"" baati - maati ""

by nirala on January 14, 2011, 09:29:02 AM
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 1320 times)
nirala
Guest
Reply with quote
""
doobti kasti pe sawaar
               bujhhte diye ki baati
mitt jayega pal bhar me
               ban jayega tu bhi ek din maati

 kya gumaan, kya irshya-Jalan
     samajh bhi ja ab duniya
                 ka chalan

        tera mera iska uska
kya apna paraya
       sab dhara rah jayega bhaiya
        jagg hai ek saraaya

do ghoont pyar ke chaar bole
           mohabbat ke
    jee le zara tu ab bande
          kisi ka to sachha
               ! ban ke !
""
Logged
manjum
Guest
«Reply #1 on: January 14, 2011, 09:42:35 AM »
Reply with quote
wah niralaji khub likha haiji....
kya tera kya mera re......
Logged
nirala
Guest
«Reply #2 on: January 14, 2011, 09:53:35 AM »
Reply with quote
haha thanx---
"
jagg ke andhiyare ujjale hain sab
    ghani dhoop bhi ghupp andhiya
"
thanx
Logged
manjum
Guest
«Reply #3 on: January 14, 2011, 09:54:28 AM »
Reply with quote
wah... wah..
Logged
nirala
Guest
«Reply #4 on: January 14, 2011, 09:56:45 AM »
Reply with quote
"
aji aapki wah bhi hain kamaal
   kaise aate hai ab dekho mujhe nirale khayal
"
thanx
"
Logged
nirala
Guest
«Reply #5 on: January 14, 2011, 09:57:14 AM »
Reply with quote
"
aji aapki wah bhi hain kamaal
   kaise aate hai ab dekho mujhe nirale khayal
"
thanx
"
Logged
manjum
Guest
«Reply #6 on: January 14, 2011, 09:59:29 AM »
Reply with quote
wahji par soory ji kam kam kam aa gaya hi.... abhi aate hain
Logged
nirala
Guest
«Reply #7 on: January 14, 2011, 10:16:04 AM »
Reply with quote
haanji apna kaam karke aiye
fir kamaal dikhlaiye
"
thanx
"
Logged
manjum
Guest
«Reply #8 on: January 14, 2011, 12:22:57 PM »
Reply with quote
ham aa gaye kam karke...
Logged
nirala
Guest
«Reply #9 on: January 14, 2011, 12:40:22 PM »
Reply with quote
bhala ho aapka ki aap aye
---
Logged
Matrix Guy
Guest
«Reply #10 on: January 14, 2011, 12:41:26 PM »
Reply with quote
bahot hi meaning ful aur sacchi baat likhi he apne nirala ji.....

kya gumaan kya irshya kya jalan.........

sach jo apne lkiha he wo sab samjte to he but us par jeet nahi pa sakte.........agar jeet jaye to har zindagi khushiyo se bhar jaye.....

bahot hi sundar aur prerna dene wali poetry he sahab...

thx for shairng it....
Logged
Rishi Agarwal
Guest
«Reply #11 on: January 15, 2011, 03:17:03 PM »
Reply with quote
Nice
Logged
nirala
Guest
«Reply #12 on: January 16, 2011, 07:05:35 AM »
Reply with quote
thanx Matrix ji
 and Rishi ji
aaplogo ko thoda achha laga bas kaafi hai.
Matrix ji aapne sahi farmaya.
amal karna bahut muskil hai.
"
thanx
"
Logged
sbechain
Guest
«Reply #13 on: February 02, 2011, 09:30:50 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: nirala on January 14, 2011, 09:29:02 AM
""
doobti kasti pe sawaar
               bujhhte diye ki baati
mitt jayega pal bhar me
               ban jayega tu bhi ek din maati

 kya gumaan, kya irshya-Jalan
     samajh bhi ja ab duniya
                 ka chalan

        tera mera iska uska
kya apna paraya
       sab dhara rah jayega bhaiya
        jagg hai ek saraaya

do ghoont pyar ke chaar bole
           mohabbat ke
    jee le zara tu ab bande
          kisi ka to sachha
               ! ban ke !
""

SAHI KAHA NIRALA JI
Logged
nirala
Guest
«Reply #14 on: February 02, 2011, 09:39:16 AM »
Reply with quote
wah aapne isko kaise dhunda aur pasand karne ke liye thanx
"
thanx
"
Logged
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Kaifiyaat-ae-maye > Topic: "" baati - maati ""
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
April 24, 2024, 07:13:02 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
Jaan Pe Jaan Ko
by Iqtedar
[April 23, 2024, 09:54:09 AM]
Firaaq - A deadly love ta...
by ASIF
[April 22, 2024, 01:50:33 PM]
Sab thik hain? -Charan
by Charanjeet_Kaur
[April 04, 2024, 04:49:28 PM]
Mutthi
by vivekpohre
[April 02, 2024, 12:27:12 PM]
Hifazat - a thriller love...
by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:34:54 AM]
BEDARD - (A Romantic Thri...
by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:30:44 AM]
Anjaan - A THRILL LOVE TA...
by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:26:39 AM]
Geraft - (Sequel to "Beda...
by ASIF
[March 23, 2024, 08:50:46 AM]
Mar gaye Dil- e - Nadaan
by Abul Asad
[March 21, 2024, 07:59:38 PM]
जंगल में शबरी के (C-SET)
by MANOJ6568
[March 17, 2024, 02:01:29 PM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.128 seconds with 24 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8498 Real Poets and poetry admirer