मुशायरा "मुसाहिब" के बिना वीरां सा लगा ...

by Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on October 24, 2013, 06:21:11 PM
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जबसे वो मुझ पे मेहरबां सा लगा ...
ज़माने को मैं कितना बदगुमां सा लगा ....

वो समझता था ग़ज़ल अलफ़ाज़ है नाहक ...
हिकायतें अपनी जो उसने देखी हैरां सा लगा ...

गौर से सुनना तजुर्बे की बातें जो कहें  ...
उनका हर लफ्ज़ मुझे दबिस्ताँ सा लगा ...

सुनी जितनी भी मोहब्बत पे ग़ज़ल हमने ...
तेरे मेरे ही दिल ऒ दास्ताँ सा लगा ...

जख्म जो भी लगे उनकी नज़रों से कातिल ...
दर्द छोडो   मुझे तो अरगुमां सा लगा ...

न वो आया न आँखों में नमीं आयी ...
मुशायरा "मुसाहिब" के बिना वीरां सा लगा ...

Jabse Wo Mujhpe MeharbaaN sa Lagaa ...
Zamane Ko Mai Kitnaa BadgumaaN sa Lagaa ...

Wo samajhtaa tha Ghazal Alfaaz hai Nahak ...
Hikayatein apni jo usne dekhi HairaaN sa Lagaa ...

Gaur se sun na Tajurbe ki batein Jo kahe ...
Unkaa Har lafz mujhe DabistaaN sa Lagaa ...

Sunii jitni bhi mohabbat pe Ghazal Hamne ...
Tere mere hi Dil o DastaaN sa Lagaa ...

Jakhm jo bhi lage Unkii Nazron se kaatil ...
Dard Chhodo mujhe to ArgumaaN sa Lagaa ...

Na Wo aaya na aankhon me Namii aayi ...
Mushairaa "Musaahib" ke bina ViraaN sa Lagaa ...

हिकायतें  - story , दबिस्ताँ  - school , अरगुमां  - Gift
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«Reply #1 on: October 24, 2013, 06:26:45 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: October 24, 2013, 06:47:35 PM »
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Quote from: Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on October 24, 2013, 06:21:11 PM
जबसे वो मुझ पे मेहरबां सा लगा ...
ज़माने को मैं कितना बदगुमां सा लगा ....

वो समझता था ग़ज़ल अलफ़ाज़ है नाहक ...
हिकायतें अपनी जो उसने देखी हैरां सा लगा ...

गौर से सुनना तजुर्बे की बातें जो कहें  ...
उनका हर लफ्ज़ मुझे दबिस्ताँ सा लगा ...

सुनी जितनी भी मोहब्बत पे ग़ज़ल हमने ...
तेरे मेरे ही दिल ऒ दास्ताँ सा लगा ...

जख्म जो भी लगे उनकी नज़रों से कातिल ...
दर्द छोडो   मुझे तो अरगुमां सा लगा ...

न वो आया न आँखों में नमीं आयी ...
मुशायरा "मुसाहिब" के बिना वीरां सा लगा ...

Jabse Wo Mujhpe MeharbaaN sa Lagaa ...
Zamane Ko Mai Kitnaa BadgumaaN sa Lagaa ...
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Wo samajhtaa tha Ghazal Alfaaz hai Nahak ...
Hikayatein apni jo usne dekhi HairaaN sa Lagaa ...
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Gaur se sun na Tajurbe ki batein Jo kahe ...
Unkaa Har lafz mujhe DabistaaN sa Lagaa ...
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Sunii jitni bhi mohabbat pe Ghazal Hamne ...
Tere mere hi Dil o DastaaN sa Lagaa ...
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Jakhm jo bhi lage Unkii Nazron se kaatil ...
Dard Chhodo mujhe to ArgumaaN sa Lagaa ...
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Na Wo aaya na aankhon me Namii aayi ...
Mushairaa "Musaahib" ke bina ViraaN sa Lagaa ...
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«Reply #3 on: October 24, 2013, 06:59:50 PM »
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Mujhe ye sher sabse jyada accha laga..
सुनी जितनी भी मोहब्बत पे ग़ज़ल हमने ...
तेरे मेरे ही दिल ऒ दास्ताँ सा लगा ...

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kya baat hai..bahut khoob...behatreen...
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waah waah bahut hi khoob Musaahib jee.
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«Reply #9 on: October 25, 2013, 12:01:31 AM »
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Quote from: Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on October 24, 2013, 06:21:11 PM
जबसे वो मुझ पे मेहरबां सा लगा ...
ज़माने को मैं कितना बदगुमां सा लगा ....

वो समझता था ग़ज़ल अलफ़ाज़ है नाहक ...
हिकायतें अपनी जो उसने देखी हैरां सा लगा ...

गौर से सुनना तजुर्बे की बातें जो कहें  ...
उनका हर लफ्ज़ मुझे दबिस्ताँ सा लगा ...

सुनी जितनी भी मोहब्बत पे ग़ज़ल हमने ...
तेरे मेरे ही दिल ऒ दास्ताँ सा लगा ...

जख्म जो भी लगे उनकी नज़रों से कातिल ...
दर्द छोडो   मुझे तो अरगुमां सा लगा ...

न वो आया न आँखों में नमीं आयी ...
मुशायरा "मुसाहिब" के बिना वीरां सा लगा ...

Jabse Wo Mujhpe MeharbaaN sa Lagaa ...
Zamane Ko Mai Kitnaa BadgumaaN sa Lagaa ...

Wo samajhtaa tha Ghazal Alfaaz hai Nahak ...
Hikayatein apni jo usne dekhi HairaaN sa Lagaa ...

Gaur se sun na Tajurbe ki batein Jo kahe ...
Unkaa Har lafz mujhe DabistaaN sa Lagaa ...

Sunii jitni bhi mohabbat pe Ghazal Hamne ...
Tere mere hi Dil o DastaaN sa Lagaa ...

Jakhm jo bhi lage Unkii Nazron se kaatil ...
Dard Chhodo mujhe to ArgumaaN sa Lagaa ...

Na Wo aaya na aankhon me Namii aayi ...
Mushairaa "Musaahib" ke bina ViraaN sa Lagaa ...

हिकायतें  - story , दबिस्ताँ  - school , अरगुमां  - Gift


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«Reply #10 on: October 25, 2013, 12:24:18 AM »
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Jabse Wo Mujhpe MeharbaaN sa Lagaa ...
Zamane Ko Mai Kitnaa BadgumaaN sa Lagaa ...

Wo samajhtaa tha Ghazal Alfaaz hai Nahak ...
Hikayatein apni jo usne dekhi HairaaN sa Lagaa ...

Gaur se sun na Tajurbe ki batein Jo kahe ...
Unkaa Har lafz mujhe DabistaaN sa Lagaa ...

Sunii jitni bhi mohabbat pe Ghazal Hamne ...
Tere mere hi Dil o DastaaN sa Lagaa ...

Jakhm jo bhi lage Unkii Nazron se kaatil ...
Dard Chhodo mujhe to ArgumaaN sa Lagaa ...

Na Wo aaya na aankhon me Namii aayi ...
Mushairaa "Musaahib" ke bina ViraaN sa Lagaa ...

bahut accha likha hai aapne musaahib sb. bahut daad
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«Reply #11 on: October 25, 2013, 03:27:22 AM »
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बहुत उम्दा.
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Waaaaaaaaaaah Musaahib ji.. behad khoob.. badi achchi ghazal se nawaza hai aapne.. sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe.. dheron dheron daaaaaaad... khaas ka yeh ashaar behad pasand aaye..

Wo samajhtaa tha Ghazal Alfaaz hai Nahak ...
Hikayatein apni jo usne dekhi HairaaN sa Lagaa ...

Gaur se sun na Tajurbe ki batein Jo kahe ...
Unkaa Har lafz mujhe DabistaaN sa Lagaa ...

Sunii jitni bhi mohabbat pe Ghazal Hamne ...
Tere mere hi Dil o DastaaN sa Lagaa ...
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«Reply #13 on: October 27, 2013, 02:40:42 AM »
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गौर से सुनना तजुर्बे की बातें जो कहें  ...
उनका हर लफ्ज़ मुझे दबिस्ताँ सा लगा ...

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