bechaargi...........MARHOOM BAHAYAAT

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                         aaye   zindagi  mein  marhale   kayi!
                         uspe   dushwariyon  ke zalzale  kayi!

                         khubsurat   dokhtar  jo khuda ne  di.
                         lagaate  rahe  chakkar manchale kayi!

                         hai sharara-e-hasad aag se bhi badaa.
                         ghirr  ke   ismein   ghar  jale  kai!

                         aaftaab-e-falak  sa  koi nahin yahaan.
                         saamne   iss   nigaah  ke  dhale  kai!

                         hua  jaata  hai  viraan  shajr aaj ye.
                         kabhi   ismein   MARHOOM   phale  kai!

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«Reply #1 on: December 23, 2012, 12:05:05 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: December 23, 2012, 02:12:40 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: December 23, 2012, 09:43:58 PM »
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hua  jaata  hai  viraan  shajr aaj ye.
kabhi   ismein   MARHOOM   phale  kai!

behatreen ghazal hai... ek se ek ashaar
Bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: December 23, 2012, 09:51:04 PM »
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Waah ji waah.
Khubsurat peshkash.
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«Reply #5 on: December 23, 2012, 09:52:24 PM »
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marhoom saahab, bahut umda, ahchi lagi aapki ghazal.... umeed karta hun aage v aap yuNhi likhte raheNge....
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«Reply #6 on: December 25, 2012, 02:08:02 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut bahut khoob

thank you ma'am
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«Reply #7 on: December 25, 2012, 03:47:36 PM »
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bahut khoob

thank you sir
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«Reply #8 on: December 27, 2012, 08:21:20 PM »
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hua  jaata  hai  viraan  shajr aaj ye.
kabhi   ismein   MARHOOM   phale  kai!

behatreen ghazal hai... ek se ek ashaar
Bahut khoob

thank you ,sir
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«Reply #9 on: December 28, 2012, 08:49:38 PM »
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Waah ji waah.
Khubsurat peshkash.

thank you ,sir
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«Reply #10 on: December 28, 2012, 08:53:54 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #11 on: December 29, 2012, 06:11:29 PM »
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marhoom saahab, bahut umda, ahchi lagi aapki ghazal.... umeed karta hun aage v aap yuNhi likhte raheNge....

thank you,sir
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«Reply #12 on: January 02, 2013, 03:47:03 PM »
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very nice

thank you,ma'am
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«Reply #13 on: January 02, 2013, 05:17:05 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
bahut badiya marhoom jee
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«Reply #14 on: January 03, 2013, 01:19:17 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause
bahut badiya marhoom jee

thank you ma,am
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