~*~ Thorra sa ro liya karo ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on November 19, 2011, 09:33:42 PM
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Logon ko kehte suna hai kay rona achi aadat nahin hai..
Mera view is'se alag hai..Mere khayal se, ashk ek naemat hai..
Issi khayal ko, lavz de raha hoon..
Ager ap rote nahin hai, toh ro kay dekhein..dil kitna halka mehsoos hota hai..


Kabhi kabhi tum bhi ro liya karo,
Duniya ki parwa na karte hue, tum bhi ro liya karo..

Ashk namkeen kyun hote hai kabhi socha hai,
Bas yunhi apne dard ko ankhon se baha diya karo,
Kabhi kabhi tum bhi, thorra sa, ro liya karo..

Apni ankhon main gehrayi rakha karo, vazan nahin,
Har sitam ko ashkon ka roop na diya karo,
Kabhi kabhi tum bhi, thorra sa, ro liya karo..

Rote hue koi dekh na le mujhe, yehi fikr hai sabki,
Toh barsaat main doob kay ankhon ko halka kiya karo,
Kabhi kabhi tum bhi, thorra sa, ro liya karo..

Darte ho ager duniya walon kay samne tootne se,
‘Khamosh’ ki tarha raaton ko, apne takiye ko gila kiya karo,
Ussi takiye se ati mahek main phir so liya karo,
Kabhi kabhi tum bhi, thorra sa, ro liya karo..

‘Khamosh’ kehta hai ashk bahaut badi naemat hai uss Rabb ki,
Khushi ho ya ghum, yeh saath hi rehte hai,
Meri tarha tum bhi inki qadar kiya karo,
Kabhi kabhi tum bhi, thorra sa, ro liya karo..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: November 20, 2011, 08:04:49 AM »
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bht achi baate kahi aapne dost--
rone par dil halka ho jata hai--

bahot kismat wala manta hun mai unn logo ko jo aansoo baha kar apna drd halka kar lete hain--coz yahan Sarfire jaise kuch logo ko rabb ki ye inayat naseeb nhi--

aapki post ko dili daad

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«Reply #2 on: November 20, 2011, 08:56:27 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: November 20, 2011, 01:58:51 PM »
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bht achi baate kahi aapne dost--
rone par dil halka ho jata hai--

bahot kismat wala manta hun mai unn logo ko jo aansoo baha kar apna drd halka kar lete hain--coz yahan Sarfire jaise kuch logo ko rabb ki ye inayat naseeb nhi--

aapki post ko dili daad

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Sahi kaha..Kayi ko yeh naemat hasil nahin mager kayi aise hai jinhe haasil hai mager qadr nahin karte..
Khair, Apka teh teh dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: November 20, 2011, 03:48:14 PM »
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Logon ko kehte suna hai kay rona achi aadat nahin hai..
Mera view is'se alag hai..Mere khayal se, ashk ek naemat hai..
Issi khayal ko, lavz de raha hoon..
Ager ap rote nahin hai, toh ro kay dekhein..dil kitna halka mehsoos hota hai..


Kabhi kabhi tum bhi ro liya karo,
Duniya ki parwa na karte hue, tum bhi ro liya karo..

Ashk namkeen kyun hote hai kabhi socha hai,
Bas yunhi apne dard ko ankhon se baha diya karo,
Kabhi kabhi tum bhi, thorra sa, ro liya karo..

Apni ankhon main gehrayi rakha karo, vazan nahin,
Har sitam ko ashkon ka roop na diya karo,
Kabhi kabhi tum bhi, thorra sa, ro liya karo..

Rote hue koi dekh na le mujhe, yehi fikr hai sabki,
Toh barsaat main doob kay ankhon ko halka kiya karo,
Kabhi kabhi tum bhi, thorra sa, ro liya karo..

Darte ho ager duniya walon kay samne tootne se,
‘Khamosh’ ki tarha raaton ko, apne takiye ko gila kiya karo,
Ussi takiye se ati mahek main phir so liya karo,
Kabhi kabhi tum bhi, thorra sa, ro liya karo..

‘Khamosh’ kehta hai ashk bahaut badi naemat hai uss Rabb ki,
Khushi ho ya ghum, yeh saath hi rehte hai,
Meri tarha tum bhi inki qadar kiya karo,
Kabhi kabhi tum bhi, thorra sa, ro liya karo..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Bahut Bahut Khoob Dost Rahim!!!

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Dost Rona Bhi Do Kisam Ka Hota Hai..Ek Rona Ke Jab Dard Itna Ho Ke Mann Ko Halka Karne ke lIye Ro Liya..Aur Ek Rona Jo Apni Taqdeer,APni Buri kismat Ka Rona..Humesha Ka Rona Kamzori Keh Laati Hai..
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«Reply #5 on: November 20, 2011, 06:05:57 PM »
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Teh teh dil se shukriya Pritam jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #6 on: November 20, 2011, 06:45:02 PM »
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luvly creation rahim......
Sahi kaha tmne na rone se kahi behtar hai ro lena....
Nice thoughts on a nyc subject....
Vry nyc...
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Dost Rahim!!!

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Dost Rona Bhi Do Kisam Ka Hota Hai..Ek Rona Ke Jab Dard Itna Ho Ke Mann Ko Halka Karne ke lIye Ro Liya..Aur Ek Rona Jo Apni Taqdeer,APni Buri kismat Ka Rona..Humesha Ka Rona Kamzori Keh Laati Hai..

Jee bilkul dost, Har baar ka rona, insaan ko kamzor kar deta hai..Lachar bana deta hai..
Haan kabhi kabhi ro lena achi aadat hai..
Teh teh dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #8 on: November 21, 2011, 02:32:34 AM »
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thori see pee lia karo
kuch dayr jee lia karo
ronay ka koi faida
palkoan ko see lia karo!!
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luvly creation rahim......
Sahi kaha tmne na rone se kahi behtar hai ro lena....
Nice thoughts on a nyc subject....
Vry nyc...
Priya di,
Apka teh teh dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #10 on: November 26, 2011, 07:47:10 PM »
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BAhut Khoob Likha Hai Rahim ji
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«Reply #11 on: November 27, 2011, 02:29:46 PM »
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BAhut Khoob Likha Hai Rahim ji
Naice thoughts Applause Applause Applause
Teh teh dil se shukriya Kash jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #12 on: November 27, 2011, 07:32:24 PM »
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Rahim Mere Bhaiiiiiiii.. Yaaaaaaar aaj aapko Bahut dino baad Padha... Padh kar dil Ko sukoon sa mehsoos hua.. aapke lafz seedhe dil par asar karte hain.. Humesha Ki tarah Umda aur Lajawab peshkash hai bhai.. Applause Applause Applause


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«Reply #13 on: November 27, 2011, 09:21:30 PM »
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bahut sahi kha aapne Rahim...ashqon k saath dil ka dard bhi beh jaata hai....
jitni taarif kare utni kam hai aapki nazm ki..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause.....
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«Reply #14 on: November 27, 2011, 09:30:35 PM »
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rahim, ji bahut khoob likha hai.
kabhi 2 to ro liya karo.
kabhi 2 kya agar koi ashaq ponchhnewala ho roj ro lenge.
Hum bhi apne ghamon ko ashaquon se dho lenge,
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