tum sitam aur karo

by bekarar on October 19, 2005, 05:30:51 AM
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«Reply #60 on: July 30, 2008, 02:42:39 PM »
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Bahut khoobsurat... Bahut hi achha likha hai Sanjeev..





bahoot bahoot shukriya mahiya....meri likhi hui kisi poem par aapka comeent aa jaye to ek tasalli si ho jaati hai...isi tarah housala badhate rahen..

bahoot khoob Sanjeev ji,.. ek ek line achi likhi hai... magar yah do line.. jaise ansoo barso se ander chupe hue the.. jo ajj barsaat ka roop le gaye.. bahoot khob dil ko chu gai hai yah lines!!

Ab tak jhoothe ashq bahaye, jhoothi baaten karta aaya
Ab mere ye sachche aansoo, tere hain tere naam karta hun,

mujhe bhi ye sher bahoot jyaada pasand hai...aur sachcha bhi...housala fazai ka shukriya.....pooja ji..
Bahut khoob bekarar ji bahut accha likha hai..


aapne padha aur saraha..bahoot achcha laga....thanx roja ji
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«Reply #61 on: July 30, 2008, 02:51:49 PM »
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bohut khoob bekarar ji

kar dia aaj unko unke hawale
aaj har rishta tod aayi hoon mein

daag daaman pe tha jo laga mere
usi k kuche mei wo daaman chod aayi hoon mein

rahe mashroof chahe ta-umra rahe wo tanha
ye faisla khud us par chod aayi hoon mein

hasaya tha jis shaqs ne mujhe beinthaan kabhi
aaj uske aankho mei aansu chod aayi hoon mein

bana maanjhi tha wo meri zindgi ki kashti ka kabhi
ab gamo k tufaano mei use chod aayi hoon mein

shayad yahi saza bhi hai meri k rahoon mei uske bin
jise apni yaadon k hawale chod aayi hoon mein



bahoot khoob Bhawna!!
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«Reply #62 on: August 11, 2008, 07:55:17 PM »
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wo khush hai, wo aisa jatata to hai,
wo mahafil me sabako hansata to hai,
hansi mere hisse me aaye na aaye,
wo kam se kam mujhako, rulata to hai,


wo gairon ki mahfil sajata to hai,
wo mahfil me peeta-pilataa to hai,
jam mere hisse me aaya na aaye,
zahar apane hisse me aata to hai,

wo mahfil me sabako lubhata to hai,
jamane se milata-milata to hai,
wo dar pe mere aur aaye na aaye,
khwabon me aake jalata to hai,

meri bewafai ke jhute ye kisse,
suna hai jamane me sunata to hai,
mai khush hoon ke ab tak teri mahfilon me
mera nam tere lab pe aata to hai,


Khoob likha hai bohat dino baad mein aapki post
dekh rahi hun kamaal ka likha hai aapne dono post khoob hai jiju.. Thumbs UP Applause Applause
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«Reply #63 on: August 12, 2008, 02:26:51 PM »
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der aaye durust aaye ye kahawat aapke liye hi hai..honey ji...
dil se shukriya aapka
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«Reply #64 on: September 19, 2008, 11:34:25 AM »
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wo khush hai, wo aisa jatata to hai,
wo mahafil me sabako hansata to hai,
hansi mere hisse me aaye na aaye,
wo kam se kam mujhako, rulata to hai,


wo gairon ki mahfil sajata to hai,
wo mahfil me peeta-pilataa to hai,
jam mere hisse me aaya na aaye,
zahar apane hisse me aata to hai,

wo mahfil me sabako lubhata to hai,
jamane se milata-milata to hai,
wo dar pe mere aur aaye na aaye,
khwabon me aake jalata to hai,

meri bewafai ke jhute ye kisse,
suna hai jamane me sunata to hai,
mai khush hoon ke ab tak teri mahfilon me
mera nam tere lab pe aata to hai,


Bhai Sanjeev.....Kya baat he !!! aagaz itna jabardust hai To Intehaan ka aa'lam To Khuda hi jaanta hai Yaar..
Badhiya Lafz Badhiya ash'aar...
Aisi shayri To Mein To Kabhi Soch Hi nahi Sakta Likhna !!!
Kamaal To Pahele se hi suroo hai Matlub !!

Puranne Panne ko kuch Ultaya.,
Fir ye na puchhiye ki kya paya.,
akl-o-Hosh jo Na ganwaate To Kehte.,
"Bekarar"
Tum sa In aankhone Kahaan Hai Dekha....!!!!!

                  || Raza ||


Maaf Karna.....der aur badi der se aaya,,kuch toote foote alfaz bol diye.


 



 
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«Reply #65 on: September 21, 2008, 01:33:20 PM »
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shukriya bhai raza to akhir aap yahan aa hi gaye
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«Reply #66 on: August 27, 2010, 06:21:36 PM »
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wo khush hai, wo aisa jatata to hai,
wo mahafil me sabako hansata to hai,
hansi mere hisse me aaye na aaye,
wo kam se kam mujhako, rulata to hai,


wo gairon ki mahfil sajata to hai,
wo mahfil me peeta-pilataa to hai,
jam mere hisse me aaya na aaye,
zahar apane hisse me aata to hai,

wo mahfil me sabako lubhata to hai,
jamane se milata-milata to hai,
wo dar pe mere aur aaye na aaye,
khwabon me aake jalata to hai,

meri bewafai ke jhute ye kisse,
suna hai jamane me sunata to hai,
mai khush hoon ke ab tak teri mahfilon me
mera nam tere lab pe aata to hai,


Bahut bahut Aur bahut Khoob Sanjeev Bro..

Aapke Kya Kehne Bhai!!! Humesha Ki tarah Lajawaab

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«Reply #67 on: August 27, 2010, 06:36:50 PM »
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bht hi pyari nazm bekaraar ji...bht kuch sikhne milta hai aap sabka liha hua padhke...
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«Reply #68 on: August 29, 2010, 03:11:45 AM »
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Bahut bahut Aur bahut Khoob Sanjeev Bro..

Aapke Kya Kehne Bhai!!! Humesha Ki tarah Lajawaab

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khwaish bro bahooot bahoooot shukriya bhuli bisari hui un yadon ke aangan me aap khinch laye mujhe... icon_flower
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«Reply #69 on: August 29, 2010, 03:12:35 AM »
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bht hi pyari nazm bekaraar ji...bht kuch sikhne milta hai aap sabka liha hua padhke...
bahooooooot shukriya KDK ji...
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«Reply #70 on: August 31, 2010, 02:06:58 AM »
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wo khush hai, wo aisa jatata to hai,
wo mahafil me sabako hansata to hai,
hansi mere hisse me aaye na aaye,
wo kam se kam mujhako, rulata to hai,


wo gairon ki mahfil sajata to hai,
wo mahfil me peeta-pilataa to hai,
jam mere hisse me aaya na aaye,
zahar apane hisse me aata to hai,

wo mahfil me sabako lubhata to hai,
jamane se milata-milata to hai,
wo dar pe mere aur aaye na aaye,
khwabon me aake jalata to hai,

meri bewafai ke jhute ye kisse,
suna hai jamane me sunata to hai,
mai khush hoon ke ab tak teri mahfilon me
mera nam tere lab pe aata to hai,


Good one Bekarar Ji
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