"" KASAK ke Alfaaz Chura lu ""

by nirala on January 29, 2011, 10:10:03 AM
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Dl krta hai--
KASAK k alFaz chura lu
RAHIM ki sachai
GEETA k ehsAas to
AZEEM ki gahrai

Dl krta hai--
chura lu KOYAL ki taZgi
aur PRIYA ki baAngi
MATRIX ka andAaz
to SAHIL ki deeWangi

Dl krta hai--
MANJUM ka daRd chura lu
@AKAASH ka anuThapan
VIPUL ki gaZlen aur
ABHI ka ruTba chura lu

Dl krta hai chura lu--
MAMTA ki kaLaam
RISHI ka bhoLapan
NARESH ke shabd
aur AVTAR ka saadaPan

Dl karta hai--
BEKARAAR ki baate
ANAAM ke pyare zazBat
GHAYAL ki misHaalen chura lu

Dl to --------
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«Reply #1 on: January 29, 2011, 10:14:01 AM »
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bht khoob nirala ji.....
mujhe bhi apni poem me includ karne ke liye thanx alot...
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«Reply #2 on: January 29, 2011, 10:17:27 AM »
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nirala ji jaldi complete kijiye isko jaldi.........
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«Reply #3 on: January 29, 2011, 10:22:02 AM »
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wowwwwww.....nirala ji.....bahot khoob sahab........sabko ek jagah ikttha kar diya apne...........maja aa gaya ji..........
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«Reply #4 on: January 29, 2011, 10:23:29 AM »
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ab to Churane se kaam nahi chalega---
Dakaiti karni padegi--
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KHWAHISH ka Dil chura lu
SHIHAAB ki Achhai
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by the way meri iss Kosis ko sarahne ka bahut thanx
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«Reply #5 on: January 29, 2011, 10:40:34 AM »
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Dl krta hai chura lu--
MAMTA ki kaLaam
RISHI ka bhoLapan
NARESH ke shabd
aur AVTAR ka saadaPan


Nirala Ji .. itnii ijazat afzaai ka bahut bahut shukriya !

saath hi itnii khoobsurat rachnaa likhne ke liye ... dil se daad ...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

aise hi likhte rahen aur aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ... !
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«Reply #6 on: January 29, 2011, 11:49:24 AM »
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veru nice niraala ji
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«Reply #7 on: January 29, 2011, 01:07:11 PM »
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sab ka sab kuch chura liye mera dil bada hai mai khud hi de deta hun tumhe ---kishan this is a trully friends Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: January 29, 2011, 01:11:54 PM »
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mera bhi kuch chura lete bhai--
mai thode na naaraz hota.
wese achha kiya mere pass hai bhi nahi kuch churwane ke liye:)Usual Smile
hehe bahut badhiya
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«Reply #9 on: January 29, 2011, 02:33:07 PM »
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Bahut khoob nirala ji...Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: January 29, 2011, 02:59:44 PM »
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Apka teh dil se shukriya izzat kay liye..
bahaut acha likha apne..!
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: January 29, 2011, 05:19:10 PM »
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Bahut Khub Nirala Ji Bahut Hi Sundar Likha Hai Apane ApplauseApplause
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«Reply #12 on: January 29, 2011, 05:47:57 PM »
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thanx aal---
meri nakaam si kosis ko sarahne ke liye.
kuch galat laga ho kisi ko forgive kariyega.
thanx
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«Reply #13 on: January 30, 2011, 10:05:55 AM »
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thanx Rishi ji---
Matrix ji aapko bhi thanx.
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«Reply #14 on: February 03, 2011, 11:15:23 AM »
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shukriya niralaji   

bahut khub sab ke bare main jo likha ek dam sahi hai par han.. ham apna dard aapko nahin dende....

koi apne dil ki dhadkan deta hai kya......
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