**Basti nahin hoti** by Rahim

by dead heart on September 10, 2009, 06:41:59 PM
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Salaam sabhi ko...

Bahaut dino bad kuch post kar raha hoon...Main mafi chahunga ager kisi ko bhi ko baat iss ghazal main buri lage...


Ibadat se badi duniya main koi doulat nahin hoti,
Ager hota insaan itna hi paq toh Khuda ki azmaish nahin hoti,
Aur sache ashiq hone ke dave karne walo sunlo meri baat,
Khuda se badkar kisi se mohobat nahin hoti...

Yeh har roz duniya ke maslon main apna dimag lagana,
Namazon ko bhulakar  apne mehboob se milne jana,
Nabion ko bhulkar celebrities ko yaad rakhne walon sunlo meri baat,
Maherban nahin hota Khuda mera toh aaj in celebrities ki koi hasti nahin hoti...

Yahan[duniya main] chahe jo karlo koi kuch nahin kahega,
Mager akhrat main mera rabb tumse hisab zaroor lega,
Yahan tum insaanon bhale maaze se sharab peena,
Mager yaad rakho maut ke badd bhi tumhari rooh ko hai jeena,
Yahan honge tumhare saath tumhare maa-baap, bhai aur behna,
Mager wahan azab akele hoga sehna,
Mazjidon ko bhulkar mahel banane walon sunlo Rahim ki baat,
Jannat se khubsoorat koi basti nahin hoti...

~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: September 11, 2009, 02:10:21 AM »
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Wah wah Rahim ji bahut khoob very beautiful gazal.aapke har ek shabd mein sirf sachayi hai.excellent Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: September 11, 2009, 02:44:03 AM »
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Salaam sabhi ko...

Bahaut dino bad kuch post kar raha hoon...Main mafi chahunga ager kisi ko bhi ko baat iss ghazal main buri lage...


Ibadat se badi duniya main koi doulat nahin hoti,
Ager hota insaan itna hi paq toh Khuda ki azmaish nahin hoti,
Aur sache ashiq hone ke dave karne walo sunlo meri baat,
Khuda se badkar kisi se mohobat nahin hoti...

Yeh har roz duniya ke maslon main apna dimag lagana,
Namazon ko bhulakar  apne mehboob se milne jana,
Nabion ko bhulkar celebrities ko yaad rakhne walon sunlo meri baat,
Maherban nahin hota Khuda mera toh aaj in celebrities ki koi hasti nahin hoti...

Yahan[duniya main] chahe jo karlo koi kuch nahin kahega,
Mager akhrat main mera rabb tumse hisab zaroor lega,
Yahan tum insaanon bhale maaze se sharab peena,
Mager yaad rakho maut ke badd bhi tumhari rooh ko hai jeena,
Yahan honge tumhare saath tumhare maa-baap, bhai aur behna,
Mager wahan azab akele hoga sehna,
Mazjidon ko bhulkar mahel banane walon sunlo Rahim ki baat,
Jannat se khubsoorat koi basti nahin hoti...

~Rahim~
Bahut hi khoobsurati se apna khayal bayan kiya hai aapne Rahim.... bahut bahut umda peshkash.. Daad kabul kijiyega zarur Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: September 11, 2009, 02:20:00 PM »
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Rahimmmmmmmmmmmm Bhai.... Kya Baat hai.. Behad Umda Peshkash.. ek ek Lafz Aapki Khubsoorat Soch Ko Bayan Kar raha hai.. Bahut Hi Behtreen Khayalaat Likhe Hain dost... Applause Applause

Daad Kubool karen...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #4 on: September 11, 2009, 02:21:42 PM »
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Great Bro
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dead heart
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«Reply #5 on: September 11, 2009, 03:54:02 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya Madhuwesh jee, Roja di, Vikas bhaijan aur Rkswatian jee jo apne apna waqt diya aur daad bhi...
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«Reply #6 on: November 14, 2009, 10:34:42 PM »
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Bahut khoob Rahim Ji
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«Reply #7 on: November 15, 2009, 03:50:45 PM »
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Shukriya Rajesh jee
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«Reply #8 on: March 24, 2010, 10:53:19 PM »
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Bhut khoob
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«Reply #9 on: March 25, 2010, 11:29:11 AM »
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Shukriya jee
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«Reply #10 on: March 25, 2010, 02:27:31 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Rahim, bohot kuch keh gayi aapki ye nazm.
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«Reply #11 on: March 25, 2010, 08:27:50 PM »
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Shukriya Talat di...Ek sachayi bayan karne ki koshish ki hai maine..
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«Reply #12 on: March 28, 2010, 11:16:35 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim..

Sach Ko Lafzon Mein Utaara hai..Har Baat Gehri Aur Khoobsurat!!!

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: March 28, 2010, 12:44:39 PM »
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wah wah Rahim ji.bahut khoob. khuda ki kudrat hai. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: March 30, 2010, 01:42:07 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya Khwahish jee aur Suresh jee...
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