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by komalpreet kaur on August 17, 2009, 06:47:30 AM
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sawaan di rut wang ,
sadae dil di dharti v aaj nammi naal bhar gae.


saddiyaan akhiyan dae hanjuaan nae,
is banjar pae jameen di tarash kiti.
tae phir ehna akhiyaan nae la jhadi,
eh dharti dae rom rom di chinchae kiti.
par phir v is banjar jameen di pyaas na buji,

par pata nahi kidaan par is banjar jameen tae,
tainu murrh milan di tadap uthi.
mere lakh chahundiyaan hoeyaan v,
eh aaj phir jaag uthi.


kivae milangi is nu tere naal,
kithoon labaan gi tainu main.
kyu chala gaya tu door sajna,
aa aaj zara dass mainu..
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #1 on: August 17, 2009, 07:03:31 AM »
WAH BAHUT KHOOB  JI

JASBIR SINGH
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aaina
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«Reply #2 on: August 17, 2009, 11:43:00 PM »
very good creation nice work...................
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Roja
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«Reply #3 on: August 18, 2009, 03:02:31 AM »
Woow Bahut khoob Komalpreet ji
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komalpreet kaur
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«Reply #4 on: August 20, 2009, 06:53:38 AM »
hearly thnxs to roja gi jass ji and aaina ji
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #5 on: August 20, 2009, 07:16:05 AM »
Bahut khoob Komalpreet ji,very beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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jaindost
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«Reply #6 on: August 20, 2009, 09:18:20 AM »
hmmm.... nice words.....
good one dear
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komalpreet kaur
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«Reply #7 on: August 21, 2009, 07:07:17 AM »
thnxs jaindost ji and madhuwesh ji
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