Hai vyom bharaa aashaaoN se............Mamta bajpai

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Ashru kee roshnaai se kyaa shabd kavitaa ke likkhooN
hriday me peeRa bahtee hai,kyaa geet prasannataa ke likkhooN

hai vyom bharaa aashaaoN se ,ik aas kiran to mil jaaye
phir tod ke bandhan peeD.aa ke mai chhand madhurtaa ke likkhooN

jeevan path hai kantak van saa,shool virah ke chun le tu
hai madhur-madhur ye milan raagini,tum prem devta mai likkhooN

khol dwaar nij antarmann ke,abhivyakti prem kee hone de
phir louh salaakh see tod. vivashtaa, mai granth satyata kaa likkhooN
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«Reply #1 on: December 13, 2010, 05:44:24 AM »
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bahut khub Mamta ji.
ye ek azeeb se ehsaason ko Lafzon me piroya aapne..
bahut umda --
hats off Mamta ji.
khus rahiye always
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«Reply #2 on: December 13, 2010, 06:37:47 AM »
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Bahut bahut dhanywaad Subhaash jee!
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«Reply #3 on: December 13, 2010, 10:20:42 AM »
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Sudh hindi me bahut he pyaari kavita hai aapki Mamta-di....padh kar mazaa aa gaya di.....

Rakht ki shyahi se vyatha apni kya likhu
Jakhm itne gehre hain,kisise me kya kahu

Eichhayon ka jeevan me samundra bhara hai
Puri ho koi bhi eichha aysi ek lehar tou aaye
Ashru kee roshnaai se kyaa shabd kavitaa ke likkhooN
hriday me peeRa bahtee hai,kyaa geet prasannataa ke likkhooN

hai vyom bharaa aashaaoN se ,ik aas kiran to mil jaaye
phir tod ke bandhan peeD.aa ke mai chhand madhurtaa ke likkhooN

jeevan path hai kantak van saa,shool virah ke chun le tu
hai madhur-madhur ye milan raagini,tum prem devta mai likkhooN

khol dwaar nij antarmann ke,abhivyakti prem kee hone de
phir louh salaakh see tod. vivashtaa, mai granth satyata kaa likkhooN
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«Reply #4 on: December 13, 2010, 11:32:47 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
mamta ji buhat hi sundar rachhna likhi hai aapne.
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«Reply #5 on: December 13, 2010, 11:34:38 AM »
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Bahut hi khoob Mamta ji hearttouching creation,great lines by Koyal sis.excellent,hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: December 14, 2010, 08:23:35 AM »
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mamta di ..bahut hi achha likha hai apne ..

apni likhi huyi ek akvita yad aayi share karta hun ~

ek din maine dil se puchha
kavita kisko kehete hain...uttar aya..
ho saar chhand sangeet may
shrota ke hriday ko chhuu leti
madhur dhwani may bhav si behkar
antah kiran me bhar deti
kavita usko kehete hain -2~
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«Reply #7 on: December 14, 2010, 09:45:18 AM »
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"antah kiran me bhar deti"

ye kya hai Abhi samjhao jara..... tongue3 Giggle....new research....

"Antah-karan ko bhar deti".....ye tou sunna hai.....par

mamta di ..bahut hi achha likha hai apne ..

apni likhi huyi ek akvita yad aayi share karta hun ~

ek din maine dil se puchha
kavita kisko kehete hain...uttar aya..
ho saar chhand sangeet may
shrota ke hriday ko chhuu leti
madhur dhwani may bhav si behkar
antah kiran me bhar deti
kavita usko kehete hain -2~
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«Reply #8 on: December 15, 2010, 05:59:02 AM »
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"antah kiran me bhar deti"

ye kya hai Abhi samjhao jara..... tongue3 Giggle....new research....

"Antah-karan ko bhar deti".....ye tou sunna hai.....par

haan wo karan hi he galti se a ki jagah i type ho gaya~
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«Reply #9 on: December 15, 2010, 06:16:44 AM »
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Bahut hi uttam Mamta Ji
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«Reply #10 on: December 21, 2010, 06:55:08 AM »
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bahut dher saraa shukriyaa Rajesh jee.....
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«Reply #11 on: December 21, 2010, 07:03:01 AM »
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Abhi shatadhik dhanyawaad ke saath kahna chaahoongee ki tum bahut achchha likh lete ho...
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«Reply #12 on: December 21, 2010, 07:06:19 AM »
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Madhu jee zarranawazi ke liye behad shukriyaa!
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«Reply #13 on: December 21, 2010, 07:36:57 AM »
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Ashru kee roshnaai se kyaa shabd kavitaa ke likkhooN
hriday me peeRa bahtee hai,kyaa geet prasannataa ke likkhooN

hai vyom bharaa aashaaoN se ,ik aas kiran to mil jaaye
phir tod ke bandhan peeD.aa ke mai chhand madhurtaa ke likkhooN

jeevan path hai kantak van saa,shool virah ke chun le tu
hai madhur-madhur ye milan raagini,tum prem devta mai likkhooN

khol dwaar nij antarmann ke,abhivyakti prem kee hone de
phir louh salaakh see tod. vivashtaa, mai granth satyata kaa likkhooN
Bahut Khoob Mamta ji! peeda ko shabdo mein pirona koi apse seekhe... bahut khoob! Applause Applause Applause Applause
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