Barsey saawan

by abdbundeli on July 07, 2009, 05:38:45 PM
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Barsey saawan, beejuree
Damkey aathou yaam!
Tarhkey ghan, darpey jiyaa,
Aaou ab Ghan Shyaam!!
      
        - 'Ramwatiya'

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«Reply #1 on: July 07, 2009, 08:01:55 PM »
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kya baat hai  abdji....

barsey saawan-tarse mann,
rut milan ki aayi re.
chamke beejuree-tarfe jiya
aaeo na ab tak ghan shyam re.
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«Reply #2 on: July 07, 2009, 08:04:17 PM »
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Wah waaah....  Nice lines Uncle ji and Cara ji  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #3 on: July 07, 2009, 08:13:15 PM »
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kya baat hai  abdji....

barsey saawan-tarse mann,
rut milan ki aayi re.
chamke beejuree-tarfe jiya
aaeo na ab tak ghan shyam re.

Ab, sakhi, wo aataa naheen;
Har ritu jaatee reet!
Phir, yah saawan bhi, kaheen
Yuun hee jaaya na beet?

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«Reply #4 on: July 07, 2009, 08:14:29 PM »
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Wah waaah....  Nice lines Uncle ji and Cara ji  Thumbs UP
Thanks Roja!
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«Reply #5 on: July 07, 2009, 08:58:52 PM »
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bahoot Khoob ABD Ji..

Barsha Sawan rimjim rimjim
Jab shyam more ghar aayeo re
Naachan laga tan man mora
jo pyaar se mora naam pukare re
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«Reply #6 on: July 08, 2009, 04:37:19 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Abd ji. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: July 08, 2009, 04:40:55 AM »
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Good work Abd ji and Sophi
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«Reply #8 on: July 08, 2009, 07:46:27 AM »
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Bahut khoob, Abd Ji! Applause


Sophi Ji.. Aapne bhi bahut achha likha hai! Applause
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«Reply #9 on: July 08, 2009, 12:30:34 PM »
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bahoot Khoob ABD Ji..

Barsha Sawan rimjim rimjim
Jab shyam more ghar aayeo re
Naachan laga tan man mora
jo pyaar se mora naam pukare re

Kyaa kahney?

Khushnaseeb ho, jo tumhain
Milaa piyaa kaa pyaar!
Paayaa jo, loutaa diyaa;
Chhorhaa kuchh na udhaar!

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«Reply #10 on: July 08, 2009, 12:32:55 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob ABD ji

Mila mujhe pyaar piya ka
Man mea umaang jagi hai
man man Muskaaye Piya
dekho kesi agan lagi hai
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«Reply #11 on: July 08, 2009, 12:35:07 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Abd ji. Applause Applause Applause
Good work Abd ji and Sophi
Thanks Madhu ji/ Pooja ji!
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Bahut khoob, Abd Ji! Applause


Sophi Ji.. Aapne bhi bahut achha likha hai! Applause
Thanks Deepati!
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«Reply #13 on: July 08, 2009, 12:43:16 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob ABD ji

Mila mujhe pyaar piya ka
Man mea umaang jagi hai
man man Muskaaye Piya
dekho kesi agan lagi hai

Shukriyah Sophi ji!

Saawan mein bujh jaayegee,
Saaree jaltee aag!
Dono ghan# hain: deykhnaa,
Door na jaayen bhaag!!

# Eik hain ghan (yaani baadal), aur doosarey ghan(Shyam)
yaani 'Piya'!

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«Reply #14 on: July 08, 2009, 01:43:19 PM »
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Wow again very Nice Abd Ji...

Dekhan lagi mori ankhiyan
piya ji se milan ki raat
Dheere dheere bas gai dil mea
Piya ji ki sneh bhari baat
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