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« on: April 08, 2008, 12:05:44 PM »
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Zameen wahin hai magar koi Ghar najar nahi atta
Asmaan wahin hai, kyun phir RUB najar nahi atta

Dil hi toota hai, chalo ise to mana lege hum
Per door talak kyun koi sath najar nahi atta

Bilakh raha hai koi, sune koi to uski awaz
Kyun kisi ka bhi dhayan ajkal, kisi per nahi jaata

Her ek muskura kar mil raha hai Phir bhi POOJA
Ab to her ek zisam-o-jaan bas ek lash hi hai najar atta

Zameen wahin hai magar koi ghar najar nahi atta
Asmaan wahin hai, kyun phir Rub najar nahi atta.........
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« Reply #1 on: April 08, 2008, 12:52:57 PM »
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BOHOT KHOOB POOJA JI {RAB WALI BAAT CHHOD KAR} BAQI TAMAM BOHOT HI BEHTAREEN HE OR NIHAYAT DARD KE SATH LIKHE GAYE HE.  Applause
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« Reply #2 on: April 08, 2008, 12:54:46 PM »
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bahoot bahoot shukaria Sayyid Randeri ji!! Apko Rub wali line pasand nahi aai.. koi khas wajah.. agar pata chal jaaye to shayad kuch sikhne ka moka mil jaaye!!
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« Reply #3 on: April 08, 2008, 01:07:30 PM »
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Bilakh raha hai koi, sune koi to uski awaz
Kyun kisi ka bhi dhayan ajkal, kisi per nahi jaata

behad khoobsurat lines he.ek achi kavita.
Aaapki kavita mein tukbandi ki zurrat:

pehchaanta hein hume woh rooh tak,
aur hamari nas-nas se he woh waakif,
us par hamara chalaawa koi asar nahi dhaata,
isiliye asmaan hein wahi pur rub nazar nahi aata!
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« Reply #4 on: April 08, 2008, 01:11:32 PM »
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shukaria Prateek ji!!

dekh kar zindagi ke roop, her ek roop chalawa lagta hai
itne khaye hai dhokein, Rub bhi unhi ka humsaya lagta hai
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« Reply #5 on: April 08, 2008, 01:40:08 PM »
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nahi pooja ji galti ki baat nahi bas kisi bohot bade ki shaan me gustakhi jesa laga, is me shamil hone se darta hun is liye apne aap ko is se alahida kar ne ki koshosh thi.
aap ka maqsad gustakhi ka nahi ye me janta hun, ham to aksar preshani me aesa bolte rehte hen, hmare yahan ek budhiya kehti thi "tu kya upar beth kar tmasha dekh ta he" jazbat me aese lafz nikal hi jaate he, allah ham tamam ko maaf farmae...

wese arabi zubaan me rab ka matlab palne wala parwasrish karne wala hota he.
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« Reply #6 on: April 08, 2008, 01:42:45 PM »
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Bilakh raha hai koi, sune koi to uski awaz
Kyun kisi ka bhi dhayan ajkal, kisi per nahi jaata

behad khoobsurat lines he.ek achi kavita.
Aaapki kavita mein tukbandi ki zurrat:

pehchaanta hein hume woh rooh tak,
aur hamari nas-nas se he woh waakif,
us par hamara chalaawa koi asar nahi dhaata,
isiliye asmaan hein wahi pur rub nazar nahi aata!

bohot khoob prateek ji badi achchhi baat kahi aapne.
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« Reply #7 on: April 09, 2008, 11:51:14 PM »
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bohut shukriya sayyid ji.
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« Reply #8 on: May 29, 2008, 03:06:40 PM »
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Sayyid ji,

Mere liye Rub, Allah, bhagwaan sabhi wo ek upperwala hai. jo dil mai ho kah deti hu. main to yaha ek din church mai jakar Jesus se bhi lard aaii thi .. mujhe koi farak nahi pardta ki main kaha hu  aor main yah apna poora haq samjhati hu ki jab khushi mai shukaria kar sakati hu to dukh main ussi khuda se lard bhi sakti hu..

Again: main khuda likhu Rab likhu, Allah likhu ya jesus likhu sabhi ek hai meri najar main!!!

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« Reply #9 on: June 30, 2008, 01:25:41 PM »
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door talak tera mera yaadon ka sath jayega
alag ho bhi ja jitna bhi tu,
beeta waqat tujhko bhi yaad ayega
barsegi teri bhi ankhia, beeta pal tujhko bhi satyega
door talak tera mera yaadon ka sath jayega
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« Reply #10 on: July 01, 2008, 07:10:45 AM »
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bahoot khoob rahi pooja ji......mujhe bhi ye line bahoot pasand aayi
Bilakh raha hai koi, sune koi to uski awaz
Kyun kisi ka bhi dhayan ajkal, kisi per nahi jaata

aur prateek ji ka jawab bhi.....

barson mai tere naam pe khata raha fareb,
mere  khuda kahan hai tu iska pata to de,

beshaq mere naseeb pe rakh apna ikhtiyaar,
lekin mere naseeb me kya hai bata to de
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« Reply #11 on: July 01, 2008, 01:32:48 PM »
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shukaria Bekarar jee..

bahoot achi lines apne share ki hai!!
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« Reply #12 on: July 04, 2008, 06:35:05 PM »
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nice one
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« Reply #13 on: July 04, 2008, 10:14:16 PM »
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Zameen wahin hai magar koi Ghar najar nahi atta
Asmaan wahin hai, kyun phir RUB najar nahi atta

Dil hi toota hai, chalo ise to mana lege hum
Per door talak kyun koi sath najar nahi atta

Bilakh raha hai koi, sune koi to uski awaz
Kyun kisi ka bhi dhayan ajkal, kisi per nahi jaata

Her ek muskura kar mil raha hai Phir bhi POOJA
Ab to her ek zisam-o-jaan bas ek lash hi hai najar atta

Zameen wahin hai magar koi ghar najar nahi atta
Asmaan wahin hai, kyun phir Rub najar nahi atta.........

Wah wah waaaah didi bahut acche..  Applause  Applause
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« Reply #14 on: July 04, 2008, 10:16:37 PM »
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Bilakh raha hai koi, sune koi to uski awaz
Kyun kisi ka bhi dhayan ajkal, kisi per nahi jaata

behad khoobsurat lines he.ek achi kavita.
Aaapki kavita mein tukbandi ki zurrat:

pehchaanta hein hume woh rooh tak,
aur hamari nas-nas se he woh waakif,
us par hamara chalaawa koi asar nahi dhaata,
isiliye asmaan hein wahi pur rub nazar nahi aata!

Wow lovely lines Prateek jee
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