चला गया था कोई .... अमित प्रकाश “मीत"

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चला गया था कोई ये कहकर कभी
बिन तुम्हारे जीना अब दुशवार होगा |
 
तनहा रातों में सिर्फ सोचते थे यही
सिवाये मेरे कौन उनका तलबगार होगा |
 
सी लिए थे लब और खामोश थी जुबाँ
कफस में भी शायद कोई पहरेदार होगा |
 
सारी जिंदगी काटी यही सोचकर "मीत"
कहीं न कहीं तो उनका दीदार होगा ||
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«Reply #1 on: April 15, 2012, 03:50:16 PM »
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on April 15, 2012, 03:16:59 PM
चला गया था कोई ये कहकर कभी
बिन तुम्हारे जीना अब दुशवार होगा |
 
तनहा रातों में सिर्फ सोचते थे यही
सिवाये मेरे कौन उनका तलबगार होगा |
 
सी लिए थे लब और खामोश थी जुबाँ
कफस में भी शायद कोई पहरेदार होगा |
 
सारी जिंदगी काटी यही सोचकर "मीत"
कहीं न कहीं तो उनका दीदार होगा ||


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«Reply #2 on: April 15, 2012, 03:53:30 PM »
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bahut sunder amit ji
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«Reply #3 on: April 15, 2012, 04:05:42 PM »
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Thanks a lot Qalb Ji
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«Reply #4 on: April 15, 2012, 04:29:01 PM »
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bahut khoob amit
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«Reply #5 on: April 15, 2012, 05:12:47 PM »
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really good ....
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Bahut khoob Meet jee
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«Reply #7 on: April 15, 2012, 06:00:25 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Saini Ji
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bahut sunder amit ji
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«Reply #8 on: April 15, 2012, 06:02:57 PM »
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Ati sundar.
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Ati sundar.
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«Reply #11 on: April 15, 2012, 06:07:24 PM »
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Thank you MKV 
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on April 15, 2012, 03:16:59 PM
चला गया था कोई ये कहकर कभी
बिन तुम्हारे जीना अब दुशवार होगा |
 
तनहा रातों में सिर्फ सोचते थे यही
सिवाये मेरे कौन उनका तलबगार होगा |
 
सी लिए थे लब और खामोश थी जुबाँ
कफस में भी शायद कोई पहरेदार होगा |
 
सारी जिंदगी काटी यही सोचकर "मीत"
कहीं न कहीं तो उनका दीदार होगा ||

Waah! Waaah! meet ji, bahut khoob.
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Thanks a lot Dolly Ji
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«Reply #14 on: April 17, 2012, 01:18:36 AM »
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