Khud se mulaqaat

by tamanna.pt on April 26, 2010, 12:53:00 PM
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     Doston ab tak 2=4 kalaam jitna bhi likha hai, hamesha shayari-e-dard par hi likh pai hoon , jaise k  nirupa roy ki aatma ghus gai ho hamare andar .Giggle  isliy ab k kuch alag likhne ki bahut mamuli si koshish ki hai, umeed karti hoon k itna bhi bura na likh diya ho k padhne walon ko mujhe gusse me shraap dekar bandar ya bhaalu banana padh jay,gar aisa hua to ab to jungle bhi khatm hogay kahan jaunghi main. Feared.


                      Auron se kaha bahut,auron se suna bahut,
                      Kabhi khud se bhi do-baat ho jay,
                      Aao zara khud se mulaqaat ho jay.

                      Maathe ki salvatoon me hain,jane kitne baras shamil,
                      Kya kho diya inme,aur kya kiya haasil,
                      Hisab karein jo inka,chand aise sawalaat hojay.
                      Aao zara khud se mulaqaat hojay.

                      Seene me reh gai thi jo khwaishein dabkar,
                      Kuch farz ki gard me thi dhaki,
                      to kuch chhupi thi zamane se darkar,
                      Unko paane ki fir nai shuruvaat hojay.
                      Aao zara khud se mulaaqat ho jay.

                      Chadhe jab rang zamane k,khogaya asli chehra,
                      Apna tha wo jaisa bhi ho bhala ya bura,
                      Dho de jo rang banavat k,aisi ek barsaat ho jay.
                      Aao zara khud se mulaqaat hojay.

                      Mutthi bhar hausla lekar chale the kya pane manzil,
                      Jo umr aadhi na hui,or dagmagane laga dil
                      Fir haasil nai himmat nay zazbaat hojay.
                      Aao zara khud se mulaqaat hojay

                      Aisi ho paak rooh meri k dekhu aaina jab bhi abse,
                      Na shikwa rahe zamane se, or na gila ho khud se,
                      Karuun koshish to shayad,mumkin ye bhi karamaat hojay,
                      Aoo zara khud se mulaqaat hojay.
                      


                                
                            ----Tamanna----
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«Reply #1 on: April 26, 2010, 01:01:24 PM »
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wah bhai wah chupe rustam ho app .. jungle jaane ki zarorath nahi jageet ke paas jao wo isko gunguna kar nayab kar denge .. wah bahoth qoob nazm kahi hai .. apki ki sabhi taqleeqon se niraali hai ye ..bada maza aaya .. har band sachai pe mabni .. dili dad qubool kijiye ..allah apko khush rakhe ..


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«Reply #2 on: April 26, 2010, 01:30:29 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Tamannaji..

Bahut Khoobsurat Nazm.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: April 26, 2010, 01:54:23 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Tamanna ji... bahut khoob... Qadeer ji ne apne shabdon me khoob kaha hai ki aap ise lekar Jagjeet ji k paas jaayen wo isko gunguna k nayaab kar denge...

raat andheri k baad jab sawera ho jaaye,
aankh khule jis pal me jis pal hum jag jaayen,
josh ko dil me liye, aur hosh ko apne liye,
zindagi k is safar me kuch kadam hum badh jaayen,
aao zara ji bhar k khud se baat ho jaaye,
zindagi k is safar me hum bhi kuch kar jaayen...
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«Reply #4 on: April 26, 2010, 02:51:37 PM »
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its really a nice poem tamanna ji........fantastic poem....

CLAPPINGS only for u from my side....
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«Reply #5 on: April 26, 2010, 03:35:57 PM »
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Waah bahut hi khoob.......bahut hi pyara likha hai tammana ji......
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Itna pyara likh kar daron mat......koi aapko yha bandar ya bhaalu nahi banaane waala......keep writnig..... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #6 on: April 26, 2010, 03:45:22 PM »
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Bohat ACHCHE Tamanna Ji Pardhke Khushi Hui,.
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«Reply #7 on: April 26, 2010, 08:22:37 PM »
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Behtareen Nazm hai Tamanna Ji Pardhkar Khushi Hui...daad hazir hai qubul farmayen.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: April 27, 2010, 07:00:05 AM »
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Bahut khoob Tamanna Ji
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«Reply #9 on: April 27, 2010, 11:37:27 AM »
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Bahot khoob Tamnna ji bahot behtareen aur shandaar nazm likhi hai aapne. Hazaron daad hazir hain.
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«Reply #10 on: April 27, 2010, 09:19:01 PM »
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Bhut Khoob .....

Very Very Gud!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #11 on: April 28, 2010, 06:10:07 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai     Tamanaa pt ji........


Bahut suna aur bahut kaha zamaane ne hamko
kya khubiya hai kya kamiya hai jaan na jaruri hai ab toh
chalo aaj ham khud ko hi samajh lete hai
kitna khud par aur kitna zamaane pe karen yakeen
ye jan lete hai apne aap se baat kar lete hai
chalo aaj ham Khud se mulaqaat kar lete hai.....
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«Reply #12 on: April 28, 2010, 09:01:59 AM »
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EK KHOOBSURAT NAZAM................LIKHA HAI Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: April 28, 2010, 10:06:08 AM »
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tamanna ji bahut khoob likha hai humen to bahut pasand aaya. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #14 on: May 12, 2010, 05:18:28 AM »
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tamanna ji bahut khoob likha hai humen to bahut pasand aaya. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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