tum sitam aur karo

by bekarar on October 19, 2005, 05:30:51 AM
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«Reply #30 on: June 30, 2008, 02:39:53 PM »
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jo hua, jaise hua, kyun hua, kis liye hua
umarbhar ke sawal hai, inka jawab kab, kaha hua???
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«Reply #31 on: July 14, 2008, 08:00:33 AM »
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Wade ke liye mit jaane ka housla tha kabhi,
Aaj kai jhoothe waadon ka mai gunahgaar hun,
Phle kisi ki aankh me aansoo na dekhe jaate the,
Ab to kai nam aankhon ka mai jimmedaar hun,
Aaj laga hun sochne,
kya ab bhi mai insaan hun,

chalaki makkari sikhi, bholapan ganwaya,
us kho chuki masoomiyat ka intzaar hun,
Jin buri aadaton ke mai khilaaf tha,
Aaj unhi sab buraiyon ka mai shikaar hun,
Aaj laga hun sochne,
kya ab bhi mai insaan hun,

Pahle dhadhak jaati thi jo kisi shokh ko dekhkar,
Ab uski sirf chingaari ka, mai talabagaar hun,
sab paane ki chah me sab kuch luta gaya,
unhi gumon ka bawandar hun, ek goobar hun
Aaj laga hun sochne
kya ab bhi mai insaan hun,
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«Reply #32 on: July 14, 2008, 08:09:07 AM »
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khoob likha hai bekarar ji.. Thumbs UP
 
Nice lines pooja .. happy9
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«Reply #33 on: July 14, 2008, 09:20:01 AM »
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wowww bhaiya bahot khoob..main yeh thread abhi abhi dekh rahi ..
pooja di aur sab bhi bahot hi acha likhe...
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«Reply #34 on: July 14, 2008, 09:58:49 AM »
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shukriya honey ji...

punam.....der aaye durust aaaye.....par aaye to sahi....
thanks
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«Reply #35 on: July 14, 2008, 01:47:09 PM »
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Wade ke liye mit jaane ka housla tha kabhi,
Aaj kai jhoothe waadon ka mai gunahgaar hun,
Phle kisi ki aankh me aansoo na dekhe jaate the,
Ab to kai nam aankhon ka mai jimmedaar hun,
Aaj laga hun sochne,
kya ab bhi mai insaan hun,

chalaki makkari sikhi, bholapan ganwaya,
us kho chuki masoomiyat ka intzaar hun,
Jin buri aadaton ke mai khilaaf tha,
Aaj unhi sab buraiyon ka mai ghulaam hun,
Aaj laga hun sochne,
kya ab bhi mai insaan hun,

Pahle dhadhak jaati thi jo kisi shokh ko dekhkar,
Ab uski sirf chingaari ka, mai talabagaar hun,
sab paane ki chah me sab kuch luta gaya,
unhi gumon ka bawandar hun, ek goobar hun
Aaj laga hun sochne
kya ab bhi mai insaan hun,

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BAhoot khoob Sanjeev!! ek ek line bhawnao se bhari hui.. bahootachi kavita ki rachna ki hai apne...

Good work!!
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«Reply #36 on: July 17, 2008, 03:50:20 AM »
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dhanywaad pooja ji aate rahiye aur humaara housala badhate rahen..
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«Reply #37 on: July 17, 2008, 04:16:25 AM »
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bekarar ji,

aapki jama-poonji kahan kahan chupi hui he....aapke chupaye khajaano  ki raahe dikhaate rahiye...lootaron ko aur kya chaiye!
jo nivesh aap ne kuch varsh purv kiya thaa...aaj bhee rasiley ful de rahe ha...sochiye..neev kitni majboot hein!
behtareen.

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«Reply #38 on: July 17, 2008, 04:22:40 AM »
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prateek ji,
aap logon ka saath hota hai to dil ka gubaar shayri me nikal hi aata hai.....dil se aapka shukrguzar hun ki aapne padha aur saraha....
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«Reply #39 on: July 17, 2008, 04:32:26 AM »
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ye saaz ka nahi saazinde ka kasoor hai,
kisi ne samn bandha isi saaz se,
kisi ne mahfilen barbaad kee.....
main woh jaam hu,nahi jo teri aankhon se tapatka
haan barbaad hu,jo raha tere pyale se sada chalakta
tera hriday thaa meri manzil,kaash main waha mehkta
pahucha nahi adhron tuk bhee tere,seene mein kya utarta!

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«Reply #40 on: July 17, 2008, 04:48:46 AM »
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ab wafa ki umeed tumse bhi nahi rahi,
betarah se pee hai aaj, aur surur taq nahi...
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«Reply #41 on: July 17, 2008, 06:11:59 AM »
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bohut khooob bekarar ji and nice reply pooja and harsh ji

sitamgar hai wo par apna hai wo
jhoota sahi par apna sapna hai wo
karein chahe dillagi wo jamane se umrabhar
haq hai ab bhi ye uska jo mera dil dukhata hai wo
baarish ki bundein jab padti hain tan par
mujhe ab bhi yaad aa jaata hai wo
dur hokar bhi wo mujhse juda ho na saka
har lamha apni maujudgi ka ehsaas dilata hai wo
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«Reply #42 on: July 22, 2008, 06:09:04 AM »
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bohut khooob bekarar ji and nice reply pooja and harsh ji

sitamgar hai wo par apna hai wo
jhoota sahi par apna sapna hai wo
karein chahe dillagi wo jamane se umrabhar
haq hai ab bhi ye uska jo mera dil dukhata hai wo
baarish ki bundein jab padti hain tan par
mujhe ab bhi yaad aa jaata hai wo
dur hokar bhi wo mujhse juda ho na saka
har lamha apni maujudgi ka ehsaas dilata hai wo


shukriya bhawna ji...aur behad achcha likha aapne bhi....
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«Reply #43 on: July 22, 2008, 06:19:16 AM »
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thnx bekarar ji
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«Reply #44 on: July 22, 2008, 06:30:51 AM »
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jis daaman ne bachaya hawaon se usake wazood ko,
chirag ne usi daman ko khaak kar daala,

armano ke mahal dhahaye,umeedon ko kuchla,
khwabon ko mere sab raakh kar daala,

kurede jakhm wo saare jo bharne lage the ab,
dil me jagah bana ke zigar chaak kar dala,

rone ke kai bahane diye, hansne ke sabhi cheene,
ye mere saath kaisa vyapaar kar daala,

ab na ranj hai koi na, khushi hi bachi hai,
tumne ek aur paththar taiyaar kar dala

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