बारिश-ए-ग़म....अमित प्रकाश "मीत"

by amit_prakash_meet on August 08, 2013, 09:19:57 PM
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सबसे पहले तो आप सबको ईद के बहुत बहुत शुभकामनायें ...........आप सबको ईद मुबारक........


बारिश-ए-ग़म में चरागों को जलाया नहीं जाता
जाने  वाले  के साथ भी तो जाया नहीं जाता


इन  फूल सी कोमल ओ नाजुक नाजनीनों को  
तपती धूप में नंगे पांव तो चलाया नहीं जाता


झोपड़-पट्टी में  रहने वाले  मजदूर बच्चों को
महलों  का ख्व़ाब  तो दिखाया  नहीं  जाता


कभी  बुलन्द  रही इन खण्डहर  इमारतों को
अब दीयों की रौशनी से तो सजाया नहीं जाता


चोरी-चकारी  लूटमार  से हासिल होगा  क्या
ऐसी  दौलत से मंदिर  तो बनाया नहीं जाता


सच्चा  इश्क़  भी तो  खुदा की ही इबादत है
रोज़ रोज़ तो “मीत” मंदिर भी जाया नहीं जाता
 







Baarish-E-Gham Mein Charagon Ko Jalaya Nahi Jata
Jane  Vale  Ke  Saath  Bhi To  Jaaya  Nahi  Jata


In  Phool   Si  Komal  O  Naazuk   Nazneenon  Ko
Tapti Dhoop Mein Nange Paanv To Chalaya Nahi Jata


Jhopad-Patti Mein Rehne Vale Majdoor Bachhon Ko
Mehlon  Ka   Khwaab  To  Dikhaya   Nahi    Jata


Kabhi  Buland  Rahi  In  Khandhar  Imarton  Ko
Ab  Diyaon Kee  Roushni Se To Sajaya Nahi Jata


Chori-Chkari   Lootmaar  Se  Haasil  Hoga  Kya
Aisi  Daulat  Se  Mandir  To  Banaya Nahi Jata


Sachha  Ishq  Bhi  To Khuda Kee Hi Ibaadat Hai
Roz Roz To “Meet”  Mandir Bhi  Jaya Nahi  Jata

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«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2013, 09:28:42 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: August 08, 2013, 10:04:34 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Amit ji, mazaa aa gayaa padh ke, ek dum zabardasssttt likha hai aapne, bahut bahut khoob....!!!
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«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2013, 10:39:15 PM »
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bahut achhe ashaar kahe hain meet ji .
bahut bahut mubarakbaad.Khushi hui ki
aap phir regularly likh rahe hain.
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«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2013, 10:51:44 PM »
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sachayee bayan ki hai  bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: August 08, 2013, 11:03:08 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: August 09, 2013, 12:17:40 AM »
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सच्चा  इश्क़  भी तो  खुदा की ही इबादत है
रोज़ रोज़ तो “मीत” मंदिर भी जाया नहीं जाता 

Bahut Khoob Amit jee

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«Reply #7 on: August 09, 2013, 12:28:09 AM »
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Kyaa bat hai meet jee..labz kam hain tareef me..Bas Rau hi de skta hun iske liye to..happy9
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«Reply #8 on: August 09, 2013, 10:10:56 AM »
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wah wah Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: August 09, 2013, 11:32:51 AM »
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bahut khoob......lajabab.....
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: August 09, 2013, 07:45:01 PM »
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beautiful creation Amit ji... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया निशी जी....
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«Reply #11 on: August 09, 2013, 08:01:56 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Amit ji, mazaa aa gayaa padh ke, ek dum zabardasssttt likha hai aapne, bahut bahut khoob....!!!


इतनी तारीफ़ न करो दोस्तों
मैं इसके क़ाबिल नहीं.....

इस होसला अफज़ाई के लिये तहे दिल से बहुत बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया...ह्रदय जी .....
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«Reply #12 on: August 09, 2013, 08:05:12 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: August 09, 2013, 08:38:06 PM »
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bahut achhe ashaar kahe hain meet ji .
bahut bahut mubarakbaad.Khushi hui ki
aap phir regularly likh rahe hain.
इस हौसला अफज़ाई के लिये बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया हसन जी....और आपको ईद कि ढेर सारी बधाई......
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«Reply #14 on: August 09, 2013, 08:57:44 PM »
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