Kis tarah ka pyar karta hai

by Pooja on December 18, 2008, 10:34:35 PM
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pankshivam
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«Reply #45 on: December 24, 2008, 07:07:08 AM »
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Shukriya Pank ji,

Par agar aap hame Shally kahe to behtar lagega...

Shally.
Oki Shally ji Ab se aapko Shally hi Kahenge  wave
Aapke Baat Sar Aakho pe Miss
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #46 on: December 24, 2008, 07:21:06 AM »
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Oki Shally Sahab Ab se aapko Shally hi Kahenge  wave
Aapke Baat Sar Aakho pe Sir
Shivam Ji mere khayaal se Shally Shahiba hai Shahab nahi
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k.shael
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«Reply #47 on: December 24, 2008, 07:37:21 AM »
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Shivam Ji mere khayaal se Shally Shahiba hai Shahab nahi

Bilkul sahi kaha rajesh ji...

shukriya...
Shally.
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pankshivam
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«Reply #48 on: December 24, 2008, 07:38:30 AM »
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Shivam Ji mere khayaal se Shally Shahiba hai Shahab nahi
Rajesh ji Hame pata nahi tha agar Shally Sahiba hain to
Sahiba hi Sahi Hame Koi Aaitraz nahi hai tongue3
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k.shael
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«Reply #49 on: December 24, 2008, 07:44:55 AM »
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Rajesh ji Hame pata nahi tha agar Shally Sahiba hain to
Sahiba hi Sahi Hame Koi Aaitraz nahi hai tongue3

Aitraaj to kisi ko bhi nahi hai pank ji,

bass kabhi kabhi galat fehmiyaan hi aachi lagne
lagti hai...

don't mind,

anyway Shukriya,

Shally.
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pankshivam
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«Reply #50 on: December 24, 2008, 08:26:47 AM »
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Aitraaj to kisi ko bhi nahi hai pank ji,

bass kabhi kabhi galat fehmiyaan hi aachi lagne
lagti hai...

don't mind,

anyway Shukriya,

Shally.

Samjhne me Bhool huyi  icon_scratch uski Mafi chahata hun  sad5
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Always Welcome Shallyji
Comments achhe lage Thanx  happy9
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k.shael
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«Reply #51 on: December 24, 2008, 10:05:19 AM »
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Samjhne me Bhool huyi  icon_scratch uski Mafi chahata hun  sad5
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Always Welcome Shallyji
Comments achhe lage Thanx  happy9

It's ok ji,

I know naam se pata nahi chal paata,

anyway aacha hua aapse pehchaan ho gayi isi bahane,

Shally.
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Pooja
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«Reply #52 on: December 24, 2008, 04:57:45 PM »
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bahoot bahoot shukaria Pank ji, kamal ka jawab likha hai apne.. bahoot khoob  Applause Applause Applause

Rula chuke ho bahoot aor kitna rulaoge
her mulakaat ka ant ek zakham, kab tak diye jaoge

na bas main tere zajbaat, na mujh main sabar baki hai
kab tak humari zindaio ko, tum dhoke diye jaoge

Rula chuke ho bahoot aor kitna rulaoge
her mulakaat ka ant ek zakham, kab tak diye jaoge



Shukriya Pooja ji Khubsurat sawalo aur ilzamo ke liye Bahoot Bahoot Shukriya



Jo zakhma diye hai maine,
          Unme mere ask bhi behate paoge...
Khushiya to do pal ki thi shayad,
          Zakhm mere zindagi bhar na bhulaoge...
Yaado ka fasana bana diya baato bato me,
          Un baato ki yaado ko kaise tum mitaoge...
Har yaad ne kitna tadpaya hai mujhe,
          Meri aankho me gaur se dekhoge to jaan jaoge....
Milega har sawal ka jawab,
          Jab bhi mujh pe bewafayi ka ilzam lagaoge....

~Pank~


Wah kaya baat hai Pank ji, jitne dil se main is thread main likh rahi hu, usi dil se shayad app jawab de rahe hai.. her ek jawab apka, ek skoon de jaata hai.. tahe dil se shukaria is thread mai sath dene ke liye!!
ek ek line zindagi ki haqiqat bayan karti hui... aor last line main Ilzaam laker bhi khud ko begunah kar gaye app.. bahoot khoob!!!


dil mera roya itna salo saal,
kuch to ansoo tum bhi ab bahne do...
khushio ke wo pal ban gaye yaadein
inhein bhi ab kahin daffan hone do...
Zakhamo tere ka, nahi koi hisaab
ho sake to, yah silsilla ab band hone do...
tadpayegi meri yaadein til til tujhko
apne gunaah kuch issi tarah kam hone do..
her khushi di maine aor badle main gum aor jillat payi hai
ajj kahti hu jo itna kadva, na kahna kuch, mujhe kahne do..
na he tujhse hai koi sawal, na de sakega tu koi bhi jawab
Dukhon apne main, ajj jo behakati hai Pooja
bna roke use koi, use khud he khud main behkane do..
 
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«Reply #53 on: December 24, 2008, 05:11:07 PM »
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wow each and every one's creations are wonderful ... lajawab..

Pank ji, pooja di, shael ji.... sab ne itna accha likha k manko
bahut accha laga padkar... good good very good  Applause
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Pooja
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«Reply #54 on: December 24, 2008, 06:13:12 PM »
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bahoot bahoot shukaria Sonia!!

Yah thread such main one of my fav. thread ban gaya hai Yoindia per. Pank ji ka yah sehyog bahoot srahniye hai!!
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«Reply #55 on: December 24, 2008, 06:18:28 PM »
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bahut khoob....poojaji aap ki shikayat aur pankji ki safai unki oor se jin per ilzam he....
sunder sabdo me dhala ye sawal-javab....
dil ko chhoota hain is kadar jaise koi vakya hai mere hi phachan walon ka.... Applause Applause Applause Applause

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Bahoot Khoob Poojaji Reply karna aur mushkil ho raha hai
sirf koshish kar raha hun...


Ye meelo ki khamosi ye sadiyo ki tanhayi...
Bevafayi ka iljam tha mujhpe,aur teri rusvayi...

Khamosh khada raha har manzil pe akela...
Nahi kahunga ke kis lamhe me teri yaad nahi aayi...

Sawalo ke javab kya dun jab khud hi uljha hun kahi sawalo me...
Mere gamo ki tanhayi me, aur teri rusvayi ke iljamo me...

Aankho se chalkte hai ashq to chipau kaise...
Jo duriya bani hai sadiyo ki bich hamari chahkar bhi ab unhe mitau kaise....

Aaj fir faslo pe tere sisakne ki sada aayi hai...
Fir me khamosh khada hun,aur mujhpe hasti huyi ye meri tanhayi hai

~Pank~
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Pooja
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«Reply #56 on: December 24, 2008, 06:40:42 PM »
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bahoot bahoot shukaria smardia ji!!

Pahli kavita he maine khud likhi hai.. baki sab to Pank ji ki shayri likhwati ja rahi hai!!!
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dead heart
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«Reply #57 on: December 24, 2008, 08:46:24 PM »
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wah wah wah wah...pad raha tha main aur har lavz uttar raha tha dil main...zindagi ke rang dikhane ke liye lavzon se acha kuch nahin aur Pank jee and Pooja jee ne yeh sabit kardia...

aap log bahaut ache shaer hai..yeh main dil se kehta hoon...its from the core of my heart....a very beautiful conversation...beautiful writing...

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dead heart
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«Reply #58 on: December 24, 2008, 09:03:42 PM »
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tum bewaffa ho par tumhe rote hue main dekh nahin sakta,
mana ke woh yaadein hai magar apne woh pal main asani se dafnate hue dekh nahin sakta...

itne zakhm khaye hai maine ke unka hisaab main rakh nahin sakta,
tere se pyar karke hi maine gunaah kardia ab toh yeh haal ke uski maafi bhi main mang nahin sakta...

bewaffa nikli tu isiliye khuda se tere ache kaamon ka badla mang nahin sakta,
dafan hogaya dil mera teri bewaffai se ab teri kadvi baatein main sun nahin sakta...

tujhe mere sawal karne ka haq main tujhe de nahin sakta,
afsos toh iss baat ka hai ke khuda ke kehne pe bhi bewaffai karne ki saza main tujhe de nahin sakta...


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«Reply #59 on: December 24, 2008, 09:53:05 PM »
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So wonderful Deadheart Ji
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