.......SAAWAN AAYA.......

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«Reply #15 on: November 27, 2005, 12:54:25 PM »
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kaya khoob saba ji...lovely....

akhiyon se pee raha hoon
mausam badal na jaaye,
jhukaao na tum aankhein
kahin raat dhhal na jaaye.


Harsh Ji ..... its really marvelous

Meh ko chhalakna hai
Raat ko to dhalna hai
Kare kitni bhi koshish
Mausam ko to badalna hai tongue3
ahaaaa...bahoot badia saba ji

Ittefaakan main pee leta hoon
Ehtiyaatan main pee leta hoon
Jab daaman se roothein khushiyaan
Intkaaman main pee leta hoon
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«Reply #16 on: November 27, 2005, 01:05:38 PM »
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Barsa jo meha uski aankho se
Hone lagi nafrat in barsaato se
Saawan ke baadlo ne ajab aag lagayi
uth rahi hai chingariya si ab saanso se
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«Reply #17 on: November 27, 2005, 01:49:35 PM »
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Barsa jo meha uski aankho se
Hone lagi nafrat in barsaato se
Saawan ke baadlo ne ajab aag lagayi
uth rahi hai chingariya si ab saanso se
Rok lo in saanso ko kahin sailaab ban na  jaaye
Zabt ker lo aahon ko kahin maosam badal na jaaye
neend bhi ab aate hue katraayegi ai saahil
dard ko sambaal lo kahin ye mom sa pighal na jaaye.
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«Reply #18 on: November 28, 2005, 08:27:10 PM »
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very very nice  :lol:  :lol:
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«Reply #19 on: November 28, 2005, 08:54:54 PM »
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Good going saba and Harash!!
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«Reply #20 on: December 11, 2005, 07:35:45 PM »
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Barsa jo meha uski aankho se
Hone lagi nafrat in barsaato se
Saawan ke baadlo ne ajab aag lagayi
uth rahi hai chingariya si ab saanso se
Rok lo in saanso ko kahin sailaab ban na  jaaye
Zabt ker lo aahon ko kahin maosam badal na jaaye
neend bhi ab aate hue katraayegi ai saahil
dard ko sambaal lo kahin ye mom sa pighal na jaaye.


Thank you Captainyr & Pooja

Harsh Ji ..... Saba is back again...... Usual Smile

Rok liya gar in saanso ko
Barsaat ruk na jaaye
Dard ko jo sambhal liya
Har baat ruk na jaaye
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«Reply #21 on: December 12, 2005, 05:30:36 PM »
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ahaa....aap aa gayeein....Achanak gayab hi ho gayeein thien aap ....achha laga aap ko phir dekh ker....

Tooti hi kashti dole re sahil
ab man kya kya bole re
ye kaisi insa ki basti
jo insa ko tole re
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«Reply #22 on: December 13, 2005, 07:53:42 AM »
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dil khayalon se kab behlta hai
raat bhar kerwatein badalta hai
lagta hai dost ruk gayein saanse,
Dard jab mom sa pighalta hai.
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«Reply #23 on: December 13, 2005, 08:14:22 PM »
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Waah Waah

Prem ki kya hai paribhasha
Dil me janam leti hai ek aasha
Dard deti hai sada aur hansti hai
hum ko de kar ek abhilasha

Harash ji galti huyi ho to sahi kar dijiye...
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«Reply #24 on: December 14, 2005, 06:19:24 AM »
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waah kya khoob....

kya doondenge galtiyaan teri tehreer se,
har simt mili hai wafa humein teri dehleez se.
har mehfil main tum nibhaoge wafa ye hai aasha
Yahi hai dard-e-gum our prem ki Paribasha.
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«Reply #25 on: December 14, 2005, 06:34:44 AM »
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Thank you :oops:

Dard mila zamane se koi baat nahi
Woh nikla bewafa koi baat nahi
Hum ne kiya hai intezar bheegi raaton me
Raaiga gaya jo intezar to koi baat nahi
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«Reply #26 on: December 14, 2005, 06:51:44 AM »
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bahoot achhay..saba ji....is tarah na kero parda..phizaan achhi hai..kya der hai tumeh ...phuhaar kachhi hai?


umeed kyuin kero wafa, be-wafa se kabhi
is zamane main be-wafa toh hote hain sabhi,
Intzaar kerne ka bhi ik andaaz tumne paya hai,
Lagta hai teri zindagi main Ek be-wafa ka hi saya hai.
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«Reply #27 on: December 14, 2005, 07:49:47 AM »
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Too good Harash Ji

Wafa aur bewafa ki baat nahi
Gum yeh hai koi ab saath nahi
Woh utra boondo ki tarah dil me
Aisi phir dekhi kabhi barsat nahi
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«Reply #28 on: December 14, 2005, 06:58:31 PM »
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bahoot achhay saba ji...

kyuin kerte ho yuin hi gum,
ki koi ab tere saath nahi,
Fikra toh kero ab uska
jo ab hai tere saath yahin.
jo utra boond ki tarah tere dil main yuin hi
woh abas paani hai barsaat nahi
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«Reply #29 on: December 17, 2005, 10:12:34 AM »
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Kya baat hai...... Very good reply


Woh paani sahi mera arman hai
Mere khoon-e-jigar ki pehchan hai
Kahu kya mai ab aap se SABA
Woh insaa.n nahi woh meri jaan hai
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