Lahjaa lahjaa tu aashiqaanaa hai.........mamta bajpai

by mamta bajpai on January 11, 2011, 04:31:42 AM
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chashm e bedaariyoN ne jaanaa hai
neeNd khwaaboN kaa aashiyaanaa hai

khul hee jaayegaa chhup naa paayegaa
raaz e ulfat ko kyaa chhupaanaa hai

hai abas raNg o noor kaa aalam
muflisee ne kahaaN ye jaanaa hai

baarisheN chaaNdnee kee hoN tum par
talkhee e dhoop humko paanaa hai

chaaNd soorat hai nek seerat bhee
lahjaa lahjaa tu aashiqaanaa hai

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: January 11, 2011, 04:34:30 AM »
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chashm e bedaariyoN ne jaanaa hai
neeNd khwaaboN kaa aashiyaanaa hai

khul hee jaayegaa chhup naa paayegaa
raaz e ulfat ko kyaa chhupaanaa hai

hai abas raNg o noor kaa aalam
muflisee ne kahaaN ye jaanaa hai

baarisheN chaaNdnee kee hoN tum par
talkhee e dhoop humko paanaa hai

chaaNd soorat hai nek seerat bhee
lahjaa lahjaa tu aashiqaanaa hai

Mamta Bajpai



Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Mamtaji..

Humesha Ki tarah Laajwaab!!!Har Ek A'shaar mein Samundar Si Gehrai hai..

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«Reply #2 on: January 11, 2011, 04:38:23 AM »
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Khwaish jee ! hameshaa kee tarah humaraa housla baRhane ke liye dil se mashkoor o mamnoon hooN ...
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«Reply #3 on: January 11, 2011, 05:00:08 AM »
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Mamta jee Namaskaar.
aapke pair chu kar saadar pranaam.
kitni gahrai se aapne ye nazraana pesh kiya hai.
wah kya khubb lafz die aapne
kisi ke pyar me nyochawar hone ki.
yun to aapke har peshkas dil ko chu jaati hai par isme ek alg hi baat hai.
behtareen se bhi umda peshkash.
khus rahnen aap.
sukriya
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«Reply #4 on: January 11, 2011, 05:02:08 AM »
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bht khoob mamta ji....
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«Reply #5 on: January 11, 2011, 07:49:47 AM »
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BADI shaandaar rachna Mamta-di..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

lo aapki he baat dusre shabdon mai kehti hoon....

Dil ki khwaisho ne samjha hai
Neend sapno ka theekaanaa hai

Ishq aur mohbbat kab chhupte hain
Ye raj tou aankhon se khulte hain

Haalaate jeb kab pyaar ne jaani hai
Pyaar mai Wo Rajaa aur Tu Raani hai

Are aur likhungi tou kahegi k meri poem ko kyu bigaad rahi hai....
Kya karu yaar mujhse masti kiye bina raha he nahi jaata...
Galat lage tou bataa dena...eraser hai mere pass.... Winking Winking Winking


chashm e bedaariyoN ne jaanaa hai
neeNd khwaaboN kaa aashiyaanaa hai

khul hee jaayegaa chhup naa paayegaa
raaz e ulfat ko kyaa chhupaanaa hai

hai abas raNg o noor kaa aalam
muflisee ne kahaaN ye jaanaa hai

baarisheN chaaNdnee kee hoN tum par
talkhee e dhoop humko paanaa hai

chaaNd soorat hai nek seerat bhee
lahjaa lahjaa tu aashiqaanaa hai

Mamta Bajpai

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«Reply #6 on: January 11, 2011, 12:37:20 PM »
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अच्छी ग़ज़ल|सुन्दर एवं कोमल भावाभिव्यक्ति|बधाई|
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«Reply #7 on: January 11, 2011, 02:26:11 PM »
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Mamtaa Jee Aadaab!

Kia baat hai Mamtaa jee Masha Allah..
Behad umdaa aur rawaaN dawaN gazal se
Nawaaza hai aapne.....

kia kaheN tarif kareN aisa bhi kuch rakha kijiye..

Behad umaa khayaal aur behad umdaa adaygii Usual Smile

Kalaam par phir aane ki koshish kareNge..
Daad o mubarakbad kabool kijiye..

Likhati rahiye 
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile         



chashm e bedaariyoN ne jaanaa hai
neeNd khwaaboN kaa aashiyaanaa hai

khul hee jaayegaa chhup naa paayegaa
raaz e ulfat ko kyaa chhupaanaa hai

hai abas raNg o noor kaa aalam
muflisee ne kahaaN ye jaanaa hai

baarisheN chaaNdnee kee hoN tum par
talkhee e dhoop humko paanaa hai

chaaNd soorat hai nek seerat bhee
lahjaa lahjaa tu aashiqaanaa hai

Mamta Bajpai

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«Reply #8 on: January 11, 2011, 08:23:29 PM »
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Subhash jee!
Namaskaar......
khush raheN....
humaare kalaam ko is darjaa izzat dene or pasand karne kaa behad shukriyaa..
dil me jazbaat uthe or kaaghaz par machal uthe....
houslaa afzai ka behad shukriyaa....
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«Reply #9 on: January 11, 2011, 10:23:44 PM »
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Shukriyaa Parvez saaheb!
aap jaise sukhanwar kee daad mil jaaye to humari koshish kaamyaab ho jaatee hai...
vagarnaa aisee bhee koi khaasiyat nahee....
ye aap kaa baddappan hai jo ek maamooli kalaam ko itani izzat de rahe haiN .....
baharhaal aap kee houslaa afzai humare liye dili masarrat kaa baais hai.....
behad shukriyaa saaheb!
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«Reply #10 on: January 11, 2011, 10:30:17 PM »
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Arun jee!
Pranaam,
aap ko jab bhee apni thread par dekhtee hooN to mann prasannataa se bhar jaataa hai or rachanaa ke saarthak hone kaa swtah hee aabhaas ho jaataa hai .
Aap se mili badhai humaari lekhani ko sudriRh banaatee hai...
aap ke is prernaadaayee kritya ke liye aap ko hridaya se dhanywaad deti hooN....
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«Reply #11 on: January 11, 2011, 10:34:26 PM »
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Ha hahahhahaha! waaaaaaaaaaah Koyal kyaa likhtee ho
sach me mazaa aa jaataa hai.....
achchhi khasi kavish ko do lines me hee dher kar deti ho ...
par achchha lagtaa hai....
tum se bahut kuchh seekhne ko miltaa hai...
yun hee likhtee raho
gudgudati raho...
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«Reply #12 on: January 11, 2011, 10:48:24 PM »
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Manzil jee behad shukriyaa!
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«Reply #13 on: January 11, 2011, 10:49:12 PM »
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wah wah.... mamtaji...khub likha hai..

daad kubul karen...
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«Reply #14 on: January 11, 2011, 10:52:07 PM »
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Shukriyaa Manjum jee! bahut bahtu shukriyaa!!!!
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