agar tum haqeekat mein hota....

by anitha on October 15, 2005, 08:44:07 PM
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Qudrath ke karishmon mein agar raat na hoti
Qwaabon mein bhi phir unsse mulaqaat na hoti

kuch lamhe hi sahi par karaar aati hai
un lamhon mein hume apne par guroor aati hai

un haathon ka sparsh reh rehkar yaad aati hai
aankh kulti hai phir sone ko jee chahtha hai

e-kaash ye zindagi mere bus mein hota
tho qwaabon mein hi nahi tum sach main mere hote

har lamha tumhe dekhti
phir sone ki nahi jaagne ki tammanna karthi

par haqeekat mein ye sirf ek aas ho
sach mein nahi bus tum mere sapno mere saath ho

par sukoon hai mujhe ki saath hai tu mere
is dil ke paas hai tu-shaam-savere!!![/color][/color]
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«Reply #1 on: October 15, 2005, 08:54:18 PM »
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wah!!!!!!!!!!!  very  Nice  Anitha.......ur  welcome  to "Yoindia"
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«Reply #2 on: October 15, 2005, 09:09:06 PM »
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shukriya waheed ji

before i got registered to this site, i have read some of the shayari's.
and fortunately ur shayari was the first one...i have read the one that was posted in the forum of shayari-ye-dard

i have read such a nice poetic pieces from everyone here that i have immediately registered myself
it is been really nice experience since i have joined here
hope this goes on well like this forever.

qudha se hum yehi duaa karte hain ki hum apne taraf se jo bhi ho sake likhte rahain,
aur aap sab logoan ki saath hamesha hamare saath rahain

bahut bahut shukriyaa aap sab logoan ka jo mujhe itna prothsaahan (encouragement) de rahain hai likhne mein

thanks a lot
and i hope i will continue like this
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«Reply #3 on: October 17, 2005, 12:34:01 PM »
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bahoot khoob anitha ji bahoot achha likhti ho....



Tirchhi pari teri nazer ki hum dewaane ho gaye,
Guzer chuki her raat ke sab khwaab puraane ho gaye.

hum toh teri justju mein the nihan jo ab talak,
pyaar ke kisse the jo pal main fasaane ho gaye.

milne pe teri aarzu mein jo sakoon mujko mila,
sach baharon ke woh din guzre zamaane ho gaye.

Chah thi hum hum-safer tere bane ab hum-bagal,
khwaab woh apne suhaane sab thhikaane ho gaye.

dard ab seene mein phir-phir doond-ta hai raasta
chot kha ke 'hars' apne kayee thhikaane ho gaye.


Harash Mahajan 'harsh'©
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«Reply #4 on: October 18, 2005, 01:52:18 PM »
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bahut shukriya harsh ji

aapka shaayari hum ne pada hai aur aap bahut koob likthe hain

humein pata nahi tha, pehchaan hogi aap sab se
jo karte hain meeti-meeti baatein humse
likthe hain shaayari kamaal se
achha lagne laga ye maahol kasam se
ho gayee  dosti humein aap sabse

thanks alot once again to all of yoindia members
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«Reply #5 on: October 19, 2005, 12:39:34 AM »
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bahoot shukriya anithha ji.....

afsos aaj pyaar ne daaman badal liya
khuda ko bhi unhone aaj pathher samajh liya

maut se derte nahi khuda ke bande aaj
jinhone aaj mout ka matlab samajh liya

perwaano ka anjaam se nahi hai waasta,
jalna shama pe aaj muqadder samaj liya.

tik-tik garhi ki lamha-lamha mout ko pegaam,
guzra jo pal allah ki rehmat samaj liya.

dastak na de ai mout unke der pe baar baar,
khuda ne jinke dwaar pe fatwa badal diya.

mergat mein 'harsh' jism ka anjaam dekh ker,
hamne toh aaj jeene ka maksad badal liya.
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«Reply #6 on: October 19, 2005, 01:17:13 PM »
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anitha ji, mujhe itani samajh to nahi hai phir bhi kahana chahunga ki, shuruat ka pahla sher to bahut hi choo lene wala tha lekin bad me aapaki pakad kuch dili ho gai. . . .

Harsh ji,
aapki taarif me kya likhun, sachmuch har sher me gahrai hai aur sidha jigar ko cheerata hua andar tak jata hai, bahut achcha lagata hai aapako padana.

jindagi kabhi yun muskara bhi deti hai,
dil todati hai, dijalon ko mila bhi deti hai.

Wahid sahab
aapke liye mai yahi kahunga

hosalaafzai ye ladkiyon ki jyada karate hain,
bisat pe pyade ko wazir aur wazir ko pyada karte hain,
monitor hai janab koi mamuli shkas nahi,
isliye bekarar ko bekaar padate hain
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«Reply #7 on: October 19, 2005, 11:17:42 PM »
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bekarar ji....apke vichaar pad ke hamein achha laga....

bahoot kam rooh hoti hain
jo gehraayee ko samajh paati hai
aapke lafzon ne sachmuch itna bayaan ker diya
nahi toh shaks nahi hum kisi kaam ke
bas rishton koh samajhnaey ki koshish kerte hain

bahoot bahoot shukriya bekara ji...


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«Reply #8 on: October 19, 2005, 11:27:01 PM »
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dard ko lafzon se kaise bayaan keroon.....kutchh is taraah koshish ki...

kab tak koi maikhane main daroo piya kare,
is zindagi ko yuin hi koi kyuin jiya kare.

shama agar de gair ke gharon main roshani,
toh zindagi main kyuin koi, wafa kiya kare.

itna bada hai dard ab, ki ban gaya dawa,
toh zindagi main kyuin koi dawa kiya kare.

Gam-o-khushi ke lamho me hai gam naseeb me,
toh zindagi se kyuin koi gila kiya kare.

Napaak sa lage hai ab, her taraf maahoul,
toh zindagi me 'harsh' kyuin aansoo piya kare.



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«Reply #9 on: October 20, 2005, 06:50:59 PM »
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once again very nice,
harsh ji bahooooooooot dum hai,
yahan bhi kya dard kam hai
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«Reply #10 on: October 20, 2005, 08:40:46 PM »
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wah wah wah bahoot khoob anitha and harashmahajan!! Good one Bekarar ji!!!
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«Reply #11 on: October 20, 2005, 11:09:54 PM »
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bekarar ji n pooja ji bahoot bahoot shukriya aapko alfazon ka......

bhookhe nange sheher mein hersoon baste hain khaleefe log,
Doonda kerte her tabke ko thhagne ke tareeke log.

mehfil sooni, maikash sooni, saare soone saaz hue,
gam mein doobe hain sab itne, bhool gaye saleeke log.

manzil nahi mili toh gam mein aashiq yuin pagal hue,
tod-tod gunchhe phoolon ke, ujaade yuin bageeche log.

jhoothhi shaan-o-shaukat mein ab duniya yuin mashgool hui,
keemti cheezon ke chakker mein bhool gaye galeeche log.

muzrim yuin parwaane ban, jab ghar mein aa daakhil hue,
deewane ban jhaanka kerte dil ke yuin dareeche log.



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«Reply #12 on: October 21, 2005, 12:23:33 AM »
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wah bahoot hi khoobsoorat likha hai apne....

jhoothhi shaan-o-shaukat mein ab duniya yuin mashgool hui,
keemti cheezon ke chakker mein bhool gaye galeeche log.
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«Reply #13 on: October 21, 2005, 01:06:13 AM »
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bahoot shukriya pooja ji....

dil khayalon se kab bahelta hai,
raat bhar kerwate badalta hai.
lagta hai ai dost, ruk gayee saanse,
dard jab mom sa pighalta hai.
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«Reply #14 on: October 21, 2005, 08:50:16 PM »
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harash ji bahut khoob


hum aur kya kahein, kehne keliye labj nahi milrahein
aapki shaayari ki taarif hum kaise karein
kya khoob likthe hain aap, iske aage aur kya kahein
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