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mamta bajpai
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BAHUT HO CHUKI DIL JALANE KI BAATEN
KARO AB SANAM DIL LAGANE KI BAATEN
YE BAARISH KAA MOUSAM HANSEE DILRUBAA HAI
KARO BHEEGANE AUR BHIGANE KI BAATEN
YE DIN RAAT RANJ O ALAM KE FASAANE
KARO KUCH TO HANSNE HANSANE KI BAATEN
YE PARDE PE PARDA SITAM PE SITAM HAI
KARO AB TO JALWA DIKHANE KI BAATEN
HANSEE KAHKAHON KI WO MAHFIL SAJA DO
NAHI AUR RONE RULANE KI BAATEN
NASHEMAN JO UJADAA KOI GHAM NAHEE HAI
KARO AB SITARON ME BASNE KI BAATEN
BAHUT BADH CHUKI DOORIYAAN DO DILON KI
KARO AB TO MILNE MILANE KI BAATEN
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«Reply #1 on: July 20, 2010, 03:10:23 PM » |
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Anshumali
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«Reply #3 on: July 20, 2010, 03:34:36 PM » |
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BAHUT HO CHUKI DIL JALANE KI BAATEN
KARO AB SANAM DIL LAGANE KI BAATEN
YE BAARISH KA MOUSAM HASEEN DILRUBA
KARO BHEEGANE AUR BHIGANE KI BAATEN
YE CHAARON PAHAR RANJ-O-FIQRA KA AALAM
KARO KUCH TO HANSNE HANSANE KI BAATEN
PARDE PE PARDA SITAM PE SITAM
KARO AB TO JALWA DIKHANE KI BAATEN
HANSEE KAHKAHON KI WO MAHFIL SAJA DO
NAHI AUR RONE RULANE KI BAATEN
UJADA NASHEMAN TO KYA GHUM KAREN?
KARO AB SITARON ME BASNE KI BAATEN
BAHUT HO CHUKI DARMIYA DIL KI DOORI
KARO AB TO MILNE MILANE KI BAATEN
Bahut hi khoobsurat ehsaas pesh kiye hai aapne mamta ji......tahe dil se daad....khush rahen.... apna khayal rakhen... duaaon ke saath.... |
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ishu_singh10
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«Reply #5 on: July 20, 2010, 05:52:01 PM » |
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Wah..wah... Khub kaha
barish mein tere sang bheeg jaane ka mann karta hai,
koyal ki thrah tere sang gaane ko dil karta hai,
kya hua jo aaj hum saath nahi,
teri jism chod teri rooh mein bas jaane ka dil karta hai.
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nazar ghouri
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«Reply #6 on: July 20, 2010, 09:31:32 PM » |
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wah bahot khoob mamta saheba ...yeh sher to khoob raha
bahot hochoki darmiyaan dil ki doori......wah
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«Reply #7 on: July 21, 2010, 01:26:18 AM » |
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BAHUT HO CHUKI DIL JALANE KI BAATEN
KARO AB SANAM DIL LAGANE KI BAATEN
YE BAARISH KA MOUSAM HASEEN DILRUBA
KARO BHEEGANE AUR BHIGANE KI BAATEN
YE CHAARON PAHAR RANJ-O-FIQRA KA AALAM
KARO KUCH TO HANSNE HANSANE KI BAATEN
PARDE PE PARDA SITAM PE SITAM
KARO AB TO JALWA DIKHANE KI BAATEN
HANSEE KAHKAHON KI WO MAHFIL SAJA DO
NAHI AUR RONE RULANE KI BAATEN
UJADA NASHEMAN TO KYA GHUM KAREN?
KARO AB SITARON ME BASNE KI BAATEN
BAHUT HO CHUKI DARMIYA DIL KI DOORI
KARO AB TO MILNE MILANE KI BAATEN
DIN MEI CHAND DIKHATI HAI TUMHARI BAATE DIL TO BAHUT LUBHATI HAI TUMHARI BAATE TANHAI MEI YAAD AATI HAI TUMHARI BAATE MEHFILE DIL SAJATI HAI TUMHARI BAATE TERI BAATO KE BAARE MEI AB AUR KYA KAHU TUJSE JYADA PYARI HAI TUMHARI BAATE |
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mohsin akhter
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«Reply #8 on: July 21, 2010, 06:02:09 AM » |
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BAHUT HO CHUKI DIL JALANE KI BAATEN
KARO AB SANAM DIL LAGANE KI BAATEN
YE BAARISH KA MOUSAM HASEEN DILRUBA
KARO BHEEGANE AUR BHIGANE KI BAATEN
YE CHAARON PAHAR RANJ-O-FIQRA KA AALAM
KARO KUCH TO HANSNE HANSANE KI BAATEN
PARDE PE PARDA SITAM PE SITAM
KARO AB TO JALWA DIKHANE KI BAATEN
HANSEE KAHKAHON KI WO MAHFIL SAJA DO
NAHI AUR RONE RULANE KI BAATEN
UJADA NASHEMAN TO KYA GHUM KAREN?
KARO AB SITARON ME BASNE KI BAATEN
BAHUT HO CHUKI DARMIYA DIL KI DOORI
KARO AB TO MILNE MILANE KI BAATEN
bahut khoob mamta ji KUCH IS TARAH SE BARAS E ABRE RAHMAT MERE MAHBOOB KO DARR KE LIPAT JANE KI ADAT HAI |
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«Reply #9 on: July 21, 2010, 01:15:26 PM » |
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Bahot achhi ghaza likhi hai Mamta ji. Parhkar achha laga. Ghazal mein sheriyat dikhaai deti hai. Andaaz aur mazaameen bhi achhe hain. Behr ke hawale se kuchh suggestion dena chahta hun, shayad aapko theek lagen:
YE BAARISH KA MOUSAM HASEEN DILRUBA HAI
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YE DIN RAAT RANJ-O-ALAM KE FASAANE
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YE PARDE PE PARDA SITAM PE SITAM HAI
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NASHEMAN JO UJDA KOI GHAM NAHI HAI
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BAHUT BADH CHUKI DURIYAN DO DILON KI
Shukriya..
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«Reply #10 on: July 21, 2010, 01:44:36 PM » |
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Mamta ji.. behad khoobsurat rachna hai aapki ye...!!!
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«Reply #11 on: July 21, 2010, 01:58:23 PM » |
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buhat khoob..
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rohit tiwari
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«Reply #12 on: July 21, 2010, 03:19:51 PM » |
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waah kya baat h mamta saheba bahut hi umda likha h apne
ho rahi baarish ka sida asar dikh raha h apki gazal par .waah likhte rahiyee uar abhi jaise hass rahi h waise hi haste rahiye
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mamta bajpai
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«Reply #13 on: July 24, 2010, 08:13:10 AM » |
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SHUKRIYA KOYAL! LAGTA HAI TUMNE APNI POSITIVE ENERGY HUMME TRANSFER KAR DI HAI.......BAS USI KA KAMAAL HAI.......
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mamta bajpai
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«Reply #14 on: July 24, 2010, 08:17:10 AM » |
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SHUKRIYA ROHIT JI!JAB FIZAON ME MOUSAM-E-BARISH KE NAGHME GOONJ RAHE HON TO BHALA HUM KAISE ACHOOTE RAH SAKTE HAIN?AAP NE MERA QALAAM PASAND FARMAYA BEHAD SHUKRIYA............AAP BHI JAHAN RAHEN KHUSH RAHEN.....KHUSHIYAN BAANTEN.........
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