DE DIYE ZAKHM JISNE HAME

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WO JO NIGAHON SE QATL-E-AAM KARNE NIKLE
SUNA HAI KAI , DAFA-E-JURM LAGANE NIKLE

GUNGUNANE LAGI JAB SE TANHAIYAN MERI
SOYE HUE ARMAAN JANE KAHAN SE NIKLE

GOONGE BAHRON KI SAJ GAYEE MAHFIL AB TO
KYON UNHEN HUM RAAG DARBARI SUNANE NIKLE

WAQT KI SAKHT DHOOP ME JHULAS RAHI THI MAI
BEDARD US PE BHI AAINA CHAMKANE NIKLE

DE DIYE ZAKHM JISNE HAME TOHAFE ME
AASHNA WO MERE BARSON PURANE NIKLE
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«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2010, 12:49:44 PM »
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teri aankh se aansu jab bhi nikle
gum ke nahi ,sirf khushi ke nikle

paye hai hamne jitne tohfe heero ke
ab dekha to sab ke sab nakli nikle

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«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2010, 01:01:50 PM »
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samjhta raha  jisko mei nadaan
wo to bade shatir qatil nikle

samjhta tha ke samjho ke tum hame
tu bhi mager oro ke jaise nikle

accha hai ya bura ye khuda jaane
meri to bus teri ha mei ha nikle

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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2010, 02:02:44 PM »
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BAHUT KHUB MAMTA G
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«Reply #4 on: May 20, 2010, 03:04:09 PM »
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hum ne manga tha sath un ka wo judai ka gam de gai hum yadoo k sahary hi jee lety wo bhool jane ki qasam de gai
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«Reply #5 on: May 20, 2010, 07:14:01 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Mamta ji... bahut hi khoob...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: May 20, 2010, 08:38:59 PM »
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WO JO NIGAHON SE QATL-E-AAM KARNE NIKLE
SUNA HAI KAI DAFA-E-JURM LAGANE NIKLE

GUNGUNANE LAGI JAB SE TANHAIYAN MERI
SOYE HUE ARMAAN JANE KAHAN SE NIKLE

GOONGE BAHRON KI SAJ GAYEE MAHFIL AB TO
KYON UNHEN RAAG DARBARI SUNANE NIKLE

WAQT KI SAKHT DHOOP ME JHULAS RAHI THI MAI
BEDARD US PE BHI AAINA CHAMKANE NIKLE

DE DIYE ZAKHM JISNE HAME TOHAFE ME
AASHNA WO MERE BARSON PURANE NIKLE


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bahut hi unda aur nazakat se likha hai

pad ke mazaa aa gaya

Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!
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«Reply #7 on: May 21, 2010, 01:13:02 AM »
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MANOJ JI BEHAD SHUKRIYA! AAP KI DAAD DENE KA YE ANDAZ BHI KYA KHOOB HAI .JAWAB NAHI.AAP KI GAZAL KA HAR SHER BAHUT UMDA KHAYAL KI NUMAINDGI KAR RAHA HAI.
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«Reply #8 on: May 21, 2010, 01:15:09 AM »
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THE GRIM REAPER JI !BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA.
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«Reply #9 on: May 21, 2010, 01:28:02 AM »
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THANX FOR LIKING MY GAZEL,GIVING FOR VALUABLE COMMENTS

BAD JAYEGA MERE HER SHER KA WAJAN
TU GAR JARA SA WAH WAH KAH DE
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«Reply #10 on: May 21, 2010, 01:47:25 AM »
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wah waah waaaaaaaaaah manoj ji. bahut khoob. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
teri aankh se aansu jab bhi nikle
gum ke nahi ,sirf khushi ke nikle

paye hai hamne jitne tohfe heero ke
ab dekha to sab ke sab nakli nikle


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«Reply #11 on: May 21, 2010, 02:25:06 AM »
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Wah wah bahot khoob Mamta ji.

Zulm yun sab pe subho-shaam na kar
Too nigaahon se qatle-aam na kar
Kuchh to hoga qusoor tera bhi
Saara ilzaam mere naam na kar
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«Reply #12 on: May 21, 2010, 02:34:48 AM »
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Wah wah Mamta ji,bahut khoob,kamaal ke likhti hai aap,Manoj ji aapne bhi bahut khoob likha. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #13 on: May 21, 2010, 04:46:30 AM »
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WO JO NIGAHON SE QATL-E-AAM KARNE NIKLE
SUNA HAI KAI , DAFA-E-JURM LAGANE NIKLE

GUNGUNANE LAGI JAB SE TANHAIYAN MERI
SOYE HUE ARMAAN JANE KAHAN SE NIKLE

GOONGE BAHRON KI SAJ GAYEE MAHFIL AB TO
KYON UNHEN RAAG DARBARI SUNANE NIKLE

WAQT KI SAKHT DHOOP ME JHULAS RAHI THI MAI
BEDARD US PE BHI AAINA CHAMKANE NIKLE

DE DIYE ZAKHM JISNE HAME TOHAFE ME
AASHNA WO MERE BARSON PURANE NIKLE

Bahut khoob Mamta Ji
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«Reply #14 on: May 21, 2010, 10:57:45 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah...

Bahut Bahut Khoob Mamta Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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