SHABD HUE SAMAPT

by bekarar on August 24, 2009, 12:38:11 PM
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vyangya baano ne bhed diya hriday ka har kona kona,
prasann sabha ko kar gaya, yun apmanit mera hona,
vivashta meri batane ko bas moun raha paryapt,
ashru ne kah di baat hriday ki, shabd hue samapt,


pratham milan ki prtikshit vela, samay gati bhi mand hui,
mrignayani ki kanchan kaya se, wak-shakti bhi band hui
na kathan hua na shravan hua, ik bhay sa tha agyaat,
nayno ne kah di baat nayan se, shabd hue samapt


bahoot garv tha mujhko apni manvta ki baaton par,
raha moun anyay dekh-kar, lanat mere haathon par
dhamaniyon me meri hui jaati thi kayarta si vyapt,
stambhit sa raha dekhta, kyun shabd hue samapt,

व्यंग्य बानो ने भेद दिया हृदय का हर कोना कोना,
प्रसन्न सभा को कर गया, यूँ अपमानित मेरा होना,
विवशता मेरी बताने को बस मौन रहा पर्याप्त,
अश्रु ने कह दी बात हृदय की, शब्द हुए समाप्त,


प्रथम मिलन की प्रतीक्षित वेला, समय गति भी मंद हुई,
मृग नयनि की कंचन काया से, वाक-शक्ति भी बंद हुई
ना कथन हुआ ना श्रवण हुआ, इक भय सा था अग्यात,
नयनो ने कह दी बात नयन से, शब्द हुए समाप्त


बहूत गर्व था मुझको अपनी मानवता की बातों पर,
रहा मौन अन्याय देख-कर, लानत मेरे हाथों पर
धमनियों मे मेरी हुई जाती थी कायरता सी व्याप्त,
स्तंभित सा रहा देखता, क्यूँ शब्द हुए समाप्त,
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«Reply #1 on: August 25, 2009, 02:22:25 AM »
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Wah wah Bekarar ji bahut khoob,really touching,beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: August 25, 2009, 06:10:53 PM »
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Hindi ke samandar main gota laga kar bekarar ji bade qeemti moti laye hain..  Applause  Applause
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«Reply #3 on: August 25, 2009, 08:42:05 PM »
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Teen alag alag situations ko aapne jis tarah joda hai.....taareef ke qaabil hai...Likhne ko bohot kuch hai aapki taareef main par 'shabd hue samaapt' !!

Bohot bohot khoob Sanjeev Ji...!  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: August 26, 2009, 05:30:15 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on August 25, 2009, 02:22:25 AM
Wah wah Bekarar ji bahut khoob,really touching,beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahooooooot hi shukriya madhu ji
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«Reply #5 on: August 26, 2009, 05:31:15 PM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Sanjeev Bro..

Yeh Kavita Kuch Hat Ke Thi...

bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: August 26, 2009, 05:32:29 PM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on August 25, 2009, 06:10:53 PM
Hindi ke samandar main gota laga kar bekarar ji bade qeemti moti laye hain..  Applause  Applause



Randeri sahab bas ek adna si koshish ki thi....aapko achcha laga..meri koshish kamyaab hui..shukriya dost
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«Reply #7 on: August 26, 2009, 05:36:47 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 25, 2009, 08:42:05 PM
Teen alag alag situations ko aapne jis tarah joda hai.....taareef ke qaabil hai...Likhne ko bohot kuch hai aapki taareef main par 'shabd hue samaapt' !!

Bohot bohot khoob Sanjeev Ji...!  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahoot shukriya talat,
aapne bakhoobi pahchana, maine un sthitiyon ko sametne ki koshish ki thi jab shabdon ka bhandaar khaali ho jata hai....ek sthiti par likhna abhi baaqi hai ban pada to jaroor likhunga....
aap har rachna ko itna dhyan se padhti hain aur sarahti hain ki manobal badh jaata hai dil se dhanywaad aapka
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«Reply #8 on: August 26, 2009, 05:38:27 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 26, 2009, 05:31:15 PM
Bahut bahut Khoob Sanjeev Bro..

Yeh Kavita Kuch kuch Hat Ke Thi...

bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahoot shukriya khwaish bro, aapne is kavita ko samay diya...humesha ki tarah bhai ka dil bhi rakha...  Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: August 26, 2009, 06:55:12 PM »
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wah wah wah bekaraar ji,, wah wah


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«Reply #10 on: September 05, 2009, 03:26:12 PM »
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shukriya jas bhai
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«Reply #11 on: September 13, 2009, 05:13:29 AM »
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Bahoot bahoot Khoob Sanjeev Ji.. Bahoot hi Umda Kalaam Hai.. bahoot Khoob!
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Quote from: Sophi on September 13, 2009, 05:13:29 AM
Bahoot bahoot Khoob Sanjeev Ji.. Bahoot hi Umda Kalaam Hai.. bahoot Khoob!
shukriya sophi...aapne ise pasand kiya...
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«Reply #13 on: February 08, 2010, 11:04:37 AM »
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Wah wah Bekarar ji badi achhi poem likhi hai aapne. Shandaar.
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Quote from: riyaz106 on February 08, 2010, 11:04:37 AM
Wah wah Bekarar ji badi achhi poem likhi hai aapne. Shandaar.
bhai riyaz aaj aapke comment padhe khushi hui ki ye rachna aapki najaron se gujri hai.....bahoot abhar
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