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MURJAA GAYA HUN MEIN.....BUDAAPA-e-HAQEEKAT----cara

by cara on January 13, 2009, 07:29:40 AM

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«Reply #15 on: January 16, 2009, 08:46:42 AM »

sukhriya Mahiyaji....aap ko ye soch pasand aaya...

Quote from: Mahiya on January 14, 2009, 11:57:40 AM

Cara Ji.. Aapka likha bahut pasand aaya.. Applause

Aakhiri line, "bas dua karo ,khuda se uthale hamein.. JAANE KO TAHIYAR HUN MEIN,BOODHAA HOGAYA HUN MEIN,MURJAA GAYA HUN MEIN." padh kar kuch khatak si jaroor hui, lekin Smardia Ji.. ke reply ne woh khatak bhi duur kar di..

Khoob likha hai aapne bhi Smardia Ji.., Aur bahut sahi baat kahi hai.. Applause

Kehte hai naa.. "Antt kabhi bhi sirf Antt nahin darshaata, ek nayi shuruwaat ki bhi Aas dikhaata hai..." Toh bus Aas banaaye rakhiye.. aur muskuraate rahiye, yehi jeevan hai.. Usual Smile


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