**Rang manch Hai ye Sansaar** RH

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Ek rang manch hai ye sansaar
Karta manush abhinay hajaar
Bana abhineta dohrata path harbaar
Yahi hai manush ka jeevan yaar
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«Reply #1 on: March 12, 2010, 11:58:07 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: March 13, 2010, 01:23:19 AM »
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Bahut achhi creation hai Rajesh ji. Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #5 on: March 16, 2010, 02:22:40 PM »
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Ek rang manch hai ye sansaar
Karta manush abhinay hajaar
Bana abhineta dohrata path harbaar
Yahi hai manush ka jeevan yaar

Bahut achchhi rachna Rajesh Harish ji...main bhi koshish karta hun apne ehsaas ko batane ki...

                Mujhko to ye sansaar ab bazaar sa lage,
                Har vyakti yahan pe khareedaar sa lage,
                Ieman bik chuka hai, chehre bujha bujha,
                Mujhko her aik saksh ab beemaar sa lage.!
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«Reply #6 on: March 16, 2010, 02:30:58 PM »
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Ek rang manch hai ye sansaar
Karta manush abhinay hajaar
Bana abhineta dohrata path harbaar
Yahi hai manush ka jeevan yaar



bahut khoob Rajesh ji.
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«Reply #7 on: March 16, 2010, 02:34:01 PM »
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Bahut achchhi rachna Rajesh Harish ji...main bhi koshish karta hun apne ehsaas ko batane ki...

                Mujhko to ye sansaar ab bazaar sa lage,
                Har vyakti yahan pe khareedaar sa lage,
                Ieman bik chuka hai, chehre bujha bujha,
                Mujhko her aik saksh ab beemaar sa lage.!


Waah!! Kya bat hai janaab!! shut pratishut sahi aur sateek baat ko kavita ka roop. Aainey mein dekha khud ko to vaakai laga ki beemaar hu.Aapki chaar panktiyon ne aaina dikha diya. bahut khoob.
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«Reply #8 on: March 16, 2010, 02:52:54 PM »
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Waah!! Kya bat hai janaab!! shut pratishut sahi aur sateek baat ko kavita ka roop. Aainey mein dekha khud ko to vaakai laga ki beemaar hu.Aapki chaar panktiyon ne aaina dikha diya. bahut khoob.
Prateek bhai Adab ka kaam samaj ko aaina dikhana bhi hota hai, khumar-e-ishq aur dard-e-judai mein ab jyada kuchh nahin bacha hai..wo zamana chala gaya...jadeed shayari ka load bahut hota hai, ehsaas ki jarurat hoti hai isliye loog uspar qalam nahin uthatey aap bhi kuchh likhen...Pasand farmaney aur hausla afzai ke liye aapka behad shukriya..
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«Reply #9 on: March 23, 2010, 06:04:26 AM »
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Bahut achchhi rachna Rajesh Harish ji...main bhi koshish karta hun apne ehsaas ko batane ki...

                Mujhko to ye sansaar ab bazaar sa lage,
                Har vyakti yahan pe khareedaar sa lage,
                Ieman bik chuka hai, chehre bujha bujha,
                Mujhko her aik saksh ab beemaar sa lage.!

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Aap Ne Bhi Bahut khoob Likha Hai Dr.Pandey Ji
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«Reply #10 on: March 23, 2010, 06:05:19 AM »
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bahut khoob Rajesh ji.


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