न पहचान सका...अमित प्रकाश "मीत"

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दिल में क्या है तुम्हारे कभी न जान सका |
सदियों से जानते हुए भी न पहचान सका ||
 
कभी तुम लगती थी हूर कभी लगती थी परी |
असलियत तुम्हारी कभी न पहचान सका ||
 
दावा तो करते  रहे मोहब्बत का तमाम उम्र |
पर तेरी मोहब्बत को कभी न पहचान सका ||
 
खवाबों में ही तुम्हें देखा था हमेशा "मीत" |
आये  जब  सामने कभी न पहचान सका ||
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«Reply #1 on: August 03, 2012, 12:00:24 PM »
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दिल में क्या है तुम्हारे कभी न जान सका |
सदियों से जानते हुए भी न पहचान सका ||
 
कभी तुम लगती थी हूर कभी लगती थी परी |
असलियत तुम्हारी कभी न पहचान सका ||
 
दावा तो करते  रहे मोहब्बत का तमाम उम्र |
पर तेरी मोहब्बत को कभी न पहचान सका ||
 
खवाबों में ही तुम्हें देखा था हमेशा "मीत" |
आये  जब  सामने कभी न पहचान सका ||

Waah waah kya baat hai amit ji bahut badhiyaN andaaz....daad qabool kariye....ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #2 on: August 03, 2012, 12:32:28 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: August 03, 2012, 12:41:25 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Amit ji....!!!
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«Reply #4 on: August 03, 2012, 02:15:59 PM »
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Bahut khoob Amit jee
Kya baat hai..
bahut sundar likha hai aapne.
Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 03, 2012, 09:03:55 PM »
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दिल में क्या है तुम्हारे कभी न जान सका |
सदियों से जानते हुए भी न पहचान सका ||
 
कभी तुम लगती थी हूर कभी लगती थी परी |
असलियत तुम्हारी कभी न पहचान सका ||
 
दावा तो करते  रहे मोहब्बत का तमाम उम्र |
पर तेरी मोहब्बत को कभी न पहचान सका ||
 
खवाबों में ही तुम्हें देखा था हमेशा "मीत" |
आये  जब  सामने कभी न पहचान सका ||


a.p.m-------veriii naaaaaaaaaaaice
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«Reply #6 on: August 04, 2012, 03:35:53 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause waah amit ji waah bahut achhee peshkash
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«Reply #7 on: August 04, 2012, 03:37:06 AM »
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bahut acche amit ji
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«Reply #8 on: August 04, 2012, 03:54:32 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #9 on: August 04, 2012, 09:53:32 AM »
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Waah waah kya baat hai amit ji bahut badhiyaN andaaz....daad qabool kariye....ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
Thanks a lot Pankaj Ji
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«Reply #10 on: August 04, 2012, 10:33:20 AM »
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Applause Applause
Thanks Touhid Ji
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«Reply #11 on: August 04, 2012, 10:44:21 AM »
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good amitji
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«Reply #12 on: August 07, 2012, 09:50:36 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Amit ji....!!!
Thanks a lot Hriday Ji
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«Reply #13 on: August 07, 2012, 10:09:06 AM »
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Bahut khoob Amit jee
Kya baat hai..
bahut sundar likha hai aapne.
Applause Applause Applause

Thanks a lot MKV Ji
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«Reply #14 on: August 07, 2012, 10:29:42 AM »
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a.p.m-------veriii naaaaaaaaaaaice
Thanks a lot K.A.
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