"" khaali paimaana hai "" 'nir'

by nirala on February 20, 2011, 09:09:02 PM
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ye jo darya hai bahta hua
khaali paimana hai chalkta hua

barbadi ka ek jharoka sa
bebasi ke daaman simta hua

dukane shahar ki sazi hain, murdon ki
har libaas me kafan sa dikhta hua

chehre ki lalima me dikhti, khbsurti sabki
dil ki hasar hai mita hua

beqabu se ufnaate hain, khud ko sb
chamchamati baharon me chupta hua

sadiyon ki pyas hai,jo mitt-ti nhi
shihrati kuch ehsas hain chubhta hua

kaanton ki sez hai Makhmali sa 'nir'
nange badan hi sona hai--
tapake lahu chahe rissta hua !
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«Reply #1 on: February 20, 2011, 10:58:53 PM »
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Bahut Khub Nirala JI Bahut Hi Umda Likhte Ho Bhai
Bus U Hi likhte Rahiye Humesha Aur Humesha Khush Rahiye
EXcellent Bhai
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«Reply #2 on: February 21, 2011, 01:41:21 PM »
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bahut bahut sukriya Rishi bhai.
aur mai itna bhi umda nahi likhta dear.
apne ko pata hai apni kabiliyat bhai.
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«Reply #3 on: February 21, 2011, 05:12:28 PM »
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wah niralaji kya baat hai....

kanto ki sez hai....... wali line ko mahsus kar aansu aa gaye....
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«Reply #4 on: February 21, 2011, 05:45:13 PM »
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arre Manju sahiba--
aansu na bahaiye
mere post se aansu nhi aate.
hasi ke phool aate hain.
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«Reply #5 on: February 21, 2011, 06:08:12 PM »
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kya kahne nirala ji....
bht bht khoob ji....
sply last one...
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«Reply #6 on: February 21, 2011, 06:13:13 PM »
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bahut saara dhanyabaad Manjile sahiba.
aapko ek line bhi pasand aa jaye to dil khus ho jaata hai iss utpatangi nirala ka
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«Reply #7 on: February 21, 2011, 06:21:52 PM »
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ye jo darya hai bahta hua
khaali paimana hai chalkta hua

barbadi ka ek jharoka sa
bebasi ke daaman simta hua

dukane shahar ki sazi hain, murdon ki
har libaas me kafan sa dikhta hua

chehre ki lalima me dikhti, khbsurti sabki
dil ki hasar hai mita hua

beqabu se ufnaate hain, khud ko sb
chamchamati baharon me chupta hua

sadiyon ki pyas hai,jo mitt-ti nhi
shihrati kuch ehsas hain chubhta hua

kaanton ki sez hai Makhmali sa 'nir'
nange badan hi sona hai--
tapake lahu chahe rissta hua !


outstanding dost........!!!!!!!! veri naaaaaice
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«Reply #8 on: February 21, 2011, 06:31:43 PM »
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oops Khamosh ji.
aapka ye comnt bahut Kimti hai ji. shayd aaj pahli baar aise shabd kisi ne reply me kaha.
mai iss kimti coment ke layak nahi hu sirji.
aapka behad sukriya jo aapne pasand kiya.
khus rahiye dost
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