"" khud apne hi dum fisal jata hai ""

by nirala on September 04, 2011, 11:51:15 PM
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""
zarre zarre jo dhal jata hai
khud apne hi dum fisal jata hai

sitaaron ki ginti jo kare ungliyan
aasmaa saroN se nikal jata hai

na chala kabhi jo kadam ki doori
meelon kaise wo chal jata hai

karishmai ye nazaaren jo hain kudrati
naazuk badan me wo dhal jata hai

sham o shahar jo firta raha
pal me hi ab wo thahar jata hai

mohabbt ka jaadoo jo na samjha kabhi
aansuon se wo bhi sanwar jata hai
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«Reply #1 on: September 05, 2011, 12:00:48 AM »
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S firaa jee Aadaab!

Waah janab waah bahut khoob kafi umdaa koshish rahi aapki
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Khayaal bhi khoob aur ashaar bhi achche kaheN hai Usual Smile

Par janab aakhri do sher ke kafiye kyuN badal diye ?
Wel bahut khoob daad Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Khush o aabaad rahiye.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: September 30, 2011, 10:34:50 PM »
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S firaa jee Aadaab!

Waah janab waah bahut khoob kafi umdaa koshish rahi aapki
daad daad daad Usual Smile

Khayaal bhi khoob aur ashaar bhi achche kaheN hai Usual Smile

Par janab aakhri do sher ke kafiye kyuN badal diye ?
Wel bahut khoob daad Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Khush o aabaad rahiye.. Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         


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