap aage v yuNhi padhte raheNge...

Taish ji, bahut-bajut shukriyah! Aajkal kam hee likh paa rahaahuun: koshish karoongaa!
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