Kis tarah ka pyar karta hai

by Pooja on December 18, 2008, 10:34:35 PM
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«Reply #105 on: December 28, 2008, 09:36:32 AM »
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Bahut badiya contribution from both of you Pooja Ji and Shivam Ji

bahoot bahoot shukaria Rajesh ji
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«Reply #106 on: December 28, 2008, 09:45:36 AM »
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man.na padega apki hajir jawabi ko Pank ji... bahoot khoob!!

sahi kaha apne, bewafa se wafa paai nahi jaati
kitna bhi sambhalein, unse kahi baat, nibhai nahi jaati

Umindon ko jaga kar, zakhamo ko de jaana
zakhmo per phir koi dawa, unse lagai nahi jaati

apni her baat per, duhaai de de ke rona
doosro ke ansoo per, koi sunwaai karwai nahi jaati

mat fafole mere zakhmo ko, dard ka lava na bhabhak jaaye
shabdo se her dard ko, sbar ki baat samjhaai nahi jaati

Nice one Poojaji


Kabhi pyar karte ho, toh kabhi bewafayi ka ilzam lagate ho...
Apne zakhmo ka naam lekar, sare ashk meri aankho se bahate ho...

Na to mohhabat ka izhar karte ho na thik se nafrat ka ehsas karate ho...
Ham to har lamhe me jalte hai aapke zakhmo ki aag me
           Jane aap bhi ye jahar kyun chupchap piye jate ho...

Hamne to mangi hai bs khushi aapke liye,
Kyun fir apni khushiyo ki khatir, apna hi dil dukhate ho...

~Pank~
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«Reply #107 on: December 29, 2008, 07:07:38 PM »
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Nice one Poojaji


Kabhi pyar karte ho, toh kabhi bewafayi ka ilzam lagate ho...
Apne zakhmo ka naam lekar, sare ashk meri aankho se bahate ho...

Na to mohhabat ka izhar karte ho na thik se nafrat ka ehsas karate ho...
Ham to har lamhe me jalte hai aapke zakhmo ki aag me
           Jane aap bhi ye jahar kyun chupchap piye jate ho...

Hamne to mangi hai bs khushi aapke liye,
Kyun fir apni khushiyo ki khatir, apna hi dil dukhate ho...

~Pank~

Bahoot khoob Pank ji

na jaanu ajj main, kaya zajbaat hai mere
hai pyar tujhse, magar krodh ke baadal bhi hai ghanere

kaya main chaha, kaya tune kar dala, andhkaar main hai mere sawere
Izhaar kaya karu, kis ka karu main, zakham diye tune bathere (bahoot)

khushi dete dete, zakhami kar diya yah mera jeevan
her pal ab yahi sochu, aor jeevan ke din kitne hai bachere (bache)
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«Reply #108 on: December 29, 2008, 07:11:04 PM »
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Bahoot khoob Pank ji

na jaanu ajj main, kaya zajbaat hai mere
hai pyar tujhse, magar krodh ke baadal bhi hai ghanere

kaya main chaha, kaya tune kar dala, andhkaar main hai mere sawere
Izhaar kaya karu, kis ka karu main, zakham diye tune bathere (bahoot)

khushi dete dete, zakhami kar diya yah mera jeevan
her pal ab yahi sochu, aor jeevan ke din kitne hai bachere (bache)

Nice One Poojaji
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«Reply #109 on: December 29, 2008, 07:17:50 PM »
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Shukaria Pank ji... magar jawab kaha hai  DOH
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«Reply #110 on: December 29, 2008, 07:25:51 PM »
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Shukaria Pank ji... magar jawab kaha hai  DOH
Lijiye Poojaji Reply hajir hai...


"Tera har iljaam sachha tha,aaj bewafayi hi meri fitrat hai...
Kya pyar karega ab ye dil kisise tut kar,jise khud se hi beinteha nafrat hai...

Har pal diya ek naya zakhma tujhe,
             Fir bhi teri aankho me dard aur muhabbat hai,
Aankhe nahi mila sakta ab mai tujhse,
             Tu khush rahe yahi aakhiri hasrat hai...

~Pank~
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«Reply #111 on: December 29, 2008, 08:20:49 PM »
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BAHOOT KHOOB pank ji... 

na koi hasrat, na hi koi armaan hai baki
jimmedaria hai bahoot, na jaane waqat hai kitna baki

Teri nahi, teri di sogato ki ab baat karte hai
nibha sake ab yah, bas Rub se itani si dua hai baki
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«Reply #112 on: December 29, 2008, 08:32:41 PM »
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BAHOOT KHOOB pank ji... 

na koi hasrat, na hi koi armaan hai baki
jimmedaria hai bahoot, na jaane waqat hai kitna baki

Teri nahi, teri di sogato ki ab baat karte hai
nibha sake ab yah, bas Rub se itani si dua hai baki

Nice Poojaji


Tadpata hai tujhe bhi har lamha tanhayi ka,
Kaise laun vo mausam fir se, jab har taraf hai manzar meri bewafayi ka...

Roshan hai aaj bhi dil me shama us pyar ki,
Fir kyun aaya vo bedard lamha apni judayi ka...

~Pank~
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«Reply #113 on: December 29, 2008, 08:36:22 PM »
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bahoot khoob Pank ji.. bahoot achi tarah se apne phir se thread ko ek morr de diya.. Good one


Na rula, ab kah kar is tarah ki baatein
loot chuka sab, ab kon se mosam ki baatein

Roshan ab yah dil-o-jaan ho nahi sakte
na kar phir se un mulakato ki baatein

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«Reply #114 on: December 30, 2008, 01:40:50 AM »
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bahoot khoob Pank ji.. bahoot achi tarah se apne phir se thread ko ek morr de diya.. Good one


Na rula, ab kah kar is tarah ki baatein
loot chuka sab, ab kon se mosam ki baatein

Roshan ab yah dil-o-jaan ho nahi sakte
na kar phir se un mulakato ki baatein


Bahoot Khoob Poojaji

Ek vohi to manzar hai jo jeene ka sahara hai
Dil ki keetab ke har panne pe meri bevafayi ka nazara hai....

Saf hai har baat ab shishe ki tarah,
Kaid hai tu tute jasbaato ki giraft me, jiska ilzam deke duniya ne mujhe pukara hai...

Har sans adhuri si hai unn yaado ke bina aab toh,
Jo gam tha aaj tak sath mere, jane kaise ab vo tumhara hai...

Har taraf sirf meri bawafyi ka nazara hai...

~Pank~
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«Reply #115 on: December 30, 2008, 05:01:14 PM »
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bahoot khoob Pank ji, kamal ka ki kalam hai apki aor us per kamaal ka apka sabar.. itne sabar ke sath to koi apni bewafai na nibhaye.. jis sabar aor pyar ke sath app kisi aor ki bewafaai ko nibha rahe hai.. wow good job!!

apne manjar ko rakhon dil main, mujhe na wo manjar dikhao
tadap tadap kar bitaai zindagi, ab na kuch aor bhi yaad dilao

shishe ki tarah jo hoti baat saaf, ajj juda hum nahi hote
toote shishein ki kirchan, ab na aor mere zakhmo per lagao

her mera gum, ab barsega teri ankhoi se, yah sada bhi sunte jaao
na main pukaru tumko ab, na yah dunia pukare tumko ab,
meri tarah tum bhi apna jeevan, ab tanhaai main betaaao

 


kadve shabdo ke liye maafi chahti hu, magar apki kavita parr kar jo man main ayya, is baar bina kisi rok ke sidha yaha likh diya
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«Reply #116 on: December 30, 2008, 05:17:08 PM »
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bahoot khoob Pank ji, kamal ka ki kalam hai apki aor us per kamaal ka apka sabar.. itne sabar ke sath to koi apni bewafai na nibhaye.. jis sabar aor pyar ke sath app kisi aor ki bewafaai ko nibha rahe hai.. wow good job!!

apne manjar ko rakhon dil main, mujhe na wo manjar dikhao
tadap tadap kar bitaai zindagi, ab na kuch aor bhi yaad dilao

shishe ki tarah jo hoti baat saaf, ajj juda hum nahi hote
toote shishein ki kirchan, ab na aor mere zakhmo per lagao

her mera gum, ab barsega teri ankhoi se, yah sada bhi sunte jaao
na main pukaru tumko ab, na yah dunia pukare tumko ab,
meri tarah tum bhi apna jeevan, ab tanhaai main betaaao

 


kadve shabdo ke liye maafi chahti hu, magar apki kavita parr kar jo man main ayya, is baar bina kisi rok ke sidha yaha likh diya


Bahoot Khoob Poojaji
Ilzamo ke liye Shukriya
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Kitani aasani se tanhayi ka faisla suna diya,
Lab muskuraye tere faisle pe, Par dil ne aankho ko rula diya...

Ham to maut ki chahat me jeete rahe dur tujhse,
Tune har lamhe me mujhe maut se mila diya...

Kaise karu tere dil ki khalish ko dur apne aansuo se,
Jab aankhe bhigi tujhe yad karke,tune apni nazro ko hata diya...

Jab bhi aasiyana banana chaha teri khushi ki khatir,
Tumne har khwab meri aankho me hi jala diya...

~Pank~
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«Reply #117 on: December 30, 2008, 05:30:24 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Poojaji
Ilzamo ke liye Shukriya
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Kitani aasani se tanhayi ka faisla suna diya,
Lab muskuraye tere faisle pe, Par dil ne aankho ko rula diya...

Ham to maut ki chahat me jeete rahe dur tujhse,
Tune har lamhe me mujhe maut se mila diya...

Kaise karu tere dil ki khalish ko dur apne aansuo se,
Jab aankhe bhigi tujhe yad karke,tune apni nazro ko hata diya...

Jab bhi aasiyana banana chaha teri khushi ki khatir,
Tumne har khwab meri aankho me hi jala diya...

~Pank~

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ek ek line kamal ki likhi hai Pank ji, dil ko jhanjhorne wali.. bahoot khoob.. jitna kadva maine jawab likha tha, utne he shehad se bhare shabd apne likh diye.. bahoot khoob.. dil se salaam apki is kavita ko..

yah line dil ko bahoot ander tak chu gai:

Ham to maut ki chahat me jeete rahe dur tujhse,
Tune har lamhe me mujhe maut se mila diya...


roya hai yah dil saalo saal mera
ant main yahi tanhaai to paai hai
na roye teri ankhia meri tarah salo saal
issi liye yah baat humne sunai hai

Mout teri se pahle ayegi mout meri
phir kyun is tarah ki dua sunai hai

pathar nahi hu main, khud he kabhi socha hota
humne to patharo ke bich main bhi jheel (lake) paai hai

mera ashiana tha sirf teri yah do baahein
jis main na jaane kitani bewafaai samai hai

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«Reply #118 on: December 30, 2008, 06:27:26 PM »
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ek ek line kamal ki likhi hai Pank ji, dil ko jhanjhorne wali.. bahoot khoob.. jitna kadva maine jawab likha tha, utne he shehad se bhare shabd apne likh diye.. bahoot khoob.. dil se salaam apki is kavita ko..

yah line dil ko bahoot ander tak chu gai:

Ham to maut ki chahat me jeete rahe dur tujhse,
Tune har lamhe me mujhe maut se mila diya...


roya hai yah dil saalo saal mera
ant main yahi tanhaai to paai hai
na roye teri ankhia meri tarah salo saal
issi liye yah baat humne sunai hai

Mout teri se pahle ayegi mout meri
phir kyun is tarah ki dua sunai hai

pathar nahi hu main, khud he kabhi socha hota
humne to patharo ke bich main bhi jheel (lake) paai hai

mera ashiana tha sirf teri yah do baahein
jis main na jaane kitani bewafaai samai hai


shukriya Poojaji

Meri bewafayi beshaq abb meri zingadi ka hissa hai,
Bayan nahi kar sakta ye kis kadar ab is dil me samayi hai...

Tere dard ka ehsah utna hi gahara hai
Jitani is dil me mere zakhmo ki gahrayi hai...

Tujhe yaad hai darad ka aalam hai ab shayad,
Mera pyar bhul gayi ho shayad jiski jagah ab sirf Bewafayi hai...

Har mukam pe rota hun sisak kar yad karke tujhe,
Par ya karu ab tujhe yad karne ke siva, jab meri kismat me tanhayi hai...

Teri raho pe phool ki tarah sanse bhichi thi meri,
Aaj sari rah pe sirf in sanso ki rusvayi hai...

~Pank~
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«Reply #119 on: December 30, 2008, 06:34:57 PM »
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Aaapne Har line pe ilzam lagaya , to hamne koshish ki, i aapko reply de sake, but aap rukne walo me se nahi hain, ilzam pe ilzam laga rahi hai tongue3
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