Ek baat mein ek baat hai......premdeep

by premdeep on November 07, 2013, 10:54:57 PM
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Dil kaise Zakhmi hua
jab nishana gaya chook
tinkon se ghar jal gaya
kya karega thoondh

kaanto se darna kaisa
jab chubne lage phool
Ab khushiyon ke baagon mein
Bas milte rahe babool

Hosh hume ab hai kahan
Gum gaye sab zazbaat
mehkhano ke daman mein
kat ti rahi har raat

Ishwar ka vyopaar bhi
karte hain insaan
Santon ke ab bhesh mein
milte hain saitaan

Kab tak uski yaad mein
Tu aanshu bahaega
Saagar ki talaash kar
daria to mil jaega

Mera dil hai pagal panchi
daal daal mandraega
bhanwra banke gulshan gulshan
pyaar ke phool khilaega
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«Reply #1 on: November 07, 2013, 11:02:19 PM »
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Verryyy niceeee... keep writing...
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«Reply #2 on: November 07, 2013, 11:03:36 PM »
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kaanto se darna kaisa
jab chubne lage phool
Ab khushiyon ke baagon mein
Bas milte rahe babool

bahot khoob... waaahhh....

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«Reply #3 on: November 08, 2013, 12:19:06 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: November 08, 2013, 01:00:33 AM »
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 Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: November 08, 2013, 01:56:56 AM »
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Dil kaise Zakhmi hua
jab nishana gaya chook
tinkon se ghar jal gaya
kya karega thoondh

kaanto se darna kaisa
jab chubne lage phool
Ab khushiyon ke baagon mein
Bas milte rahe babool

Hosh hume ab hai kahan
Gum gaye sab zazbaat
mehkhano ke daman mein
kat ti rahi har raat

Ishwar ka vyopaar bhi
karte hain insaan
Santon ke ab bhesh mein
milte hain saitaan

Kab tak uski yaad mein
Tu aanshu bahaega
Saagar ki talaash kar
daria to mil jaega

Mera dil hai pagal panchi
daal daal mandraega
bhanwra banke gulshan gulshan
pyaar ke phool khilaega



bahot pyari nazam Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: November 08, 2013, 02:05:40 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Waaaah Premdeep ji...bahut achchi nazm rahi... dheron dheron daaaad..
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