HairaaN hooN kyaa huaa hai..........Mamta Bajpai

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Mujhko milaa hai teraa ye pyaaraa sang abke
udane lagee hai dekho mann kee pataNg abke

aaye shabaab par haiN baarish ke ye nazaare
bajne lagaa hai jaise dil me mridaNg abke

udatee hooN aasmaaN me bin paNkh bin hawaa ke
HairaaN hooN kyaa huaa hai badle haiN dhaNg abke

kaisee chalee hawaa ye zkhmoN ko chhoo gayee hai
surkhee se khil gayaa hai ye khoon e raNg abke

jeetaa hai taaj usne jadd o jahad se aakhir
'Mamta' kee saadee fitarat mushkil hai jaNg abke

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: July 22, 2011, 01:37:16 AM »
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aahhaaaaaaaa mamta ji..kya baat hai lajawab creation ......sply last stanza to bhttttttttttt pasand aaya mujhe

jeetaa hai taaj usne jadd o jahad se aakhir
'Mamta' kee saadee fitarat mushkil hai jaNg abke

kya baat hai iski.......ssuperbbbbbbbbbb ......
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«Reply #2 on: July 22, 2011, 01:39:41 AM »
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Shukriyaa Kasak jee! magar ye to bataaiye aap itane dinoN se theeN kahaaN?
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«Reply #3 on: July 22, 2011, 01:41:31 AM »
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kuch ulajh gai thi....job shuru kiya tha fir ghar ..aur family...time hi nahin mil pa raha tha...ab free hun so wapas apne ghar laut aai.....
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«Reply #4 on: July 22, 2011, 01:45:42 AM »
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Mujhko milaa hai teraa ye pyaaraa sang abke
udane lagee hai dekho mann kee pataNg abke

aaye shabaab par haiN baarish ke ye nazaare
bajne lagaa hai jaise dil me mridaNg abke

udatee hooN aasmaaN me bin paNkh bin hawaa ke
HairaaN hooN kyaa huaa hai badle haiN dhaNg abke

kaisee chalee hawaa ye zkhmoN ko chhoo gayee hai
surkhee se khil gayaa hai ye khoon e raNg abke

jeetaa hai taaj usne jadd o jahad se aakhir
'Mamta' kee saadee fitarat mushkil hai jaNg abke

Mamta Bajpai



Bhuat Bhuat Khoobb
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«Reply #5 on: July 22, 2011, 01:48:36 AM »
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bahot khubsurat post mamta ji …
ekdum superbb…
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«Reply #6 on: July 22, 2011, 02:16:29 AM »
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Lajawab peshkash Mamta ji.bahut hi khoob,excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: July 22, 2011, 02:40:47 AM »
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Mujhko milaa hai teraa ye pyaaraa sang abke
udane lagee hai dekho mann kee pataNg abke

aaye shabaab par haiN baarish ke ye nazaare
bajne lagaa hai jaise dil me mridaNg abke

udatee hooN aasmaaN me bin paNkh bin hawaa ke
HairaaN hooN kyaa huaa hai badle haiN dhaNg abke

kaisee chalee hawaa ye zkhmoN ko chhoo gayee hai
surkhee se khil gayaa hai ye khoon e raNg abke

jeetaa hai taaj usne jadd o jahad se aakhir
'Mamta' kee saadee fitarat mushkil hai jaNg abke

Mamta Bajpai


Waah Waah Waah!!!

Humesha Ki Tarah Bahut bahut Khooob mamtaji..

Aur Vakai Maqta Sabse Khoobsurat Hai..

Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: July 22, 2011, 02:47:44 AM »
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Wah..!! Wah..!!
Bahut khoob..
udte hai aasmaaN me hum bhi bin paNkh bin hawaa ke
HairaaN hooN kyaa huaa hai badle haiN dhaNg abke
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«Reply #9 on: July 22, 2011, 02:56:19 AM »
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aapki ghazal hume behat achhi lagi
daad
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«Reply #10 on: July 22, 2011, 04:45:07 AM »
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Mamtaa Jee Aadaab!

Kia kahne Mamta jee aapke... behad achchi gazal kahi hai
aapne... Radiff aur kafiyaa behad tuff use kiya hai ...

Aur adaygi bhi bahut umdaa rahi... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar khoob hai par Maqta behad khoob raha daad daad..
Aise hi khoob kalaam likhate rahiye...

Aate rahiye... Khush O aabaad rahiye... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         

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«Reply #11 on: July 22, 2011, 09:38:32 AM »
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Shukriyaa Nirala jee!
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«Reply #12 on: July 22, 2011, 09:42:12 AM »
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gazal pasand karne kaa behad shukriyaa Madhu jee!
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«Reply #13 on: July 22, 2011, 11:57:28 AM »
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nice one
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«Reply #14 on: July 22, 2011, 09:32:29 PM »
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Thanks Chitral !
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