Dil dhundta hai........."KB"

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DIL DHUNDTA HAI..
ek hasen khab ko,
ek tamnna e izhar ko,
ek subah ki sham ko,
zindagi kisi ke naam ko!!
DIL DHUNDTA HAI..
ek pyari si surat ko,
ek mamta ki murat ko,
ek dil ki dhadkan ko,
in tanhaiyo ki tadpan ko!!
DIL DHUNDTA HAI..
ek sunhre sapne ko,
begaano me kisi apne ko,
ek chand jaisi rangat ko,
mehndi jaisi sangat ko,
melo jaisi jamghat ko!!
di dhundta hai..
ek asiyane ki talaas hai,
ek saagar me bhi pyas hai,
bekaran bhi dil udaas hai,
azeeb se halaat hai,
shayd..dil dhundta kisi ka saath hai!!!
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«Reply #1 on: November 22, 2010, 10:35:14 AM »
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beautifulllllllllllllll poem subhash ji....sach me aapke dil ki talaash ne hamara dil lubha liya.....bht khubb ji bht khubb
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«Reply #2 on: November 22, 2010, 11:18:31 AM »
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bahut bahut dhanyabaad Kasak ji...aapko poem pasand ai..bas yahi kaafi h:)
aap yun hi hausala badhate rahiye..
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«Reply #3 on: November 22, 2010, 11:57:00 AM »
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badhiya he killbill ji ...likhte rahiye~
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«Reply #4 on: November 22, 2010, 12:08:29 PM »
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thanx Abhi ji...
naakaamiyon se hum ghabraate nhi,
kosis karne se ji hum churaate nahi!!!
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hausala afjai ke liye tahe dil se sukragujar hu aapka Abhi ji:)
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«Reply #5 on: November 23, 2010, 09:10:02 AM »
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good one subash ji....
bhagwan kare aapki talash jald hi khatam ho jaye....

and as i say before keep writing...

DIL DHUNDTA HAI..
ek hasen khab ko,
ek tamnna e izhar ko,
ek subah ki sham ko,
zindagi kisi ke naam ko!!
DIL DHUNDTA HAI..
ek pyari si surat ko,
ek mamta ki murat ko,
ek dil ki dhadkan ko,
in tanhaiyo ki tadpan ko!!
DIL DHUNDTA HAI..
ek sunhre sapne ko,
begaano me kisi apne ko,
ek chand jaisi rangat ko,
mehndi jaisi sangat ko,
melo jaisi jamghat ko!!
di dhundta hai..
ek asiyane ki talaas hai,
ek saagar me bhi pyas hai,
bekaran bhi dil udaas hai,
azeeb se halaat hai,
shayd..dil dhundta kisi ka saath hai!!!
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«Reply #6 on: November 23, 2010, 09:32:14 AM »
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na na priya ji bilkul na...
Talash jo khatm ho jayegi hamarii,
fir jeene ki aas na khatm ho jayegi humari!!!
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hum tashte hain talash ko hi..
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dhanyabaad Priya ji:) humari choti si kosis ko aapne pasand kiya:)
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«Reply #7 on: November 23, 2010, 09:37:08 AM »
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ek talash ko jeene ki aas banayege to jeen sach me bahut mushkil ho jayega na subash ji....
ek talash khatm hote hi dusri shuru kar deejiye 'lolz'

na na priya ji bilkul na...
Talash jo khatm ho jayegi hamarii,
fir jeene ki aas na khatm ho jayegi humari!!!
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hum tashte hain talash ko hi..
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dhanyabaad Priya ji:) humari choti si kosis ko aapne pasand kiya:)
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«Reply #8 on: November 23, 2010, 09:45:04 AM »
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talash wahi jo kabhi khatm na ho..
manzil wahi jiska ilm na ho.!!!
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priya ji ....
dil dhundta hai
baarish ki fuhaar ko
mausam ki bahar ko
bachpan ki yaad ko
jeewan ki talash ko!!!
bas dhundne dijiye yun hi..:p
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«Reply #9 on: November 23, 2010, 10:10:00 AM »
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humne aapko kuch bhi dhundhne se kaha roka subash ji....
chaliye aapki talash ko dekhte hai....
dekhiye barish to ho hi rahi hai...
bahar... barish se mausam suhana ho hi jata hai...
bachpan ki yaad... aankhe band keejiye hazir ho jayengi...
jeevan ki talash... ummm... ye thoda mushkil hai...
dekha sab kuch paas me hi to hai....
dhundhne jane ki jarurat hi nahi hai....

talash wahi jo kabhi khatm na ho..
manzil wahi jiska ilm na ho.!!!
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priya ji ....
dil dhundta hai
baarish ki fuhaar ko
mausam ki bahar ko
bachpan ki yaad ko
jeewan ki talash ko!!!
bas dhundne dijiye yun hi..:p
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«Reply #10 on: November 23, 2010, 10:18:27 AM »
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aapne meri talash puri kar di waah...
taliyan taliyan..
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thanku Priya ji
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«Reply #11 on: November 25, 2010, 02:43:03 PM »
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dil dhundhata hai
bichde hue pyaar ko
ruthe hue dildaar ko
sine ki bahar ko
aur .......................
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«Reply #12 on: November 25, 2010, 02:52:19 PM »
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bhot khoob add kiya waah waah:)
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