Door Talak....

by Pooja on April 08, 2008, 04:05:44 PM
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«Reply #30 on: November 25, 2008, 08:02:00 PM »
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Dukh deti hain baaten apnon ki,
Tab sabr ki zaroorat hai hoti,
Thoda aazma lo tanhai ko bhi,
Hamesha saath woh bhi nahin deti. -

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in ghayal umeendon main, tanhaai ka hi sahara hai
kaya azmaaye ab hum, sab kuch to jeevan main haara hai
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«Reply #31 on: February 09, 2009, 09:57:30 PM »
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Haar kar bhi jeetney ki umeed rakhte hain,
Kuch log apni soch ko kyun mahdood rakhte hain...
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Pooja
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«Reply #32 on: February 09, 2009, 10:24:47 PM »
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Mahdood = Huh?
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syednaami
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«Reply #33 on: February 10, 2009, 06:16:09 AM »
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= Limited, seemit
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Pooja
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«Reply #34 on: February 10, 2009, 06:29:17 AM »
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Thanks Syednaami ji... ab apki line ka arth samjh ayya// wah kay abaat hai... bahoot khoob!!
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salma786
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«Reply #35 on: February 10, 2009, 06:47:34 AM »
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Nice lines pooja!
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salma786
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«Reply #36 on: February 10, 2009, 06:51:08 AM »
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Bahoot hi khoob kahi pooja ji...........
apne rone ka rona bhi nahi rone dete
kuch log kyun hai itne zalim hote
uth kar hum chal dege phir tanhaaio main
shayd mehfilo main sirf khushi ke hai afsaane hote

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«Reply #37 on: February 10, 2009, 06:59:28 AM »
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Zameen wahin hai magar koi Ghar najar nahi atta
Asmaan wahin hai, kyun phir RUB najar nahi atta

Dil hi toota hai, chalo ise to mana lege hum
Per door talak kyun koi sath najar nahi atta

Bilakh raha hai koi, sune koi to uski awaz
Kyun kisi ka bhi dhayan ajkal, kisi per nahi jaata

Her ek muskura kar mil raha hai Phir bhi POOJA
Ab to her ek zisam-o-jaan bas ek lash hi hai najar atta

Zameen wahin hai magar koi ghar najar nahi atta
Asmaan wahin hai, kyun phir Rub najar nahi atta.........


good one pooja ji kyaa khub likha hai. icon_salut icon_salut Clapping Smiley

zameen wahin hai magr koi ghar nazar nahin aata,
aasman wahin hai par koi RUB nazar nahin aata.

bhirh mein hun tanhayee ke liye "TANHA" veerana nazar nahin aata,
dooooor tak jab chalo saath kisi ke toh "TANHA" laut nahi paate.

barish ki boond bhi shok oss jinhe kabhi main pakarh nahin paata.
jis tarah uska haath ab main kabhi pakarh nahin paata.

ho gaya hun maayuss ab bina uske raha nahin jaata
kudh bhi shayad ho gaya behra meri duaon ko woh sun nahin paata

zameen wahin hai magr koi ghar nazar nahin aata
aasman wahin hai magr koi RUB nazar nahin aata



kripya ismein koi sudhhaar chahta ho toh mei madad karna.

Tanha-----
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salma786
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«Reply #38 on: February 10, 2009, 07:03:48 AM »
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Log samajhte nahi,
Dil ki majburi,
Jo humpe hai guzri,
Hum hi jaante hai!
Shikayat jo "Rab"se,
Kiya karte hai,
Bandagi me unki,
Jiya karte hai!!
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«Reply #39 on: February 10, 2009, 07:11:53 AM »
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Mund kar ankh chala karte the,
Sath unke hum door talak,
Chand ka bhi noor nazar ata tha,
Unki ankho me kya zameen kya falak,
Jo mudkar dekha koi nahi tha,
Na wo chand, na uski koi jhalak,
Na karti shikwa apne "Rab" se,
To rehti andhere me kab talak?
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«Reply #40 on: February 10, 2009, 07:28:25 AM »
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Bohat Achche Salma Ji, Nice One,.
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«Reply #41 on: February 10, 2009, 07:44:48 AM »
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Thanks Janasheen ji!!
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«Reply #42 on: February 10, 2009, 08:00:13 AM »
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nice  pooja ji

buhat khoob mera jwab aapke liye kuch youn hy

apny dil main Allah rakhna
esy khud ko zinda rakhna
maza paao gy jeeny ka
usi ki jaanib rasta rakhna


aik pathar hi main kiun dhoondty ho khuda
paao gy kaaynaat ke her zarry main ussy

gulzar

nice work gulzar ji and pooja ji

DILL MEIN SADA AAS KE DIYE JAGAYE RAKHNA
APNA DILL KABHI NA UDAAS RAKHNA

GAR PYAAR HAI SACHHA WOH MILEGA TUJHSE
BAS TU UMMEED KE DIPAK JALAAYE RAKHNA.

DILL SE KABHI NA JAANE DENA USS SAKSH KO
DILL KI GEHRAYEE SE HAATHG MILAAYE RAKHNA

KEHTA HAI "TANHA" TUJHSE AYE DOST
TU DILL MEIN PYAAR KA PAUDHA HUMESHA UGAAYE RAKHNA.
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«Reply #43 on: February 10, 2009, 08:07:21 AM »
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Gud goin Rawat ji !
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«Reply #44 on: February 10, 2009, 08:22:34 AM »
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thanku salma ji
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