gham dadhkana vich rachya

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ehna udhaas hai man ke main das nahin sakda
                  gham dadhkana vich rachya hun kad nahin sakda ,,,

hun aunda nahin chain dil nu das ki karaan
                  dil nu dadhkaye bina vi reh nahin sakda ,,,

aunda hain khayaal jadon vi paani akhaan vich aa jave
                  ehna hanjuan ch vaihnde ishq nu rok nahin sakda ,,,

tu khush raven phir vi ehi dua karda haan rab ton
                  tainu dukhi kise haal vich vi main dekh nahin sakda ,,,

bina tere jeen nu hun dil taan mera karda nahin
                  mere saahan vich vasdi hain tu saahan nu rok nahin sakda ,,,,

log kahende shudhaai na ho jaaveen kite judaai vich tu saahil
                  par ki karaan is haal ch vi hun main jee nahin sakda ,,,

ehna udhaas hai man ke main das nahin sakda
                  gham dadhkana vich rachya hun kad nahin sakda ,,,


                  

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«Reply #1 on: March 30, 2013, 05:38:47 PM »
very nice
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«Reply #2 on: March 30, 2013, 07:31:40 PM »
V.Nice.
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«Reply #3 on: March 30, 2013, 10:49:10 PM »
thx anmol ji
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«Reply #4 on: March 31, 2013, 01:01:20 AM »
thx ravi ji
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«Reply #5 on: March 31, 2013, 01:25:59 AM »
bhut khoob...
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«Reply #6 on: March 31, 2013, 12:57:50 PM »
thx shivam
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«Reply #7 on: April 01, 2013, 01:27:03 PM »
thx shivam ji
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«Reply #8 on: April 30, 2013, 09:48:17 PM »
Congratulations,

Your work has been featured in this months Yoindia Shayariadab Newsletter, you may read more about it at April 2013 Newsletter - Beautiful Shayariadab. Hopefully, we will see even more impressive work from you served to the world of Poetry.
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