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*KasaK*....Dil Ki

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Aaj na jane kyun ek anjana sa dard dil me utha..kyun pata nahin ...aur kuch alfaaz apne aap hi likhti chali gai...
keyboard pe ungliyan chal rahi thi and man me kuch feelings...aur main likhti gai...
jab use khudne padha to ek nai kavita mere saamne thi...
padhkar mujhe bhi alag sa ehsaas hua k ye kyun kar likhi...
shayad ek maa k dil ki baat ...
yaa khwaish ji ki uss poem ka asar jo unhone likhi thi 2 din pehle..
khair wo yahan pesh karti hun bataiyega kaisi hai....

<>* Meri Bachchii*<>

Meri bachhci meri gudiya meri aankhon ka taara hai tu
Mere jism me jo palta raha wo mera hi ansh hai tu

Tujhe paaya jis pal maine apne jism k ehsason me
Uss pal mere rom rom me khushi banke bahi thi tu

Tere liye hi sapne sajaye maine apni har ek raaton me
Sajaungi sanwarungi main tujhe apne hi haathon se

Kitne rang birange kapde aur kitni hi tujh jaisi gudiya
Laaungi aur behlaungi main tujhe nit naye khilono se

Tere rup me maine paaya tha apna ek naya jeewan
Sapne ab main karungi pure socha tha maine pal pal me

Har lamha main aur tere papa bas yehi socha karte the
Kaisi hogi wo raaj dulari jiske sapne hum buna karte the

Ek hawa ka jhonka aaya le gaya wo har sapne sang apne
Ek jhatke se tut gaya har rishta mera mere sapne se

Aaj tu nahin hai sath mere reh gai bas kuch yaadein aur sapne
khokar tujhe ab meri laadli kuch na bacha mere jeewan me

Byaah k tujhe karti paraya tab bhi ek sukun to hota
Tu nazar k saamne hoti ek raunak hoti mere jeewan me

Aaj kyun bhagwaan ne mujhe aisa ye din dikhlaya hai
Tu nirjeev padi hai mere saamne aur maine na ashk bahaya hai


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thinkhattk

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«Reply #1 on: August 28, 2010, 09:50:23 AM »

no words.......

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«Reply #2 on: August 28, 2010, 09:53:23 AM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 28, 2010, 09:47:06 AM

EK MAA KO SALAAM .....MINDBLOWING KASAK JI....NO WORD TO AAPRECIATE YOUR POEM


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«Reply #3 on: August 28, 2010, 09:55:53 AM »

Quote from: thinkhattk on August 28, 2010, 09:50:23 AM

no words.......

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thnx dev...tumne pasand ki ..bht tnsd thi likhne k baad....


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«Reply #4 on: August 28, 2010, 09:59:34 AM »

Anamika-di kya ye sachi ghatna par aadhaarit hai ya kori kalpana.....bahut touching hai....ander se hillaa deti hai....
Kalpana hai tou dukh bhari kyu...kyu di....
Last 8 lines kyu....kyu usse mujh jitna bada nahi hone diya...
kyu usse jeevan k rang nahi dekhne diye....kyu kyu kyuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 28, 2010, 09:47:06 AM


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«Reply #5 on: August 28, 2010, 10:03:01 AM »

koyal.....ye ghatna mere sath nahin hui...lekin kahin hui hai...kahan mujhe nahin pata..maine kyun likhi mujhe nahin pata..end aisa kyun i dont no........


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«Reply #6 on: August 28, 2010, 10:08:23 AM »

Rulaati ho aur kehti ho I don't know.... crybaby2


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«Reply #7 on: August 28, 2010, 10:47:19 AM »

Itni boo.dhi ho gai hai Anamika
Kahti hai pata nahi kya hai likha
Karti hain ye bujurgon ki tarah baat
Deti hai achchhe achchhe kaviyon ko maat

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Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne


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«Reply #8 on: August 28, 2010, 11:02:57 AM »

sir ji na jane ye kya likha
na jane maine ye kyun likha
ab tak uljhi hun main iss sawal me
ye dard mujhe kahan se mila

shukriya sir ji......aaj lag raha sach me pagal ho gai hun...


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kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

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«Reply #9 on: August 28, 2010, 01:10:23 PM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 28, 2010, 11:02:57 AM

shukriya sir ji......aaj lag raha sach me pagal ho gai hun...

No doubt at all... sad5


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«Reply #10 on: August 28, 2010, 01:14:06 PM »

wahhhhhhhh diiiiiiiiiiiiii sach me aaj tumne sabit kar diya ki har ladki ke andar dabi mamta agar bahar aa jaye to sailaab aajata hai

dekho tumhari is mamta ne sabko askon se sarabor kar diya

pata hai di har dil me sachi kasak yahi hoti hai "Dard"
har dil me hota hai bas kuch isko samjh jaty hai kuch samjh ke bhi anjaane rah jaty hai

diiiiiiiiii aap ki is kavita ko padhkar aaj mujhe kuch bolne ki jarurat nahi hai
ye har baat ka jawab b khud deti hai aur fir aap to mahaan ho na diiiiiii

kyonki nari shakti hai , nari maa hai , naari mahaan hai ,. nari se bana ye sansar hai , is liye he nari tujhe mera namashkaar hai


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«Reply #11 on: August 28, 2010, 01:15:45 PM »

feelings of pain for kid........

kuch baate jo salooo se dil me dabi hoti he kuch isi tarah bahar aa jati he......dard ...pyar....dar........sab eksath.....

beautiful presentation ksask ji.....

this is not a poetry post this is feelings post....

hats off


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«Reply #12 on: August 28, 2010, 05:14:09 PM »

Kya Kahoon!!!!!!

Har lafz Apne Hisse Ki Kahani keh Raha Tha..

Anamika Ji, Agar Yeh Kavita Sirf Ek kalpana Hai To Iss Kavita Ka Anth Itna Dardnaak Kyon..Kuch Baatein to Aise thi jaise Dil Se nikal Kar Kalam Par Utri Ho.Bas ek sawaal Hai,Kya Yeh Kavita Sach Mein sirf Ek Kalpana Hai???


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«Reply #13 on: August 28, 2010, 05:49:16 PM »

Quote from: klaskar on August 28, 2010, 01:10:23 PM

No doubt at all... sad5

sahi kaha kapil...aaj to sahi me daura pada hai


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«Reply #14 on: August 28, 2010, 05:50:06 PM »

Quote from: Rahi2001 on August 28, 2010, 01:14:06 PM

bhai ..kuch baaton pe ap kuch nahin keh sakte..wahan khamoshi har baat keh deyi hai.......


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