Badli mein aftaab nikla hai

by Qais on September 26, 2011, 12:45:58 PM
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Jab se uspar shabab nikla hai
meri  jaan ka azaab nikla hai

Mere  seene  mein kaante  chubhte hain
Pados mein jab se  gulaab  nikla hai

Dhoop  samjhun  ki  chandni  isko
Badli  mein  aftaab  nikla  hai

Dekhein  school  jaaye  ya  picture
ghar  se  lekar  kitaab  nikla  hai

Naujawaan  bachche  ghar  mein rakhyega
aaj  woh   be-naqaab   nikla   hai

QAIS  teri talash mein Laila  ka  baap
Ghussay  mein hokar  kabaab  nikla  hai
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«Reply #1 on: September 26, 2011, 02:44:32 PM »
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waaaah ,,,,daaad daaad daaad ,,,,,hajir hai janab bahut hi khub likha hai
Jab se uspar shabab nikla hai
meri  jaan ka azaab nikla hai

Mere  seene  mein kaante  chubhte hain
Pados mein jab se  gulaab  nikla hai

Dhoop  samjhun  ki  chandni  isko
Badli  mein  aftaab  nikla  hai

Dekhein  school  jaaye  ya  picture
ghar  se  lekar  kitaab  nikla  hai

Naujawaan  bachche  ghar  mein rakhyega
aaj  woh   be-naqaab   nikla   hai

QAIS  teri talash mein Laila  ka  baap
Ghussay  mein hokar  kabaab  nikla  hai
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«Reply #2 on: September 27, 2011, 05:37:22 AM »
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Qais Sahaab Aadaab~

Bahut khoob janab,
Behad achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne.. Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe.. par hume yeH ashaar
behad khoob lage...

Usual Smile

Tah e dil se daad O mubarakabad kabul kijiye.
Likhate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye.
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile


Jab se uspar shabab nikla hai
meri  jaan ka azaab nikla hai

Mere  seene  mein kaante  chubhte hain
Pados mein jab se  gulaab  nikla hai

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«Reply #3 on: September 27, 2011, 08:37:51 AM »
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Jab se uspar shabab nikla hai
meri  jaan ka azaab nikla hai

Mere  seene  mein kaante  chubhte hain
Pados mein jab se  gulaab  nikla hai

Dhoop  samjhun  ki  chandni  isko
Badli  mein  aftaab  nikla  hai

Dekhein  school  jaaye  ya  picture
ghar  se  lekar  kitaab  nikla  hai

Naujawaan  bachche  ghar  mein rakhyega
aaj  woh   be-naqaab   nikla   hai

QAIS  teri talash mein Laila  ka  baap
Ghussay  mein hokar  kabaab  nikla  hai








Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:apka andaaz lajawaab nikla hai
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«Reply #4 on: September 27, 2011, 09:37:01 AM »
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Bahut khoob,Qais saheb.Achaa kiya naujawaan bachon ko khatre se aagah kar diya.Bahut achhe mazahiya ashaar hain.Meri taraf se daad...Hasan
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«Reply #5 on: September 27, 2011, 02:48:26 PM »
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Sunildehgawaniji,adab.aapki hausla afzai ka bahut shukria.
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«Reply #6 on: September 27, 2011, 02:51:35 PM »
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Parwaz ji.aapko ashar pasand aaye.meri hausla afzai k lye shukrguzar hoon.
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«Reply #7 on: September 27, 2011, 03:55:39 PM »
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tah-e-dil addab bahi jaan ,,,,bahut hi nayab raha apka ,kalam
Sunildehgawaniji,adab.aapki hausla afzai ka bahut shukria.
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«Reply #8 on: September 28, 2011, 03:20:00 AM »
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sunil bhai bahut bahut shukria.
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«Reply #9 on: September 28, 2011, 03:21:40 AM »
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Shebaji,hausla afzai k lye shukria.
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«Reply #10 on: September 28, 2011, 06:36:30 PM »
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siddiqi saheb,aapne itne achhe alfaaz mein himmat afzai ki hai.kis zaban se shukrya kahun.duaon mein yaad rakhyega.
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«Reply #11 on: November 22, 2011, 11:32:40 AM »
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Jab se uspar shabab nikla hai
meri  jaan ka azaab nikla hai

Mere  seene  mein kaante  chubhte hain
Pados mein jab se  gulaab  nikla hai

Dhoop  samjhun  ki  chandni  isko
Badli  mein  aftaab  nikla  hai

Dekhein  school  jaaye  ya  picture
ghar  se  lekar  kitaab  nikla  hai

Naujawaan  bachche  ghar  mein rakhyega
aaj  woh   be-naqaab   nikla   hai

QAIS  teri talash mein Laila  ka  baap
Ghussay  mein hokar  kabaab  nikla  hai


               pade joote jo hamein aaj laila ke baap ke,
               kya khoob mohbbat har taraf se behisaab nikla hai.




  waaaaaaaaaaaaah Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #12 on: November 23, 2011, 04:07:35 PM »
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adil bhai,bahut shukriya.aap bhi wahaan thhe ye jaan kar hausle aur bhi buland ho gaye.
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«Reply #13 on: November 27, 2011, 10:15:14 AM »
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Jab se uspar shabab nikla hai
meri  jaan ka azaab nikla hai

Mere  seene  mein kaante  chubhte hain
Pados mein jab se  gulaab  nikla hai

Dhoop  samjhun  ki  chandni  isko
Badli  mein  aftaab  nikla  hai

Dekhein  school  jaaye  ya  picture
ghar  se  lekar  kitaab  nikla  hai

Naujawaan  bachche  ghar  mein rakhyega
aaj  woh   be-naqaab   nikla   hai

QAIS  teri talash mein Laila  ka  baap
Ghussay  mein hokar  kabaab  nikla  hai

mohabbat ka maza aise asaani se nahin milta.acha tajurba hai
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«Reply #14 on: November 30, 2011, 11:59:01 AM »
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wah...kuch aisa padhne ko milta hai to maza aa jata hai

bahut hi badhya Qais ji
khaas ker ye line

dekhiye school jaye ya picture
gher se leker kitaab nikla hai
badhya hai

hum bhi kuch likhna chahte hai

ujale me pakde gaye range haatho
aaj raat yaha mahtaab nkla hai

sambhalo apna "Taj" mumbai walo
AK-47 leker Qasab nikla hai

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