der talak barsaat hui

by kaushikbhawna008 on May 15, 2008, 06:06:25 AM
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kaushikbhawna008
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kal aagan mei mere barsaat hui
dur talak thi bundo ki rimjhim
kuch der mei hi khamosh hui
bundo ki rimjhim ne mujhko kuch aisa tadpaya
saath mere meri tanhaai rahi
yaadon k saaye se ham bheege is tarah
fir der talak ashko ki barsaat hui
ye bundein kasak c dil mei kuch aisi jaga gayi
jinhe bhula chuke the ham kabhi unhi lamho ki yaad dila gayi
kuch gam ka daur aur badha is kadar
charon aur andhiyaara hua
jo chiraag jalaye rakha tha hamne
usi diye tale andhiyara hua
barsaat mei mor ki kook ne kuch cheda aisa tarana
mere lab khamosh rahe bas khamoshi  mei hi dil ki asmaan se baat hui
kaha dil ne e-asman ab aur na baras na le or mera tu imthaan
tere sang to hai suraj chand sang sitare
par mera na koi yaha
par mera na koi yaha

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k.shael
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«Reply #1 on: May 15, 2008, 06:49:43 AM »
NICE WORDING.... Applause
KAUSHIK JI,
IT'S HEART FEELINGS,
KEEP IT UP....
BY. K.SHAEL

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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #2 on: May 15, 2008, 08:36:09 AM »
thnx k.shael ji
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Rajbir
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«Reply #3 on: May 15, 2008, 08:37:34 AM »
Bhawna

Bahut achche !

Keep writing like this !
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baadal102
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«Reply #4 on: May 15, 2008, 03:29:41 PM »
bundo ki rimjhim ne mujhko kuch aisa tadpaya
saath mere meri tanhaai rahi
yaadon k saaye se ham bheege is tarah
fir der talak ashko ki barsaat hui


bahoot aache bhawana ji  Applause keep it up


Baadal
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natural
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«Reply #5 on: May 18, 2008, 06:59:44 AM »

bahut achha laga parhkar Kaushikbhavna ji.. Usual Smile
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #6 on: May 29, 2008, 06:22:18 AM »
bahut achha laga parhkar Kaushikbhavna ji.. Usual Smile

thnx baadal ji, natural ji and rajbir ji
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Advo.RavinderaRavi
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«Reply #7 on: April 01, 2013, 02:07:27 AM »
Nice.
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