BARSAT MEIN....cara

by cara on June 18, 2010, 11:51:35 AM
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MERA PYAR NAHIN MERE SAATH MEIN
MAZA AATA NAHIN BARSAT MEIN

RIMZIM RIMZIM PANI BARSE
JIYA MERA PYAR KO TARSE BARSAT MEIN

BIJURI CHAMKE BADAL GARJEY
YAAR BINA MERE AASUN BARSE BARSAT MEIN

DEKH AURON KO JHOOMTE NAACHTE SAATH SAATH MEIN
DIL MERA BI KARE YAAR KA HAATH HO MERE HAATH MEIN BARSAT MEIN

LAGAYI HAI AAG DIL MEIN KATIL MAUSAM NE
PYAAS BUJAUN KAISE BIN SAJNI KE BARSAT MEIN

KAISE SAMJHAUN RAHE NAHIN PAAUN BIN USKE MEH
AANDHI AAYE TOOFAN AAYE UDAA LAYE KAASH USKO MERE PAAS MEIN BARSAT MEIN
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«Reply #1 on: June 18, 2010, 11:53:54 AM »
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Bahut khoob CARA Ji
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«Reply #2 on: June 18, 2010, 05:38:13 PM »
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MERA PYAR NAHIN MERE SAATH MEIN
MAZA AATA NAHIN BARSAT MEIN

RIMZIM RIMZIM PANI BARSE
JIYA MERA PYAR KO TARSE BARSAT MEIN

BIJURI CHAMKE BADAL GARJEY
YAAR BINA MERE AASUN BARSE BARSAT MEIN

DEKH AURON KO JHOOMTE NAACHTE SAATH SAATH MEIN
DIL MERA BI KARE YAAR KA HAATH HO MERE HAATH MEIN BARSAT MEIN

LAGAYI HAI AAG DIL MEIN KATIL MAUSAM NE
PYAAS BUJAUN KAISE BIN SAJNI KE BARSAT MEIN

KAISE SAMJHAUN RAHE NAHIN PAAUN BIN USKE MEH
AANDHI AAYE TOOFAN AAYE UDAA LAYE KAASH USKO MERE PAAS MEIN BARSAT MEIN

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«Reply #3 on: June 18, 2010, 07:38:22 PM »
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bahut khoob Cara ji..!!!
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«Reply #4 on: June 19, 2010, 03:11:42 AM »
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Achhi koshish ki ha Cara ji. Dil ki khwahishat ko khoob zahir kiya hai. Agar lines zara balanced hoti to poem aur zyada achhi hoti. Daad hazir hai.
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«Reply #5 on: September 30, 2010, 11:43:08 AM »
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MERA PYAR NAHIN MERE SAATH MEIN
MAZA AATA NAHIN BARSAT MEIN

RIMZIM RIMZIM PANI BARSE
JIYA MERA PYAR KO TARSE BARSAT MEIN

BIJURI CHAMKE BADAL GARJEY
YAAR BINA MERE AASUN BARSE BARSAT MEIN

DEKH AURON KO JHOOMTE NAACHTE SAATH SAATH MEIN
DIL MERA BI KARE YAAR KA HAATH HO MERE HAATH MEIN BARSAT MEIN

LAGAYI HAI AAG DIL MEIN KATIL MAUSAM NE
PYAAS BUJAUN KAISE BIN SAJNI KE BARSAT MEIN

KAISE SAMJHAUN RAHE NAHIN PAAUN BIN USKE MEH
AANDHI AAYE TOOFAN AAYE UDAA LAYE KAASH USKO MERE PAAS MEIN BARSAT MEIN


wah wah
very simple and really sweet
keep up the good work

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: September 30, 2010, 11:47:12 AM »
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bahut khoob ji..


barsat ki rat ho,
hathon me unka hath ho,
lipte huye ho wo mujhse
fir sawanse mulaqat ho~
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