koi nari ki izzat ki parwah karta mere khuda.. charan

by lovely_charan on December 20, 2012, 02:35:49 AM
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rom rom mera kaamp utha aaj yeh sunkar..
kyun haalat hai nari ki is desh mein badtar..

puja karte hain log mandir mein devi ko..
raundh dete hain sadkon pe medhavi ko..

wehasi jaanwar ban gaye hain rakshak sab..
andhere mein milkar nochte hain bhakshak sab..

yeh kaisi ladhayi hai khud se koi bataye..
main kahan surakshit hun mujhe koi bataye..

kabhi anjaane chehron se aisa dar na tha..
kabhi itna andheron ka bhi kehar na tha..

magar aaj rooh bhi jarzar ho uthi hai meri..
sunkar kahaani uski kalam ro uthi hai meri..

kaise kahun ki desh yeh sone ki chidhiya tha..
har bachchi ko kaha jata yahan gudiya tha..

aaj usi gudiya ki asmat daav pe lagi dekho..
insaan ki shaql mein ghumte bhediye dekho..

koi sazaa inke liye kafi nahi hai ae khuda..
koi nari ki izzat ki parwah karta mere khuda..
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«Reply #1 on: December 20, 2012, 03:13:59 AM »
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very touching, yeh asliyat hai aur humare desh ki vidambana hai ki doshiyo ko saja nahi mil pati. Mere vichar se aise darindo ke liye phansi bhi kam hai. Jab tak desh mein sakht kanoon nahi banenge, tab tak yeh sab hota rahega. Aaj FDI sansad mein pass hota, promotion aarakshan bill pass ho jata hai, par aisa kanoon pass karne ki koi neta nahi sochta kyonki ve bhi iss karya mein kahin na kahin lipt hain.
DESH MEIN KARE KANOON AUR BILL KI JROORAT HAI.
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«Reply #2 on: December 20, 2012, 03:18:02 AM »
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very touching, yeh asliyat hai aur humare desh ki vidambana hai ki doshiyo ko saja nahi mil pati. Mere vichar se aise darindo ke liye phansi bhi kam hai. Jab tak desh mein sakht kanoon nahi banenge, tab tak yeh sab hota rahega. Aaj FDI sansad mein pass hota, promotion aarakshan bill pass ho jata hai, par aisa kanoon pass karne ki koi neta nahi sochta kyonki ve bhi iss karya mein kahin na kahin lipt hain.
DESH MEIN KARE KANOON AUR BILL KI JROORAT HAI.
jee bilkul sahi kaha apne.. main puri tarah se sehmat hun...
apne ghar ki betiyon ko bachate hain aur dusro ka kya..
akhir kuch toh hona hi chahiye,,
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«Reply #3 on: December 20, 2012, 03:44:54 AM »
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a truth very nicely written....
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«Reply #4 on: December 20, 2012, 03:46:28 AM »
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thank you very much aqsh ji..
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«Reply #5 on: December 20, 2012, 04:35:14 AM »
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bahut bahut sunder bahut sunder dher saaraa pyaar aur aasheerwaad khoob achhaa likho betee
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bahut bahut sunder bahut sunder dher saaraa pyaar aur aasheerwaad khoob achhaa likho betee
thank you very very much sir... koshish karungi acha likhne ki. apka sath milta rahe bas..
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«Reply #7 on: December 20, 2012, 01:24:00 PM »
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thank u hriday ji.......
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«Reply #9 on: December 20, 2012, 10:39:18 PM »
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rom rom mera kaamp utha aaj yeh sunkar..
kyun haalat hai nari ki is desh mein badtar..

puja karte hain log mandir mein devi ko..
raundh dete hain sadkon pe medhavi ko..

wehasi jaanwar ban gaye hain rakshak sab..
andhere mein milkar nochte hain bhakshak sab..

yeh kaisi ladhayi hai khud se koi bataye..
main kahan surakshit hun mujhe koi bataye..

kabhi anjaane chehron se aisa dar na tha..
kabhi itna andheron ka bhi kehar na tha..

magar aaj rooh bhi jarzar ho uthi hai meri..
sunkar kahaani uski kalam ro uthi hai meri..

kaise kahun ki desh yeh sone ki chidhiya tha..
har bachchi ko kaha jata yahan gudiya tha..

aaj usi gudiya ki asmat daav pe lagi dekho..
insaan ki shaql mein ghumte bhediye dekho..

koi sazaa inke liye kafi nahi hai ae khuda..
koi nari ki izzat ki parwah karta mere khuda..
REKHA SACH KI AAPNE BAKHUB HAI KHICHI
BESHARM SARKAAR KI NAZERE NAHI HOTI NICHI


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