Kab talak, roz, shahnaaz sharmaayegee?

by abdbundeli on May 28, 2010, 05:54:50 PM
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Dilrubaa kee, kabhi to, khabar aayegee!
Saaqiyah jaam sey zeest chhalkaayegee!!

Aab-e-kousar ki mujhko tamannaa nahin;
Jigar-o-dil mein may-e-wasl laharaayegee!

Dam hijaaboun-naqaaboun ka ghut jaayegaa!
Kab talak, roz, shahnaaz sharmaayegee?

Kyoun bhalaa, mousamoun key liye, ham rukeyn?
'Raahrou ho!' Sabaa roz farmaayegee!!

Aashiyaaney tahaniyoun key munhtaaj hain:
Bulbuloun ko yaqeenee samajh aayegee!!

Unko aanaa nahin hai: patah hai mujhey!
Lout aayengey? Qismat hai: itraayegee!!

Unko maaluum hi hai kahaan: ham hain kyaa?
Jaan paayengey jab: jaan ghabraayegee!

Mujhko khud bhi kahaan ilm thaa, ishq mein,
Hijra kee iztaraabi kahar dhhaayegee!!

Aaj bhi, kyaa, 'abd', woh nahin aayengey?
Aaj bhi kyaa na shab, baam mahakaayegee?

      -   abd bundeli

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«Reply #1 on: May 28, 2010, 06:02:16 PM »
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buhat he khoobsurat ghazal hay... beher main jhole baray baray shaairs say aa jaata hay.. lakin aap ne buhat he khoob nibhaaya isay..

achha laga isay parh kar..
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«Reply #2 on: May 28, 2010, 06:18:28 PM »
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buhat he khoobsurat ghazal hay... beher main jhole baray baray shaairs say aa jaata hay.. lakin aap ne buhat he khoob nibhaaya isay..
achha laga isay parh kar..

Shukriyah vb ji!

      - abd bundeli
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«Reply #3 on: May 28, 2010, 07:03:31 PM »
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abd ji,
Bohot hi sundar ghazal ki rachana hai!!!
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«Reply #4 on: May 29, 2010, 06:16:30 AM »
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abd ji,
Bohot hi sundar ghazal ki rachana hai!!!


Shukriyah Bharat ji!

      - abd bundeli
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«Reply #5 on: May 31, 2010, 01:01:01 PM »
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yaad aao gay aye 'abd' tum bhe hamen
jub bhe koi ghazal, dil ko garmayay ge
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«Reply #6 on: May 31, 2010, 04:33:00 PM »
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yaad aao gay aye 'abd' tum bhe hamen
jub bhe koi ghazal, dil ko garmayay ge

Shukriyah aapkaa! Aur, mein kyaa kahuun?
Zeyhn aisaa muqaddas kahaan paauungaa?
Laakh koshish karuungaa, ki, tumsey miluun;
Koun hogaa wahaan, mein jahaan jaauungaa?

Kyaa patah, kyaa kabhi wo gharhee aayegee;
Jab ki, dulhin nigaahoun sey sharmaayegee?
Us ko aanaa hai: shak ismein kyoun ho mujhey?
Apney ghar, saj key, dolee chalee jaayegee!

                         - abd bundeli


                        

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«Reply #7 on: June 01, 2010, 03:20:00 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: June 01, 2010, 08:34:51 PM »
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Wah wah Abd ji bahut khoob,hamesha ki tarah bahut khoobsurti se likha aapne.excellent.keep up the good work Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: June 02, 2010, 06:12:11 AM »
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vb ji, what's this?

            - abd bundeli
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«Reply #10 on: June 02, 2010, 06:13:13 AM »
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Wah wah Abd ji bahut khoob,hamesha ki tarah bahut khoobsurti se likha aapne.excellent.keep up the good work Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thanks a lot, Madhu ji!

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«Reply #11 on: June 02, 2010, 08:42:06 AM »
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abdbundeli jee!

maazrat chahtay hain... aap ne jo sher likhay hamen pasand ayay.. lakin kabhi kabhi alfaaz kho jaatay hain hum say.. so bus ake smile :] .. chor gay hum.. k nishaan rahay k hum ne parh leen aap ki comments...

ye naqsh-e-paa tu samajh lain k is jazeeray pay
bus ik nishaan hay k vb yahan say guzray thay
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«Reply #12 on: June 02, 2010, 03:59:20 PM »
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abdbundeli jee!

maazrat chahtay hain... aap ne jo sher likhay hamen pasand ayay.. lakin kabhi kabhi alfaaz kho jaatay hain hum say.. so bus ake smile :] .. chor gay hum.. k nishaan rahay k hum ne parh leen aap ki comments...

ye naqsh-e-paa tu samajh lain k is jazeeray pay
bus ik nishaan hay k vb yahan say guzray thay


Thanks vb ji!
Sundar hai yeh sher!
                - abd bundeli
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