"" Muuh chipana na hua ""

by nirala on January 30, 2011, 01:48:26 PM
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aana to tha laut kar
koi bahana na hua

nibhana to tha waada bhi
muh chipana na hua

karmo ke bandhan me bandhe the
rah guzarna na hua

kuch chhod gaya tha piche
kabhi sametna na hua

imaan ko rakh taak par
daulat kamana na hua

sah kar sitam jamaane ke bhi
aansu bahana na hua

andhere me bhatak gaya
ab rasta dikhana na hua

pahuch kar manzil par fisal gaya
khud ko sambhalna na hua

kaise laut aata Nir
uska bulaana bhi na hua

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«Reply #1 on: January 30, 2011, 02:33:52 PM »
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wah waah Nirala ji bahut khoob likha hai
mazaa aa gaya. likhte rahiye,
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«Reply #2 on: January 30, 2011, 05:13:40 PM »
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thanx Suresh ji
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«Reply #3 on: January 30, 2011, 05:16:30 PM »
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mast mast likha hai nirala mastana ji..maza aaya ek flow me ise padhkar...

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«Reply #4 on: January 30, 2011, 05:26:04 PM »
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inayat aapki Mam
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thanx
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«Reply #5 on: January 31, 2011, 10:14:47 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: January 31, 2011, 07:34:10 PM »
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aana to tha laut kar
koi bahana na hua

nibhana to tha waada bhi
muh chipana na hua

karmo ke bandhan me bandhe the
rah guzarna na hua

kuch chhod gaya tha piche
kabhi sametna na hua

imaan ko rakh taak par
daulat kamana na hua

sah kar sitam jamaane ke bhi
aansu bahana na hua

andhere me bhatak gaya
ab rasta dikhana na hua

pahuch kar manzil par fisal gaya
khud ko sambhalna na hua

kaise laut aata Nir
uska bulaana bhi na hua

Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile

Bahut Khoooooooooooooooooooob ........... !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #7 on: February 02, 2011, 07:06:34 PM »
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Bahut Khub Nirala JI
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«Reply #9 on: February 07, 2011, 03:50:41 AM »
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kishan ji Anshumali ji Rishi ji aur Romeo ji ---aap sabka bahut bahut Thanx
aaplogo ne saraha mere nakaam lekhni ko Usual Smile
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