mai jaisa tha !!!

by sarfira on December 24, 2011, 06:58:47 AM
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mai jaisa tha wesa hi reh gaya
sar ke upar se magar paani, beh gaya Usual Smile

bade naazon se bithaya tha palkon par jise
chor gaya saath whi aur, mai dekhta reh gaya sad5

imaan ki kadar nhi daulat ke pujaari sab
kaisi hai ye bhookh,beth akele yhi sochta reh gaya !

behadd narm tha vo kisi resham sa
seene se lagaya jab, shool sa chubhhta reh gaya tongue3

nazron ki hqeeqat chupata rha tha ab tak
alfazon ki karigari me,raaz-e-dil deh gya

tandra tooti jab, muskura utha
lo--jane anjane me ye kya kya,keh gaya tongue3
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«Reply #1 on: December 24, 2011, 07:02:51 AM »
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mai jaisa tha wesa hi reh gaya
sar ke upar se magar paani, beh gaya Usual Smile

bade naazon se bithaya tha palkon par jise
chor gaya saath whi aur, mai dekhta reh gaya sad5

imaan ki kadar nhi daulat ke pujaari sab
kaisi hai ye bhookh,beth akele yhi sochta reh gaya !

behadd narm tha vo kisi resham sa
seene se lagaya jab, shool sa chubhhta reh gaya tongue3


nazron ki hqeeqat chupata rha tha ab tak
alfazon ki karigari me,raaz-e-dil deh gya

tandra tooti jab, muskura utha
lo--jane anjane me ye kya kya,keh gaya tongue3


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«Reply #2 on: December 24, 2011, 07:51:14 AM »
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S FIraa Jee Aadaab!


Bahut khoob janab... achchi aur khub koshish rahi aapki..
Khayaal bhi khoob rahe aur bayaani bhi..

Sabhi ashaar khoob hai janab daad ..
Par yeH ashaar waqai behad khoob laga hume.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye..
Khuhs O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile



nazron ki hqeeqat chupata rha tha ab tak
alfazon ki karigari me,raaz-e-dil deh gya
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«Reply #3 on: December 24, 2011, 10:46:06 AM »
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Bahut khoob sarfira ji
Dil se daad
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«Reply #4 on: December 25, 2011, 12:20:16 AM »
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mai jaisa tha wesa hi reh gaya
sar ke upar se magar paani, beh gaya Usual Smile

bade naazon se bithaya tha palkon par jise
chor gaya saath whi aur, mai dekhta reh gaya sad5

imaan ki kadar nhi daulat ke pujaari sab
kaisi hai ye bhookh,beth akele yhi sochta reh gaya !

behadd narm tha vo kisi resham sa
seene se lagaya jab, shool sa chubhhta reh gaya tongue3

nazron ki hqeeqat chupata rha tha ab tak
alfazon ki karigari me,raaz-e-dil deh gya

tandra tooti jab, muskura utha
lo--jane anjane me ye kya kya,keh gaya tongue3
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«Reply #5 on: December 25, 2011, 11:30:54 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: January 03, 2012, 08:44:13 AM »
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mai jaisa tha wesa hi reh gaya
sar ke upar se magar paani, beh gaya Usual Smile

bade naazon se bithaya tha palkon par jise
chor gaya saath whi aur, mai dekhta reh gaya sad5

imaan ki kadar nhi daulat ke pujaari sab
kaisi hai ye bhookh,beth akele yhi sochta reh gaya !

behadd narm tha vo kisi resham sa
seene se lagaya jab, shool sa chubhhta reh gaya tongue3

nazron ki hqeeqat chupata rha tha ab tak
alfazon ki karigari me,raaz-e-dil deh gya

tandra tooti jab, muskura utha
lo--jane anjane me ye kya kya,keh gaya tongue3



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