qaabil-----------------------MARHOOM BAHAYAAT

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                          qareeb   aag   ke   jaao  to  jaanein!
                          apni  ta'ab  se   jalaao  to  jaanein!

                          bhare  pait hansna  sabhi jaante hain!
                          fakaa-kashi mein muskuraao to jaanein!

                          honge daave tere mazboot bahut aashiq!
                          ghulaam  dil  ko  banaao  to  jaanein!

                          qaabliyat  karaamat ki rakhte  ho to !
                          saraab  se   paani  le aao to jaanein!

                          hai dard'MARHOOM' tere kalaam mein gar!
                          kisi  patther  ko  rulaao  to  jaanein!



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«Reply #1 on: February 24, 2013, 11:45:53 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: February 25, 2013, 12:49:23 AM »
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                          qareeb   aag   ke   jaao  to  jaanein!
                          apni  ta'ab  se   jalaao  to  jaanein!

                          bhare  pait hansna  sabhi jaante hain!
                          fakaa-kashi mein muskuraao to jaanein!

                          honge daave tere mazboot bahut aashiq!
                          ghulaam  dil  ko  banaao  to  jaanein!

                          qaabliyat  karaamat ki rakhte  ho to !
                          saraab  se   paani  le aao to jaanein!

                          hai dard'MARHOOM' tere kalaam mein gar!
                          kisi  patther  ko  rulaao  to  jaanein!



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MB sahab
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sabhi ashaar behad lajawaaab

janaab aapne to tarsa dia tha apni shayri ke lie
aate rhie
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miss krte hain aapko
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«Reply #3 on: February 25, 2013, 01:43:54 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: February 25, 2013, 03:12:11 AM »
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waah MB saheb . bahut khubsurat ghazal likhi hai.
har sher eik open challenge  jaisa  lag raha hai.
khubsurat radeef dhundhi hai.bahut bahut mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #5 on: February 25, 2013, 03:16:26 AM »
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                          qareeb   aag   ke   jaao  to  jaanein!
                          apni  ta'ab  se   jalaao  to  jaanein!

                          bhare  pait hansna  sabhi jaante hain!
                          fakaa-kashi mein muskuraao to jaanein!

                          honge daave tere mazboot bahut aashiq!
                          ghulaam  dil  ko  banaao  to  jaanein!


                          qaabliyat  karaamat ki rakhte  ho to !
                          saraab  se   paani  le aao to jaanein!

                          hai dard'MARHOOM' tere kalaam mein gar!
                          kisi  patther  ko  rulaao  to  jaanein!



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bahut khoob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bahut dino k baad aapka likha pada. bahut umda peshkash. bahut c daad.
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«Reply #6 on: February 25, 2013, 09:27:00 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: February 25, 2013, 10:08:35 AM »
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                          qareeb   aag   ke   jaao  to  jaanein!
                          apni  ta'ab  se   jalaao  to  jaanein!

                          bhare  pait hansna  sabhi jaante hain!
                          fakaa-kashi mein muskuraao to jaanein!

                          honge daave tere mazboot bahut aashiq!
                          ghulaam  dil  ko  banaao  to  jaanein!

                          qaabliyat  karaamat ki rakhte  ho to !
                          saraab  se   paani  le aao to jaanein!

                          hai dard'MARHOOM' tere kalaam mein gar!
                          kisi  patther  ko  rulaao  to  jaanein!



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Waah waah Marhoom Bahayaat saheb, bahut khoob kalaam kahi hai aapne, sabhi ash'aar achhe lage aur ye she'r to shaandaar raha:


HoNge daave tere mazboot bahut aashiq
Ghulaam   dil    ko    banaao    to   jaaneiN

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«Reply #8 on: February 25, 2013, 10:04:50 PM »
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bhut khub

thanku ,sir
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«Reply #9 on: February 26, 2013, 04:11:49 AM »
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waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Mb ji.. bahut bahut khoob.....!!!
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«Reply #10 on: February 26, 2013, 07:49:04 PM »
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Kya baat hai. aapko padhne ka mauka to kam hi milta hai. but it was really awesome.hamari dili mubarakbad ko qubool kare.
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«Reply #11 on: February 27, 2013, 11:13:49 PM »
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MB sahab
ganaab bht kamaal ki postlaayen hain aap
umdaa behad umdaa post
sabhi ashaar behad lajawaaab

janaab aapne to tarsa dia tha apni shayri ke lie
aate rhie
likhte rahie ji
miss krte hain aapko

thank you,sir
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«Reply #12 on: March 03, 2013, 05:05:42 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob

thank you,sir
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waah MB saheb . bahut khubsurat ghazal likhi hai.
har sher eik open challenge  jaisa  lag raha hai.
khubsurat radeef dhundhi hai.bahut bahut mubarakbaad.

thank you ,sir
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«Reply #14 on: March 05, 2013, 01:58:16 AM »
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bahut khoob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bahut dino k baad aapka likha pada. bahut umda peshkash. bahut c daad.

thank you ,ma'am
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