----- /// Maa O Meri Maa /// ----- Klaskar

by klaskar on June 28, 2010, 08:46:56 PM
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Ye poem maine mother's day pe likha tha. Main topic pe ab post kar raha hoon. Umeed hai aap sabko pasand aayegi...!!!


माँ ओ मेरी माँ, आज भी मेरी आँखों में आँसू आ जाते हैं,
जब तेरी आँचल के छाओं में गुज़रे दिन याद आते हैं,
काश मैं आज तेरी गोदी में कुछ पल के लिए सो पाता,
मेरे बचपन के तेरे साथ बीते वो सारे लम्हे याद आते हैं…



Kuch shabd usi maa ke naam.....!!!


maa O meri maa, haan tu hi to hai jisne mujhe janm diya tha,
haan tu hi to hai jisne mujhe bolna aur chalna sikhaya tha,
mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai wo sabse haseen jagah is duniya ki,
haan maa wo tera aanchal jisme mujhe chhipna achcha lagta tha,

maa O meri maa, kya tujhe yaad hai jab main chhota tha,
main har pal apni shararato se kaise tujhe satata tha,
aur tu har baar bas muskuraake pyaar se daant deti,
aur main har baar fir aake tere aanchal me chhip jaata tha,

maa o meri maa, kya tujhe yaad hai jab main chhota tha,
kisi se ladke ya papa se darke kya main karta tha,
tu mujhe samjhaati ki daro mat beta , lado mat beta,
par main har baar bas teri aanchal me chhip jaata tha,

maa O meri maa, kya tujhe yaad hai jab main bimaar padta tha,
main neendon me bhi bas tujhe yaad karta tha, tadapta tha,
aur tu apne neendein bhulaake bas mujhe sulaati thi,
tab teri aanchal ka saaya mere liye dawa ka kaam karta tha,

maa o meri maa, kya tujhe yaad hai jab main school jaata tha,
roz mitti aur kichad se apne kapde gande karke aata tha,
aur tu bas thoda sa mujhe daant ke mere kapko ko saaf kar deti,
aur har baar main maasoom banke tere aanchal me chip jaata tha,

maa O meri maa, kya tujhe yaad hai jab main college jaata tha,
main hostel se tujhe khoob saare khat likha karta tha,
aur tu mere khat padh ke har baar mujhe yaad karke ro deti,
aur jab main ghar aata aake tere aanchal me main so jaata tha,

maa o meri maa,  kya tujhe yaad hai jab tu ne mujhe kaam pe bheja tha,
mai bahut dur tere shahar se paise ki chaah me main aaya tha,
aur tu har pal bas ye duwa karti ki jahaan rahu mai khush rahun,
aur main tujhse dur hoke teri aanchal ko yaad karta tha,

ma O meri maa, kya tujhe yaad hai tujhse maine kya kaha tha,
mat ro meri maa tu , mat udaas ho tu, maine ye kaha tha,
bas kuch din ki baat hai, thoda kaam main nipta lu,
fir teri aanchal me main sounga , jisme mai pehle soya karta tha,

maa O meri maa, kya tu sun rahi hai jo main keh raha hoon,
maa tujhe yaad kar main aaj tanha mehsoos karta hoon,
maa mujhe tere aanchal ki khushboo yaad aati hai,
jis aanchal k tale main har lamha raha karta tha,

maa O meri maa, tu is jahaan ki sabse pyaari maa hai,
maa O meri maa, main khushkismat hoon jo main tera beta hoon,
maa O meri maa, main wapas aunga teri godi me aake sone,
maa O meri maa, main jald aaunga teri aanchal me fir se chhipne...


maa O meri maa, maa O meri maa....


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«Reply #1 on: June 28, 2010, 10:37:47 PM »
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Maa, Maa,.

Kitna Meetha Naam Hai Ye, Maa Ek Aisi Shaksiyat Hai Jis Ki Koi Misaal Nahi,.

Tabhi To {Allah Kareem} Ne Maa Ke Kadmo Mein Jannat Rakh Di,.

Aur Aapne Jis Taraah Bachpan Se Leke Jawaani Tak Ka Khissa Bayaan Kiya Hai Sab Touching Tha, Pardte Pardte Emotional Hogaya,.

Maa Ki Taraah Koi Bhi Kisi Ko Chah Nahi Sakta,.

Allah Kareem Sabke Maa Baap Ka Saaya Unke Bachchon Pe Rakhe Aameen,.
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«Reply #2 on: June 29, 2010, 06:13:09 AM »
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Bahut khoob Kapil
Maa to Maa hoti Hai
Kitna bhi karo kabhi bhi Maa ka karz koi adaa nahi kar sakta
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«Reply #3 on: June 30, 2010, 01:06:50 AM »
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   Very Nice and very touching creation Kapil ji.  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #4 on: June 30, 2010, 06:15:36 AM »
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Bahaut sentimental aur pyari poem likhi hai Kapil ji. Padhkar aisa laga jaise bachpan laut aaya ho. Bahot achhi lagi ye kavita. Daad hazir hai.
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«Reply #5 on: July 04, 2010, 12:56:20 AM »
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Azeem ji main kin shabdon me aapka shukriya ada karun soch raha hoon... bahut khushi hui jaanke ki hamari kavita aapke dil ko chhoo gayi... main tahe dil se aapka shukriya adaa karta hoon.... bahut bahut shukriya Azeem ji....!!!

Maa, Maa,.

Kitna Meetha Naam Hai Ye, Maa Ek Aisi Shaksiyat Hai Jis Ki Koi Misaal Nahi,.

Tabhi To {Allah Kareem} Ne Maa Ke Kadmo Mein Jannat Rakh Di,.

Aur Aapne Jis Taraah Bachpan Se Leke Jawaani Tak Ka Khissa Bayaan Kiya Hai Sab Touching Tha, Pardte Pardte Emotional Hogaya,.

Maa Ki Taraah Koi Bhi Kisi Ko Chah Nahi Sakta,.

Allah Kareem Sabke Maa Baap Ka Saaya Unke Bachchon Pe Rakhe Aameen,.
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«Reply #6 on: July 06, 2010, 05:25:03 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Bahut khoob Kapil
Maa to Maa hoti Hai
Kitna bhi karo kabhi bhi Maa ka karz koi adaa nahi kar sakta
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«Reply #7 on: July 06, 2010, 09:18:51 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Tamanna ji...!!!

   Very Nice and very touching creation Kapil ji.  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #8 on: July 06, 2010, 09:19:41 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Riyaz ji...!!!

Bahaut sentimental aur pyari poem likhi hai Kapil ji. Padhkar aisa laga jaise bachpan laut aaya ho. Bahot achhi lagi ye kavita. Daad hazir hai.
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«Reply #9 on: July 21, 2010, 12:41:11 AM »
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Nice Yaar grate poem Maa Sach Kahu Bhagvan Hote hain
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bahut bahut shukriya Santosh ji...!!!

Nice Yaar grate poem Maa Sach Kahu Bhagvan Hote hain
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«Reply #11 on: July 21, 2010, 10:12:05 AM »
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dil se likhi hui peshkash hai ye aapki.... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: July 21, 2010, 01:45:41 PM »
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ji bilkul sahi kahaa aapne... aur shukriya ...!!!

dil se likhi hui peshkash hai ye aapki.... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: August 18, 2010, 04:17:56 AM »
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bahut khoob  kapil ji...behetraeen likha he~

maa bolo to lagta he jaise alllah, ishwar, yeshu, guru sahab, sabhi ko ek sath yad kar liya hooo....

sorry bhagwan ji ...mujhe to maaf hi karna coz me apka nam lu na lu par mere liye mere parents aapse bhi pehle hoge~
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«Reply #14 on: August 18, 2010, 04:56:42 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Abhi ji....!!!

bahut khoob  kapil ji...behetraeen likha he~

maa bolo to lagta he jaise alllah, ishwar, yeshu, guru sahab, sabhi ko ek sath yad kar liya hooo....

sorry bhagwan ji ...mujhe to maaf hi karna coz me apka nam lu na lu par mere liye mere parents aapse bhi pehle hoge~
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